get the lead out: it’s noting, really: mark your calendars!

by Christine Swint

When I was in college I gained the reputation of being a poet of occasional verse, which is not to say I wrote only sometimes, but rather I wrote poems to mark specific events. If a friend were having a birthday, I’d write a poem about her, or in her honor. When the holidays rolled around, I’d write short poems to accompany gifts as hints to what the package contained.

Now that I’m older, I find myself returning to the custom of writing out of a desire to highlight significant moments in my life. The births of my sons, their rites of passage, the passing away of loved ones, and even the changing of seasons, both literally and figuratively. There is always a reason to write, if I think about it.

Below are a few examples of occasion poems you might want to work into your writing calendar. In your writer’s journal you could keep a list of friends whose birthdays you’d like to remember with a poem, upcoming weddings, anniversaries, historic dates, and times of year that have special meaning to you.

The trick is to find your own personal meaning in the occasion. As individuals, when we try to speak for everyone, we end up sounding like we’re writing greeting card poems. To write a universal poem, it’s important to reach inside for your own authentic way of viewing a person or an event.

  • Epithalamium, from the ancient Greek, meaning upon the bridal chamber, is a song in honor of a bride and groom. A beautiful example of a wedding song with a modern sensibility is epithalamium, by Matthew Rohrer. (You can also read Dana’s interview with Matthew Rohrer here.)
  • The elegy, from the ancient Greek elegos is a poem reflecting on life of someone who has died, the death of love, or on death and sorrow in general. It can also be a poem to mark the anniversary of a tragic event, such as Walt Whitman’s famous poem, When Lilac’s Last in the Dooryard Bloomed, written upon the assassination of Abraham Lincoln. In Christina Rossetti’s Dream Land, the narrator equates death of a friend with her eternal sleep.
  • Historical poems abound in English literature. Under the category of Labor Day on The Poetry Foundation there is The Factory, by Charles Simic, in which the narrator describes his time in an abandoned factory where workers once stood.

What sorts of occasions move you to write? Do you have any writing rituals that involve holidays, birthdays, weddings, or funerals? What about poets who are known for commemorating historical events? We’d love to hear your thoughts.

get the lead out: it’s noting, really: ekphrasis

by Christine Swint

Ekphrasis is an unusual looking word, one often bandied about in the world of poetry. The ancient Greek origin of ekphrasis simply meant any kind of description, but in contemporary times ekphrasis has become a literary or rhetorical device in which a writer describes a visual work of art. For our purposes, ekphrasis is a poem about a painting, sculpture, photograph, or even a film.

One of the most famous ekphrastic poems is John Keats’ “Ode on a Grecian Urn” (1819). The narrator contemplates an ancient urn, describing the scenes painted on it and compares the everlasting qualities of youth, beauty and love depicted there to the decay of humans as time passes.

Examples of contemporary ekphrasis can be found on the web. In April of 2007, Qarrstiluni published an ekphrastic issue. One of the poems that caught my eye was “Mark,” by Tall Girl, an interpretation of Nexus I and Nexus II by Marja-Leena Rathje.

Another oasis of ekphrasis is visual artist and poet Rick Mobb’s site, mine enemy grows older. Each week Rick posts an original painting for poets and storytellers to interpret. He also generously allows writers to post his paintings on their sites, and then gathers their work with links on his blog.

For examples of the kind of collaboration going on at Rick’s site, read Jo Hemmant’sAsherah“; “The Prayer of Bearmom,” by Ozymandiaz; “bird of happiness,” by paisley; and “What they said to him,” by Joyce Davis (aka Pepek the Assasin).

Even though I’m not a visual artist myself, photography and sculpture, really any kind of visual art, will stop me in my tracks. It’s fun to go to a museum with my journal, sit in front of a painting and write my impressions.

I’ve found inspiration recently in the surreal paintings of Giorgio De Chirico. Many poets, when acknowledging the source of their inspiration, include an epigraph after the title of the poem.

But where does a poet start when writing a poem as a description of a painting? Rick Mobb invites poets to go where the painting leads them, to tell the story that comes out of the images on the canvas.

In her article “Conventions of Ekphrasis,” Francois Lachance details different types of ekphrastic poems she has found. Some of the different responses she includes are poems in praise of a work of art, poems that give voice to a mute object in a painting, and poems that seem to criticize the painting, to say that the poet’s words are more immediate or transcendent than the static visual work.

I’ve always been a storyteller, much preferring fantasy to fact. When I look at a portrait, it’s fun to imagine what kind of life the subject led, without knowing any historic details about the actual person. But other poets enjoy sticking to the facts, to respond emotionally to the historic events depicted in a painting.

Whatever your reaction to a painting is, try jotting down your impressions. Maybe you’ll refer to your notebook later, and write an impressive, or, uh … impressionist poem.

get the lead out: it’s noting, really: quotable quotes

by Christine Swint

The soul should always stand ajar, ready to welcome the ecstatic experience.
– Emily Dickenson

Some people would raise their eyebrows and shake their heads to know that I mark up my books a lot as I read them. I guess it’s rude in a way, if you think about the next person who might pick up the book for a good read, but I can’t help it. I love to underline significant passages, even though I rarely review what I’ve underscored.

To remedy my lack of review, I’ve taken to keeping a list of memorable quotations, thoughts that ignite a response in me that needs to come out on paper. If an author’s words inspire me enough to underline them, maybe those lines warrant special treatment.

In his book The Art and Craft of Poetry, Michael J. Bugeja suggests using quotations as epigraphs, which he defines as “brief citations placed immediately above or below the title of your poem.” (Bugeja 11)

In his chapter about occasion poems, such as poems responding to specific events in history, Bugeja states that a descriptive epigraph, “even if only a date,” can “ground the reader in time or convey information that will overshadow, forebode, or otherwise color the reader’s perception of events.” (Bugeja 127)

A good example of the use of epigraph is Leilani Hall’s poem “Random Communication”. Hall begins with a dedication to her friend, Joyce Inman, and then follows with a quote in Spanish from Pablo Neruda’s poem, “Oda con un lamento.” Throughout the poem there are references to lines of poetry by Robert Creely, CD Wright, and reference material from the encyclopedia, all of which Hall cites in the notes section of her collection, Swimming the Witch. (If you missed Jessica’s review of Swimming the Witch, you can read it here.)

The Internet is a great source of quotations. Here’s a list to get you started:

The Quotations Page
Bartelby
Quoteland

Quoteworld
Brainyquote
Quotegarden
Cool Quotes

I’ll leave you with one of the recent quotes I’ve copied into my notebook, taken from Creative Meditation and Visualization by David Fontana. In describing how ancient Greek sculptors viewed their work he says, for  him, ” … the stone was ready to disclose the divine image, provided he could become one with the stone and allow himself to become the instrument for this magical transformation.” (Fontana 17)

Do you have a quote that has inspired you to write a poem? What are your thoughts about keeping track of quotes and referring to them as a source of inspiration? Have you ever written a poem that disagrees with another author’s thoughts? If you have a quote you’d like to share, write it in the comments section, and tell us your source.

Bugeja , Michael J. (1994). The Art and Craft of Poetry. Cincinnati: Writer’s Digest Books.

Fontana , David. (2007). Creative Meditation and Visualization. London: Watkins Publishing.

get the lead out: it’s noting, really: writing groups

by Christine Swint

If you are aware that you need to be brave, you are probably on the threshold of writing something that matters.

Pat Schneider, Writing Alone and With Others (2003, pg. 172)

During the last week in April I attended an AWA writing-group leadership training with poet Patricia Lee Lewis at The Crossings in Austin, Texas. Patricia, along with writers Celia Jeffries and Charles MacInerney, coached twelve of us in the art of leading a group in the Amherst Writers and Artists method of writing. Patricia and Celia both worked for many years with Pat Schneider, founder of AWA, writing in Pat’s weekly group held in her home in Amherst, Massachusetts.

Pat Schneider developed the AWA method after finishing her MFA. She and her colleagues gathered ideas from the writing process movement, which she traces to Dorothea Brande’s work, Becoming a Writer, Peter Elbow’s Everyone Can Write, Natalie Goldberg’s, Writing Down the Bones and Julia Cameron’s The Artist’s Way (2003, pg.  144).

Besides learning the nuts and bolts of starting a writing group or workshop, we wrote together. That’s what the AWA process is about. A typical writing session starts with a brief meditation to center the mind and relax, and then is followed by a simple prompt. The writing is timed. We wrote for shorter lengths of time because we were learning the art of managing a group, for eight to twenty minutes per prompt.

The writing that came out of us was amazing. We wrote outdoors, immersed in the fresh breeze of the Texas hill country and the scent of wildflowers. We wrote about whatever came to our minds, and then afterwards read our work aloud to the other members. Since this was fresh writing, newly born, the members responded only to what was strong in the piece. AWA encourages holding critical responses for when the writer has prepared a typed manuscript.

Another important guideline of the AWA process is to keep all writing confidential. As one of our writers suggested, “what happens in the circle stays in the circle.” Also, we treat all writing as fiction, unless the author wants the members to treat it as autobiography.

When responding to a writer’s work, we talk about the narrator, or the character, never attributing the events of the piece to the writer. Patricia compared it to reading a Stephen King novel. Do we think that Stephen King actually experienced all the grisly tales of his stories? Even if the writer uses the first person, we don’t assume the author actually experienced the events.

This is the one aspect of the group writing process that gives writers the most difficulty, but it’s one of the most important parts. Otherwise the writing group enters the murky territory of group therapy, without a therapist! AWA sticks to treating the work as fiction to keep the writers safe.

How will I include this training in my writing life? I’d like to begin a small group in my home, and maybe offer workshops a few times a year in my city.

Pat Schneider brought her method to women living in a housing project near her town. Out of that work grew The Chicopee Workshop for Low-Income Women, as well as a DVD and book of their work with Pat. Many of the original members of this group have gone on to earn college degrees, and even MFAs.

One of the writers in the Austin training, Ellen Reich, says, “I plan to approach a local organization, the Charlotte Coalition for Social Justice, to explore possibilities of offering this writing workshop to teens. The CCSJ’s mission is to bridge differences and foster understanding among different populations. I also hope to offer a group to our local Room at the Inn – a residence for unwed, pregnant women who have little to no outside support.”

What experiences have you had in group writing? Do you belong to a critique group, and if so, do you write together, or only respond to typed manuscripts? What do you think about bringing writing and poetry to underserved populations?

Schneider, Pat (2003). Writing Alone and With Others. New York: Oxford University Press.

get the lead out: it’s noting, really

by Christine Swint

Place in poems — who needs a GPS device when we’re grounded in detail?

Lately as I’ve been driving from one place to another I’ve started jotting down interesting town names and street signs: Tulip Lane, Sleepy Hollow Road, Famous Raymond’s Hot Boiled Peanuts, The Best Little Hair House in Georgia (a hair salon!) and the list goes on.

In her book, Writing Alone and with Others, Pat Schneider suggests: “Write using a town name to get started. Use specific names. ‘A small town’ will not show itself to me as clearly as will ‘White River Junction,’ ‘Mansfield,’ or ‘Platt’s Corner.’”

Many of us remember Samuel Taylor Coleridge’s poem, Kubla Khan, because of the evocative place mentioned in the first line:

In Xanadu did Kubla Khan
A stately pleasure dome decree:
Where Alph, the sacred river, ran
Through caverns measureless to man
Down to a sunless sea.
So twice five miles of fertile ground
With walls and towers were girdled round:
And there were gardens bright with sinuous rills,
Where blossomed many an incense-bearing tree;
And here were forests ancient as the hills,
Enfolding sunny spots of greenery.

Specific place names allow the reader a more concrete vision of what the poem is relating. In the first stanza of her poem The message of crazy horse, Lucille Clifton lets us know exactly what Crazy Horse sees in his mind’s eye with words “the Black Hills hooped around me.”

I could describe my world as metro Atlanta, suburban Fulton county, the Chattahoochee hill country or the foothills of the Appalachians. Each name conjures a different mood, a different attitude toward the subject of the poem.

As you ride the bus, the train or walk city streets, pay attention to shop names, the names of subway stops, restaurants, towns and streets. Maybe you’ll even make up your own place, along the lines of Gabriel García Marquez’ Macondo, or William Faulkner’s Yoknapatawpha County.

If you like, you can post comments here about interesting place names you come across as you journey through your day.

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