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Body #3: October Poetry Mini-Challenge

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  • Started 11 months ago by carolee
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  1. carolee

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    The place to post poems and links for your third body poem from the /amp/lt;a href=/amp/quot;http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/10/06/poetry-mini-challenge-a-new-body-of-work//amp/quot;/amp/gt;October Poetry Mini-Challenge/amp/lt;/a/amp/gt;.

    Posted 11 months ago #
  2. ACK! So much pressure when you're first to add your poem...

    http://radio-nowhere.org/nb/?p=238

    It's called "The Pivot"

    Posted 10 months ago #
  3. tielansari

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    Something my body needs... Vitamin D

    Posted 10 months ago #
  4. juliejordanscott

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    Today, My Mouth begged to be made into a poem....

    Garlic Rest

    Posted 10 months ago #
  5. Here is my Third Body Part.

    I'm behind on visiting you all. (Sorry.)

    Posted 10 months ago #
  6. I may run out of parts soon --

    http://another2doors.wordpress.com/2009/10/07/galileos-finger/

    Posted 10 months ago #
  7. BODY #3

    In Europe
    they pile them
    one on top of another
    generations deep

    In India
    they parade them
    through the streets
    then burn them up
    and sweep the ashes
    into the river

    In Louisiana
    the marching band
    makes a joyful noise
    to let St Peter know
    someone's on the way

    In Tibet
    it's a sky burial
    and the vultures
    get the good parts

    In one old time pueblo New Mexico
    they'd stuff you in a pot
    and throw you out
    with the trash

    At Lakeview Cemetery in Seattle
    twenty plumbers are buried
    in a common plot -
    a benny

    Sad little tombs
    for the unbaptized
    while Popes rot in splendor
    under the basillica's dome

    Lenin in Red Square
    Bonaparte in Paris
    Arafat beneath the rubble

    Mausoleums for the rich
    Potter's Fields for the poor
    Cryogenics for the unconvinced
    Rocket ships for the wacky few

    All dead, all gone, amen.

    Posted 10 months ago #
  8. Neil Reid

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    The Body #3 /amp/lt;a href=/amp/quot;http://bearlyaudible.wordpress.com/2009/10/06/rwp-mini-challenge-the-body/#body3/amp/quot; target=/amp/quot;_blank/amp/quot;/amp/gt;/amp/lt;strong/amp/gt;Some body does/amp/lt;/strong/amp/gt;/amp/lt;/a/amp/gt;

    Too too tired. My car's unsure it wants to work. Such a day!
    None the less...

    Posted 10 months ago #
  9. Jill

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    I am sorry to say, I am behind on reading everyone's also. Will catch up tonight!

    http://jillypoet.wordpress.com/2009/10/09/body-poem-2/

    Posted 10 months ago #
  10. Here's my offering for #3:

    http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2009/10/09/read-write-body-poem-3-feet/

    Posted 10 months ago #
  11. barbara_y

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    Another backstory poem. To stretch the prompt a bit, it does include references to feet (bees') and voice (poet's) Like Honey for Tea

    Posted 10 months ago #
  12. OPERATION SMILE #3
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    The cost of a smile

    My ledger:
    easy-glide original tape dental floss organic strawberry toothpaste tartar control soft fine toothbrush with grip handle 3pm visits to the dentist non-toxic cavity fillings flouride treatments x-rays retainers yellow rubber bands braces brace containers perfect smile for the high school photographer (for an extra fee, he can whiten her teeth for the yearbook)say cheese

    Her ledger:
    borrowing two months' worth of substandard income to pay for a bus to take her on a ten-hour trip through Ethiopia to an ad hoc clinic where more than a hundred children wait to learn who among them will be chosen for the dental operation, then having to tell her child that no, no smile for you today my love, no smile forever my darling, no smile

    Posted 10 months ago #
  13. Mallery

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    I haven't made it to poem 3 yet, but I would really like to finish this challenge. Work and family have kept me from writing but by Monday, expect some more! In the meantime, I'm enjoying reading all of yours when I grab a spare moment.

    Posted 10 months ago #
  14. carolee

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    i've been M.I.A.

    now i'm not.

    my #3 is here: http://caroleesherwood.wordpress.com/2009/10/10/poem-3-for-the-challenge/

    Posted 10 months ago #

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