get the lead out, it’s noting really: poetry readings

by Christine Swint

One of the benefits to living in a big city is that we have an active poetry scene. And thanks to Collin Kelley, who is a board member of Poetry Atlanta, I am able to find out about all the readings in my area.

In addition to the pure enjoyment of listening to poets read their words as they intended them to sound, I also use poetry readings as a learning experience — a way to become a better poet.

Keeping a notebook handy is a must for me. I jot down memorable quotes the different poets share, or ideas for future poems sparked from listening. When Cherryl Floyd-Miller recently read from her latest collection, Exquisite Heats (Salt Publishing, 2008), she read her poem “Darfur.” Floyd-Miller explained to the audience that it was a bop whose refrain was inspired by the song “History,” by Julia Biel.

As soon as I got home I looked up the bop, and found out from Poets.org that it’s a relatively new form, devised by poet Aafa Michael Weaver, at the summer gathering of Cave Canem.

You can read how to write a bop on the Poets.org website. They have a few examples of some wonderful poems that might inspire you. Although it’s a somewhat loose form that varies from poem to poem, what each one has in common is a refrain that’s repeated three times.

In Floyd-Miller’s poem “Darfur,” she begins with an epigraph from the song “History,” and then includes six lines, followed with a two-line refrain. She then has a second stanza of eight lines that expands on the ideas set forth in the first section of the poem, with the refrain slightly altered. The poem is then concluded with six more lines, and a third refrain, again altered.

Floyd-Miller shared several other forms with us during the reading. She said that although she feels it is important for her to know the forms of the past, she also enjoys breaking the rules to allow her own poetic voice to come through. This is a concept I love to hear, because it gives me great pleasure to write in form, but in my own way.

We’d love to hear some memorable quotes or ideas you’ve learned from poetry readings in your area. Have you discovered new poets by attending open mic night at your local poetry gathering spot? Have you attended a workshop that taught you some new aspects of craft? Let us know in the comments section below.

get the lead out: it’s noting, really: video poems — it’s about recording

by Christine Swint

The concept of a film poem first crossed my radar in 1982, when I was in school in Athens, Ga., and I went to see a filming of St. Francis of Assisi by artist and film director James Herbert, widely known as the director of many of REM’s music videos. It was a short piece, full of lingering shots with symbolic and metaphorical images. Herbert used the term “film poem” to explain his work.

I stored that event in the back of my mind, never thinking I would create anything along the lines of Jim Herbert’s film poem, until I attended a conference this past summer in Montreal with The International Association of the Study of Dreams. Two student winners of the dream art award made a beautiful video of a recurring dream one of them had, and I loved how they arranged it by stripping out the original sound track and supplying narration and music to accompany the images. I wish I had a link to their names and their video, but it is nowhere to be found on the conference site.

After Montreal I decided to take snippets of videos I had taken, edit them together, and write a poem to the video. I started with 2- or 3-second videos I had taken in Montreal and in Atlanta, and also combined some still shots. I chose images I liked, without trying to rationalize my choices.

After I edited the clips into a 2-minute video, I stripped out the sound (background noises and conversation), and then wrote to the images as if I were telling a dream I had. After I wrote the free-write, I revised it into a poem, and then recorded it as a sound track for the video. My computer, a Mac, comes with Garage Band for music and voice recordings.

Most video programs have the ability to lay down two soundtracks, as my program, iMovie, does. I chose some gentle music as a background to give the piece some atmosphere. The music part is touchy, because there are copyright laws to uphold. I used music that iTunes includes in its iMovie softwarefor the purpose of making personal projects. You can make your own music, too, with drums, a guitar, harmonica, or even a kazoo! You could also ask a musician friend to compose and play the music track for your poem.

Here’s an example of my second video poem, published on Qarrtsiluni, titled “Time Capsule Chronicles.”

So far I’ve made a video first, and then written the poem, but there are great videos out there that have been done in reverse. In fact, probably most videos poems are made by writing the poem first and then making the video. One that I love was a collaboration published on Qarrtsiluni, “Letters from a Parasitic Head,” a poem by Dana Guthrie Martin and video by Donna Kuhn. Dana wrote the poem first, and the video came after.

Whether you write the poem first, or write to a series of images, you will need to have a supply of your own video clips on hand. My little camera, a Kodak, has a video function on it, but now I’m starting to use a flip camera, a pocket-sized video camera that records in high definition, under low-light conditions. I think about video the same way I do with still shots –- if something I see intrigues me, I take the video, remembering to linger on the scene for a few seconds to allow the eye a chance to assimilate the image. It’s noting, really!

get the lead out: take a break

by Deb Scott

There’s been a coup. Not a coup de grace, but a short-term interruption of our regularly scheduled Get The Lead Out. (The article that Christine would have written for us today has been set aside for next month’s publication.)

Why, you ask? Because I suggested to her, as I am with you: Take a Break.

The holidays can hold much joy and happiness. But they are also a drain on resources: money, time, energy, emotions, expectations and creativity. Many of us take on too much over the holidays: traveling, gifting and juggling multiple family units, and trying to schedule kids, jobs and families — giving up personal time to do so.

Some of us don’t enjoy the holidays at all. They bring memories we’d rather not look at over and over. Or highlight the families we don’t enjoy or have, the faith systems we don’t hold. Some of us aren’t keen on commercialization of any celebration.

Whatever your point of view, take some “you” time and write, if that is what you need to do, if that would be a delightful break for you. But try something different: write a nursery rhyme or a children’s story (a nod to Patricia Smith in the Jan/Feb 09 issue of Poets & Writers). Or maybe you need to do something else.

Exercise. Go to the movies. Rent a foreign film or a silly film. Or sleep in.

Stay in your pajamas all day. Ask someone else to go to the market for the milk you forgot. Offer to go to the store for the milk they forgot. Walk to the store. (Maybe not in your pajamas. Depends on the weather, of course.)

Stay home; get out.

For 2 hours or so, do something you would not normally do: Take a hot-yoga class, browse for craft supplies at a thrift store (start your Halloween costume early or make the one you always wanted), go to a (small, locally owned) hardware store and wander up and down the aisles. Take a bus from one end of the town and back, just to see where it goes. Go to a music store and listen to stuff you don’t usually (or stay home and browse Pandora).

Change your perspective for a little bit; give yourself a guilt-free break.

And enjoy it.

Have a holiday survival hint? Leave it in the comments.

get the lead out: it’s noting, really: whats up with words?

by Christine Swint

I’m sure you’ve noticed the new Wordle prompt Dana started here on Read Write Poem. She’s been collecting favorite words from a variety of Read Write Poem participants and turning them into cool visuals for us to use as writing prompts.

Words are a poet’s stock in trade, this we know. Not only do we want to find adequate words, we are constantly on the prowl for the le mot juste. It has to sound right, look good next to its neighbors, and create a certain aura of luminosity, transcendence, darkness or depravity, depending on the poem.

Sometimes we turn to websites, like the one you’re reading now, for a jump start. A certain word, like Kimberlee’s Juicy, might be the combination of syllables you need to get your poetic engines revved.

There are tons of great sites on the web devoted to words and phrases. While you might have your favorites, here are a few I’ve looked at recently.

  • The Phrase Finder, from the UK. This is a fun website because not only does it offer a thesaurus of phrases, it also explains and lists idioms from both sides of the pond.
  • The Urban Dictionary has compiled slang terms and current word usage since 1999. They supply sentences illustrating the correct use of the term.
  • Creativity Tools is a site Nathan told me about. There’s a random word generator with different categories, ranging from very common to obscure. When I asked for a very common, intransitive verb, I got “rotate.” When I changed the word complexity to obscure, I got “labiovelerize.” This latter term was right on the tip of your tongue, wasn’t it?

Of course the best way to find words you like is to read books by authors who write poems and stories you enjoy. Some poets have a way with turning words both exotic and mundane into seamless tapestries of images. I think the words must flow in their bloodstream after all the reading and writing they’ve done.

While I’m reading I keep my notebook next to me, and jot down words and phrases I like, or words that are new to me. Lately I’ve been reading Dog Years by Mark Doty, a poet and memoirist who recently won a National Book Award for his latest collection of poems, Fire to Fire. Here’s a list of words I’ve accumulated in the last few days: fey, bathos, inchoate, insouciance, gambrel, flinty, concatenation, clank, promontory, oviod.

We find words we like from a variety of sources, from conversations, comic books, the classics, dictionaries, TV, movies, any place people communicate in language. The idea is not to use the most arcane words we can find, but to find the ones that make our poems more uniquely us, a better reflection of the thoughts that are swimming around inside us. For me, that means reading a lot, and understanding the context in which the words are used. Of course we can always broaden the context, and find a new way to make a particular word come alive. That’s what poets do.

Do you have any new favorite words? If you like you can share them in the comments section, and tell us where you found them!

get the lead out: it’s noting, really: personas and masks

by Christine Swint

At a poetry reading in Decatur, Ga., I had the chance to hear Collin Kelley read from his collection, After the Poison (Finishing Line Press, 2008). He also read a poem included in a new journal called Motel 58, which looks like an interesting project. One of the poems Kelley read was a persona poem, which reminded me of my recent note taking on this topic.

A persona poem is one in which the poet assumes the voice of a character not his or her own, as if the writer were putting on a mask to communicate through the medium of the other. The more traditional term for persona poem is dramatic monologue, which is explained in the article “On Poetic Technique: Dramatic Monologue,” at poets.org, with links to some of the 19th- and 20th-century poets who popularized the technique.

There are two main reasons I’m collecting a cast of characters to inhabit in my poems. First, I enjoy using my imagination. I like to explore history and current events, to question motives, to create a dream, and even to dream someone else’s dream. In my journal, I’m recording tidbits about intriguing personalities who might serve as the narrative voice in future poems.

The other reason persona poems might be useful involves that delicate question, “how much of my own life am I ready to reveal?” Poets, and writers in general, are often plagued with self-doubt when it comes to mining their relationships for poetic inspiration — out of shame, embarrassment or even fear of reprisals from family members. Some poets choose to write about personal issues through the eyes of a historic character as a sort of veil to shield themselves from confessions they’re not comfortable with.
Even Sylvia Plath, well-known as a confessional poet, wrote “Lady Lazarus.” Maybe the wife of Lazarus provided Plath with yet another vehicle for exploring death and her relationships with men without naming names of people in her life.

An example of a contemporary poet who has explored persona poems is Cornelius Eady, National Book Award finalist for his collection Brutal Imagination (Putnam, 2001), which is ” … narrated largely by the black kidnapper that Susan Smith invented to cover up the killing of her two sons,” according to the publisher’s review.

In Eady’s poem “Tubman’s Rock,” the narrator is the voice of an inanimate object, a technique also known as personification. The difference between personification and dramatic monologue is that the inanimate object is the narrator of the poem, not just one aspect or image among many others.

One of my favorite poetry collections this year is Famous Last Words (Saturnalia, 2008), by Catherine Pierce, winner of the Saturnalia Book Prize for 2007. Famous Last Words is full of persona poems, such as “Love Poem to Sinister Moments” and “Love Poem to the Word Lonesome,” in which the narrator speaks directly to these abstract concepts as if they were living people.

The title of the collection comes from the poems in the third section, which are based on famous last words. Here is an example of one of them, published in Slate, titled “Last Meal.” Although the poem is written in the third person, Pierce uses interior monologue to get inside the head of gangster George Appel and his girlfriend, exploring their thoughts in the moments leading up to Appel’s execution.

If you think you’d like to write a persona poem or two, get the lead out and start jotting down characters who interest you or who might allow you to tell a story you’d be too inhibited to tell otherwise. Make a note of characters in literature who might represent you in some way or who spark your imagination.

And if you like, share with everyone a few of the characters whose lives you’d like to explore.

Please note that Christine has a new blog, Balanced on the Edge. Stop by and take a look at it. And make sure you update your RSS feeds and blogrolls to include her new URL. She’s also sharing another aspect of the persona poem on her site today at this post, so check it out: Who Is Speaking.

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    The Read Write Poem NaPoWriMo Anthology is still in production. Selection, placement, layout and copyediting are taking longer than anticipated. Thank you for your patience. I hope to have the piece completed in July. For those who have emailed asking if they can be included, the May 7 deadline for submission of work stands. Those who met that deadline will be included. Please check the post on this site listing who I received submissions from by that date. If you submitted your work by the May 7 deadline in accordance with our guidelines and your name is not listed, send an email to info (at) readwritepoem (dot) org.

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