read write goals? resolutions? are you crazy?

by the Read Write Poem Staff

It’s that time of year again, when many of us are reviewing the year that was and are looking forward to the year that will be. Some of us clean out closets, donate to favorite charities, watch all the movies possible in a 24-hours stretch or make a list of resolutions.

Join January over at her blog,  Poet Mom, where she talks about her process of evaluating her own writing life and setting goals for the year.

Have thoughts or comments? We’ll follow you over there. (Although you’re always welcome to leave them here, too. It will just be a cleaner back and forth discussion if you go to her blog.)

Do you find writing goals or resolutions helpful?

some assembly required: putting together your first poetry manuscript

by January O’Neil

This is it. You’ve spent years polishing your poems. You’ve shared them in workshops and at readings, even published a handful of your best work in a few journals. Now it’s time to tame those wild poems for your first manuscript. What now?

Assembling a full-length manuscript can be both challenging and exhilarating. It’s the culmination of months and years of hard work. And while the process may feel as if you’re attempting to solve a Rubik’s Cube, there’s nothing more satisfying than seeing the end result of your poetic “sweat equity.”

Start by organizing your poems by topics or related themes. Do your poems speak to you in a certain way? Do they work chronologically or through a persona’s voice? You should notice the emergence of a narrative arc, or a natural fit between and throughout the collection. Consider putting your strongest poems in the beginning and end of your collection, because it helps to frame the rest of the book, giving you a solid foundation to build upon.

… read more here, at Poet Mom, where January tells all the nitty-gritty details of forming a manuscript.

Have comments? We’ll follow you over to January’s post where you can talk all you want to her about the process she went through. (Your comments are always welcome here, too.) Tell us if you have created a manuscript, if you’re on your second or third or fourth. Have you been thinking about thinking about it? What are your biggest concerns? Your highest pleasures in seeing your work in ms. form!

report from dodge: what it’s like to attend the largest poetry festival in north america

by January O’Neil

First thing’s first: The Geraldine R. Dodge Poetry Festival is not the time to try and sell your manuscript, to network or to book your next gig (but I’m sure some level wheeling and dealing happens). This is not the time to bring every book you own by one poet to sign or, heaven forbid, sell their signed books on e-Bay (because that happens, too). But, if you’re looking for a long weekend filled with verse from emerging and established poets, then pull up a chair and sit next to me!

Held at the historic Waterloo Village in Stanhope, New Jersey, Dodge Poetry Festival Program began in as a series of poetry in-service days for New Jersey teachers and evolved into a biannual poetry festival in 1986. Today, the Dodge Poetry Festival is the largest poetry event in North America and has spawned many PBS specials, including two of my favorites: “The Language of Life” (1995), and Fooling with Words” (1999).

I have been making the six-hour trip, rain or shine (this time– rain!), to the Dodge Poetry Festival since 1996, and each festival I am privy to something special. The weekend has become a source of strength for me. Where else can I hear poets Chris Albani, Billy Collins, Lucille Clifton, Mark Doty, Beth Ann Fennelly, Robert Hass, Maxine Kumin, Joseph O. Legaspi, Patricia Smith, Franz Wright and Kevin Young in the same weekend? And where else will they take the time to explain how they wrote a particular poem, what kind of mood sparked those thoughts and how many revisions they made before publishing that poem?

For those who have never been, the festival is usually scheduled for the last weekend in September, Thursday through Sunday. The outside events are held in tents. The main stage tent holds somewhere between 3,000- to 5,000 people, while the smaller tents hold 200- to 500 people. No pressure to buy books, but there is a healthy collection to choose from.

There are no workshops here. Rather, there are simultaneous sessions featuring one-on-one talks on craft, as well as group talks on topics such as going public with private feelings, poetry and invention, poet as citizen, poetry and the lives of women, and poetry as disruptive seed. While you can attend all four days, Thursday readings focus on high school students, Friday highlights teachers and the teaching of poetry, and Saturday and Sunday is open for everyone. The evenings feature poetry samplers and music, where 20- to 30 poets read for five minutes each.

At this year’s festival, I was there from sunup to sundown, thoroughly impressed by the thoughtful, powerful conversations happening under the tents. The featured poets seemed genuinely happy that their works were well-received, so much so that many of them tried out new, unpublished poems. No egos here — at least any that I could detect. Sharon Olds read odes from an upcoming collection. Franz Wright and Naomi Shihab Nye shared new poems with the crowd. Thomas Sayers Ellis “dropped some knowledge” on the rain-soaked crowd. And Robert Hass read new poems about the death of his brother.

The topic that was on all of our minds was politics. Even in an idyllic setting such as Dodge, we didn’t leave our beliefs at the door. The questions in sessions soon turned to, “What is our response to the financial crisis, the U.S. political elections, etc.?” No clear-cut answers, unfortunately, other than to be true to ourselves as artists. We must respond each according to our gifts.

As I do every two years, I take the gifts of Dodge — the poetry, the rekindled friendships, my renewed commitment to be a disruptive seed — and bring it back to the every day. I have been to the well and feel excited and invigorated about the poetry to come.

Discussion ideas

  • Do you have access to poetry festivals? If so, do you go?
  • If not, would you?
  • Is there any way an online community can create opportunities like Dodge, or are there experiences that only flesh and blood can accomplish?

‘i, too, dislike it’: the art of revision

by January O’Neil

Revision: the bane of my poetic existence. I dislike it so much that I titled this post after the opening line of Marianne Moore’s “Poetry” — a poem which started out as 29 lines when it appeared in print in 1921, to a succinct four lines in the 1967 version.*

But the truth is most poets, including yours truly, try a number of times to articulate and refine a poem, even after it appears in print. Rarely is a poem written that doesn’t need a revision. It is part of the writing process, a deeper, indispensable part that requires more of us than the writing impulse. Revision is about finding your true voice.

Second drafts require a certain amount of objectivity, enthusiasm, and open mindedness. I have to leave my ego at the door, so to speak, when I rework a poem. I’m constantly asking, “Where does the poem begin?” “Who is doing what?” “Do I still enjoy the poem when read aloud?” I’ve been known to bury even the most promising drafts that just don’t work.

Ultimately, a poet has to learn to be true to that voice which has served him or her well in the past. How many of us have taught students or been in workshop situations with a participant who absolutely, positively resists fixing any part of their poems. It becomes something of a power struggle: Who decides what is good? How much revision is too much? Do I have permission to disagree? Can I cut it as a writer? Revision can bring out insecurities in the most seasoned of poets.

That being said, I encourage you to listen to your instincts when it comes to taking advice on revision. I’ve been on both ends of the discussion — instructor and student — so I understand the delicate balance between receiving comments and trusting my gut to improve a poem. A well-intentioned reader can impose his or her sensibilities on the poet’s work both positively and negatively. Sometimes the instinct to resist comes from what the poet instinctually recognizes as bad advice.

On those evenings when I find myself revising, I fall back on the following techniques to pull me through. Feel free to try some or all of these methods, but let go of any expectation that they will solve the problem. Think of this list as a skeleton key to unlock your mental block on revision.

  • Wait a week to revise a new poem. That’s enough time to gain perspective yet still have an interest in the subject matter.
  • Rewrite the poem completely. In his book, Triggering Town, Richard Hugo suggests rewriting a poem over again until it works.
  • Isolate each line. Take a fresh, line-by-line look at each word, syllable, and punctuation. Is it all working?
  • Read your poem aloud.
  • Change the point of view. Sometimes changing the perspective leads the poet and the poem down an unexpected path.
  • Write the poem out in prose.
  • Take scissors to your poem, if all else fails. Cut it up line by line to see if the poem is more than the sum of its parts.

Once I complete a poem, my first reaction is to move onto the next one. But I know that many of you enjoy the revision process. Why? I’m interested to learn your feelings on rewriting your poems. Do you love it or dislike it, too?

*Source, Modern American Poets: Their Voices and Visions by Robert DiYanni

napowrimo: mid-month check-up

by January O’Neil and Deb Scott

Thirty Poems in 30 days. How has that challenge been for you? Let us know what you’re doing.

As you cast about for yet one more inspiration, be sure to use the random prompts or previous prompts and share any tricks you use to get through the rough spots.

Are you writing American Sentences, haiku or prose poems? Are you trying new forms or going free verse all the way? Your ideas may help another struggling writer. And if you skip a day or two, don’t worry about it. The goal is to look back at all the bad poetry you’ve written. And maybe, just maybe, there’s a gem or two that you’ll expand into a draft. You’ll surprise yourself.

Those that have staked out a NaPoWriMo experience started out committed and enthusiastic. Out of 85 votes, folks said:

• I’m up for the challenge of daily writing. (59%, 50 Votes)
• What is this NaPoWriMo you speak of? (20%, 17 Votes)
• I can hardly wait for April Fool’s Day to start! (16%, 14 Votes)
• I like NaPoWriMo: I get lots of poems to work on through the year. (16%, 14 Votes)
• Is April here already? (14%, 12 Votes)
• Maybe, but I haven’t decided. (9%, 8 Votes)
• No way! (6%, 5 Votes)
• I said never again last year, but I am tempted to try it once more. (2%, 2 Votes)
• I would, but I am on a tropical island for most of April, without internet access. (1%, 1 Votes)
• I’m on the fence, but I’m leaning towards “no”. (1%, 1 Votes)

There’s a new poll that checks in with how you are doing, now that your taxes are behind you (nearly) and you are halfway home. (Ah, sweet May!)

And for those who aren’t doing NaPoWriMo, perhaps you have found a new approach to your writing, too, and isn’t that cool? This obsessive hoopla will be over soon, and we’ll all have a new bag of tricks and lots of ideas to work from and over!

There were a couple of nice inspiration ideas that we want to make sure aren’t lost. Sharon offered an intriguing list of ideas over at her blog Watermark, and Paisley told us about Easy Street Prompts .

We’ve tried to keep up with the roll call. But if you have been participating at Read Write Poem and haven’t seen your name up on the Participant page yet, please email us (see the “get involved” tab) and we’ll get you fixed up. It does take a while (we’re all volunteers!) so be patient, and keep writing poetry!

read write poem news

  • read write poem napowrimo anthology
    June 20, 2010 | 1:36 pm

    The Read Write Poem NaPoWriMo Anthology is still in production. Selection, placement, layout and copyediting are taking longer than anticipated. Thank you for your patience. I hope to have the piece completed in July. For those who have emailed asking if they can be included, the May 7 deadline for submission of work stands. Those who met that deadline will be included. Please check the post on this site listing who I received submissions from by that date. If you submitted your work by the May 7 deadline in accordance with our guidelines and your name is not listed, send an email to info (at) readwritepoem (dot) org.

  • read write poem napowrimo anthology
    May 5, 2010 | 3:09 pm

    Remember that Friday* is the deadline for submitting work to the Read Write Poem NaPoWriMo Anthology. Check out the guidelines for submission in the main column (to the left). On May 8, we’ll post a news item listing everyone we’ve received work from. If you submitted work and your name is not on that list, please let us know. Thanks!

    *I initially said “tomorrow,” but I meant to say “Friday.”

  • napowrimo congratulations, and a reminder
    April 24, 2010 | 12:05 pm

    It’s the final week of the Read Write Poem NaPoWriMo Challenge! Just 7 days left. With that, a reminder that Read Write Poem will culminate with the anthology featuring work from those who complete the challenge. A post with details for submitting to the anthology will be published May 1. Be sure you remove any information from the site that you want preserved — such as group content and personal messages. Those elements of the site will be removed May 1 as well. The main site will remain up as an archive.

  • ‘underlife’ tour at january gill o’neil’s blog
    April 20, 2010 | 8:11 pm

    January Gill O’Neil’s virtual book tour has moved to her site and is underway now. Check out the lineup at Poet Mom.

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