by Tom Adam
How did your rhyming work out this week? Did you stick with a more traditional form or venture into more experimental areas? No matter how you had your poetry fun this week, drop your link in the comments section and share what you’ve written!
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by Tom Adam
Rhyme is one of the major elements of poetic form and is often the basis for the arrangement of stanzas. When used well, rhyme can bring cohesion and flow to a poem. Of course, when used poorly it can be sing-songy, predictable and distracting.
Your prompt this week is to indulge in rhyme … all kinds of rhyme. However you choose to do it, keep the same sounds rolling throughout the poem. If you could use a little guidance on bringing more rhyme into your poem this week, keep on reading. Otherwise stop back next Thursday to share your poetic endeavors for the week!
Most technically, rhyme is the repetition of a vowel and consonant sound at the end of a line. Loosely, and quite reasonably, we can call this end rhyme. Using that same repetition of a vowel and consonant sound but putting that within the line results in internal rhyme. Branching out into more loose definitions of rhyme, or at least closely related areas, we have alliteration (the repetition of a sound, either vowels or consonants at the beginning of the line), assonance (the repetition of vowel sounds contained within words) and consonance (the repetition of consonant sounds within words). For the most part, end rhyme is the type of rhyme used in the definition of poetic forms. The other rhymes are used to enhance the musicality of the language or for other effects.
Referring to the rhyming words themselves, these also can be broken into some loose (and oversimplified) categories:
- Masculine rhymes are monosyllabic rhymes occurring on the final and stressed syllable of a line (“deal” / “keel”).
- Feminine rhymes are disyllabic rhymes occurring with the rhyming syllable on the last stressed syllable of a line which has an unstressed syllable that is identical between the two words (“dealer” / “feeler”).
- Weak rhyme is rhyming that occurs on an unstressed syllable (“diver” / “favor”). As rhymes go, this is not a highly regarded technique.
- Near rhyme (often called slant rhyme) occurs when the rhyming syllables don’t exactly match. The vowel sounds may be identical or just very similar as can the consonant sounds (“fame” / “fain,” “port” / “part”).
Forms are often based on how the various rhymes cap each line. In many languages, rhyme comes so easily it’s almost harder to not rhyme, but in English, rhyme is more difficult to come by, with fewer, overall, words that rhyme.
The simplest form, usually a type of stanza, is the couplet — two rhyming lines (aa). If they happen to be lines of iambic pentameter, it is a heroic couplet, a favorite of Alexander Pope.
Tercets add a third line and more combinations, especially when the rhyme scheme stretches across stanzas. Something like aab or abb can work. These can be extended to aab ccd, aab bbc, aab ccb, abb acc, abb cbb. Dante popularized the terza rima in the Commedia. Terza Rima is a series of interlocking tercets: aba bcb cdc.
Quatrains, a common stanza length, have a very broad arrangement of rhyme schemes. Abab and abcb are common schemes and are used in the ballad. Brace rhyme (abba) can be extended as in the octave of a Petrarchan sonnet into a series of interlocking brace rhymes (abbaabba). Similar to the terza rima, the Spenserian sonnet rhymes abab bcbc cdcd ee.
Once at five or more lines, rhyme schemes tend to be extensions or combinations of those above. You can look at the limerick as a brace rhyme ending in a couplet (abbaa). Ababa (followed by bcbcb or cdcdc) is one way to lengthen the ballad’s alternating rhymes. At six lines abaaba, abcabc, abccab have all been used.
Once the stanzas start getting longer, it’s important to keep in mind the distance between a given pair of rhyme words. Rhymes immediately following each other are very close but can be overpowering, especially if they are primarily masculine rhymes. Longer and more interwoven rhymes have a greater tonal variety: abcabc has a feeling of progression, while brace rhymes give a compartmentalized feeling. Once they are more than four or five lines apart, the rhyming lines start to lose their effect because there is just too much distance between them. This can yield a very subtle sort of rhyme that can almost be a background music to the poem.
The real thing to bear in mind is that any given form is simply a traditional way of arranging the elements of prosody: the rhythm, the rhyme, certain shifts in meaning (e.g., the volta in a Petrarchan Sonnet, or the rhetorical couplet closing the Shakespearean sonnet). Most forms have had numerous shifts and changes over the years as poets have been adventurous in their application. That is the real tradition of formal poetry — the continual change and evolution of form.
by Tom Adam
How did you experiment with language this week? Did you play with sounds? Did you make new words? Were you inspired by the experimental poets who’ve come before you? No matter how you had your poetry fun this week, drop your link in the comments section and share what you’ve written!
Please, link back here in your posts, either with a hyperlink to Read Write Poem or by using the badge in your post. Sidebar links are great but it helps our “internet health” when you link in every post you contribute to the project. And please add “Read Write Poem” in your tags, if you don’t mind.
For the new folks: Please take a few moments to read the About pages, including our Copyrights page. If you have any questions about the project after reading through those pages, email us at info (at) readwritepoem (dot) org.
by Tom Adam
A lot of poetry is very serious and weighty and, because of that, sometimes it can be downright boring. Themes, metaphors and symbols are an integral part of poetry as an art, but poetry is also putting words or sounds together. Sometimes it is just putting them together!
Experimental poets have put meaning aside and have written pieces based on the intricate use of language alone, e.g. Tender Buttons by Gertrude Stein. (You can listen to Stein read some of her poems at UbuWeb Sound.) Others have felt that language itself wasn’t too big of a deal (Lewis Carrol’s “Jabberwocky“). And sometimes, mixing complete nonsense with a very strict form yields interesting results (such as the “double dactyl” developed by Hecht and Pascal, which you can read about in a little more detail here, including examples of the form).
Your prompt this week is to play with words and sounds. Write a poem that may or may not make sense. Make up words. Make up sounds (although that might be really hard to read). Delve into nonsense poetry. Delve into postmodernism, if that’s your thing. Let the story or the point or the theme or metaphors slip to the side this week. Play with language.
And come back next Thursday and Get Your Poem On.
Grrr. Late again. Oops.
by Tom Adam
So, we all want to know: how well has randomness worked for you this week? Which is, of course, only relevant if you did that prompt, and not some variation thereof. Maybe you were inspired by the image?
You know what? We don’t really care! If you were inspired by anything, please, share the poems that came of it! Leave a comment below with the link, or more than one comment with its own link. As you can see, we’re pretty flexible around here.
Then, throughout the week, come back and check out everyone else’s endeavors.
Please, link back here in your posts, either with a hyperlink to Read Write Poem or by using the badge in your post. Sidebar links are great but it helps our “internet health” when you link in every post you contribute to the project. And please add “Read Write Poem” in your tags, if you don’t mind.
For the new folks: Please take a few moments to read the About pages, including our Copyrights page. If you have any questions about the project after reading through those pages, email us at info (at) readwritepoem (dot) org.
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June 20, 2010 | 1:36 pmThe Read Write Poem NaPoWriMo Anthology is still in production. Selection, placement, layout and copyediting are taking longer than anticipated. Thank you for your patience. I hope to have the piece completed in July. For those who have emailed asking if they can be included, the May 7 deadline for submission of work stands. Those who met that deadline will be included. Please check the post on this site listing who I received submissions from by that date. If you submitted your work by the May 7 deadline in accordance with our guidelines and your name is not listed, send an email to info (at) readwritepoem (dot) org.
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April 24, 2010 | 12:05 pmIt’s the final week of the Read Write Poem NaPoWriMo Challenge! Just 7 days left. With that, a reminder that Read Write Poem will culminate with the anthology featuring work from those who complete the challenge. A post with details for submitting to the anthology will be published May 1. Be sure you remove any information from the site that you want preserved — such as group content and personal messages. Those elements of the site will be removed May 1 as well. The main site will remain up as an archive.
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In late May, an anthology featuring work from those who completed the Read Write Poem NaPoWriMo Challenge will be published here and on issuu.com.
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