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Makeover Monday #10 / 02.01.10

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  • Started 7 months ago by carolee
  • Latest reply from Alejandra Garza

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  1. carolee

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    Hellooooooo, Revisionaries!

    This week's revision activity requires you to get your notebook, your stack of paper scraps, your stash of napkins, receipts or movie stubs, your Blackberry or iPhone (whatever the heck you use to jot down poem ideas or dash off free writes). It is helpful if this source of text is NOT your computer or word processor because the first step involves typing. See, you can't type something that's already typed.

    So, flip through all your stuff and find some raw text (something you've authored). This could be a phrase, a few lines or a solid page of brainstorming. Type this text exactly as you've captured it long-hand. This now equals your original poem.

    Now, play with the original poem anyway you'd like. Turn it into a complete draft. Use some of the tricks we've already attempted in other weeks. Do anything you'd like to do polish it up. The polished version is now your new poem.

    This activity serves two purposes: (1) it gets you to develop an idea or a beginning or a concept into a poem and (2) it will, hopefully, give us a peek inside each others processes and open a wonderful dialog. Sounds like fun to me!

    When you are done writing, kindly do the following:

    1. Post a blog entry with the original poem, the new poem and anything you would like to say about your process.

    2. Leave the link* in this forum anytime this week, February 1-7.

    3. Visit the work of your fellow Revisionaries!

    *if you do not have a blog, feel free to post text directly into the forum.

    Posted 7 months ago #
  2. carolee

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    welcome to february, revisionaries! no time for hibernation. gotta write!

    here is my offering for the current activity:

    http://maureenpoetryblog.wordpress.com/2010/02/01/revisionary-work-week-10/

    join me!

    Posted 7 months ago #
  3. juliejordanscott

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    I love this! Ok, going through my journal for half written traces I often leave there.

    Posted 7 months ago #
  4. carolee

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    hi, julie! do it! do it!

    Posted 7 months ago #
  5. Hi, Carolee. I drank wine and didn't do this revision. I feel like my whole life is one big revision though. Does that count?

    Also, I haven't written anything other than that one long poem lately, and I have to revise that one offline.

    Posted 7 months ago #
  6. carolee

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    yes, it counts. :)

    as does the offline revising. :)

    thanks for stopping by. i think people are hibernating or something. or maybe everyone saw their shadows and went back inside. um, poets, we're SUPPOSED to have shadows. we shouldn't run from them.

    Posted 7 months ago #
  7. barbara_y

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    I'm here. Still have narrative wallpaper on the brain, but took a stab at something. I'm not sure what it is, though modern times

    Posted 7 months ago #
  8. I am very late on this prompt, but I actually did this kind of revision today without realizing it was last weeks Revisionaries task! Here it is: http://redpetals04.wordpress.com/2010/02/14/kitchen-window/

    Posted 6 months ago #

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