by January O’Neil
Revision: the bane of my poetic existence. I dislike it so much that I titled this post after the opening line of Marianne Moore’s “Poetry” — a poem which started out as 29 lines when it appeared in print in 1921, to a succinct four lines in the 1967 version.*
But the truth is most poets, including yours truly, try a number of times to articulate and refine a poem, even after it appears in print. Rarely is a poem written that doesn’t need a revision. It is part of the writing process, a deeper, indispensable part that requires more of us than the writing impulse. Revision is about finding your true voice.
Second drafts require a certain amount of objectivity, enthusiasm, and open mindedness. I have to leave my ego at the door, so to speak, when I rework a poem. I’m constantly asking, “Where does the poem begin?” “Who is doing what?” “Do I still enjoy the poem when read aloud?” I’ve been known to bury even the most promising drafts that just don’t work.
Ultimately, a poet has to learn to be true to that voice which has served him or her well in the past. How many of us have taught students or been in workshop situations with a participant who absolutely, positively resists fixing any part of their poems. It becomes something of a power struggle: Who decides what is good? How much revision is too much? Do I have permission to disagree? Can I cut it as a writer? Revision can bring out insecurities in the most seasoned of poets.
That being said, I encourage you to listen to your instincts when it comes to taking advice on revision. I’ve been on both ends of the discussion — instructor and student — so I understand the delicate balance between receiving comments and trusting my gut to improve a poem. A well-intentioned reader can impose his or her sensibilities on the poet’s work both positively and negatively. Sometimes the instinct to resist comes from what the poet instinctually recognizes as bad advice.
On those evenings when I find myself revising, I fall back on the following techniques to pull me through. Feel free to try some or all of these methods, but let go of any expectation that they will solve the problem. Think of this list as a skeleton key to unlock your mental block on revision.
- Wait a week to revise a new poem. That’s enough time to gain perspective yet still have an interest in the subject matter.
- Rewrite the poem completely. In his book, Triggering Town, Richard Hugo suggests rewriting a poem over again until it works.
- Isolate each line. Take a fresh, line-by-line look at each word, syllable, and punctuation. Is it all working?
- Read your poem aloud.
- Change the point of view. Sometimes changing the perspective leads the poet and the poem down an unexpected path.
- Write the poem out in prose.
- Take scissors to your poem, if all else fails. Cut it up line by line to see if the poem is more than the sum of its parts.
Once I complete a poem, my first reaction is to move onto the next one. But I know that many of you enjoy the revision process. Why? I’m interested to learn your feelings on rewriting your poems. Do you love it or dislike it, too?
*Source, Modern American Poets: Their Voices and Visions by Robert DiYanni
by January O’Neil
Ahhh, April — that special time of year when our thoughts turn to spring, Opening Day in baseball and National Poetry Month in the United States. So how do you mark what is supposed to be “the cruelest month?” When you tell friends and family it is National Poetry Month, are your responses similar to this:
“National Poetry Month? Ummm … No, I didn’t know.” I’m sure you hear a lot of that.
But after the initial bewilderment, what happens next? Do you explain what happens during the month? Do you inspire dialogue about the meaning of the month? If people ask you, “Why April?” do you have the right answer?
Founded by the Academy of American Poets more than 10 years ago, National Poetry Month has become a way of honoring a time-honored literary genre, while highlighting readings, community events, gatherings, and publications — all related to poetry. April was chosen as poetry month as a nod to T.S. Eliot’s “The Waste Land” and its famous — or infamous — first line, “April is the cruelest month … .”
My small contributions to the national dialogue about National Poetry Month start with writing a poem a day in April, also known as NaPoWriMo. I also run a community-based literary reading series and attending poetry readings by others. But supporting national poetry month can be as simple as hanging a new poem outside of your office door, which always invites conversation. The Academy of American Poets makes it easy to participate by listing 30 Ways to Celebrate poetry month.
As someone who cannot have enough poetry in her life, my role is to bridge the disconnect between old ideas about poetry and what’s happening now. Poetry has become this dynamic, exciting exchange that brings people together in person or virtually. When people share their favorite poems they are sharing a part of themselves, which is something to be celebrated 365 days a year.
Whether you go down to your local elementary school or local library to volunteer your creative writing skills, host a writing workshop in your home, or take a poet to lunch — whatever you do, April is brimming with people who want to connect with others. In the United States, spring is just beginning. Nationally and internationally, we are ready discuss the things you just can’t find in the news (yes, that’s a William Carlos Williams reference). In my heart of hearts, I believe that poetry is one of the ties that binds us together. It records our history through emotion and words. Poetry is the oldest of traditions, and I can’t think of anything better to celebrate. (Well, Opening Day in baseball is pretty cool, too!)
So, how do you celebrate National Poetry Month? Do you write a poem a day? Do you read poetry or attend readings? Do you participate in open mike and slams? How’s it all working for you?
by January O’Neil
Last month marked my fourth year attending the Association of Writers & Writing Programs (AWP) Conference, this year in New York City. And because it was in the Big Apple, it certainly was … well … ginormous! With a reported 7,500 people registered, I couldn’t help but think about the poets and writers who have never attended one of these conferences. Can an event like this really make a difference in a writer’s career? Or is there something inherently wrong about attending a glorified poetry convention?
Well, the easy answer is yes and no. First, a little history.
Founded in 1967, the AWP is an organization that supports the craft of writing. Its annual conference, held in various locations across the U.S., brings together a network of creative writing programs, educators, students, publishers, writers and editors — 60 percent of whom, I think, are geared toward poetry. You don’t have to be an AWP member to attend, but members do receive a reduced conference registration rate.
For four days (the first was a registration/setup day), conference attendees were treated to a plethora of panel discussions, forums, town hall meetings and poetry readings, as well as social gatherings, nightly dances and receptions hosted by colleges and literary organizations. That doesn’t include the off-site poetry readings and parties — all against the backdrop of one of the largest cities in the world.
Multiple sessions are scheduled simultaneously, so there’s no lack of interesting topics from which to choose. Some session topics included “Do You Have to be Mean to be Funny?,” “Off the Page: Writers Talk About the American Landscape,” “Poetry and the Environment,” “Getting the Job and Keeping It: The Creative Writing Tenure Track,” and “Don’t Call It a Comeback: Re-birthing the Black Male Poet.” Additionally, there were wonderful opportunities to hear established poets and writers, such as “Poetry Reading: Yusef Komunyakaa and Sharon Olds,” “A Reading by Robert Pinsky and Natasha Trethewey,” and “A Reading & Conversation with Martin Amis.”
AWP conferences are a schmoozefest. I have no doubt that some writers bring manuscripts to land a publishing deal, or kiss up to literary luminaries in hopes of furthering their careers. But much of my time outside of attending sessions was spent reconnecting with writers I’ve known through the years. I also took advantage of opportunities to connect with editors and roam the bookfair aisles in search of new journals to submit my work.
Speaking of the bookfair, the word “massive” doesn’t begin to point out the dramatic increase of old and new book publishers. And, the prominence of online creative ventures and community projects was surprising. I mean, the bookfair took up three floors of our hotel! My arms ached from carrying around journals and marketing materials. It was overwhelming to say the least. Certainly, there were more independent presses and college-run journals that ever before. But if there was ever any doubt about the popularity of poetry, all you had to do scan the seemingly endless aisles of printed materials. Books will never go out of print.
So is this the conference for you? Well, if you’re an MFA student, an educator or consider yourself an emerging poet from inside or outside of the academic world, then it might be time to see what an AWP Conference is all about. And if you want to see the literary landscape on a national level, it might be time to book those reservations for 2009 in Chicago. But, if your goal is to hunt down an editor to publish your 108-page sonnet series on apple picking, stay at home.
This conference is not so much about enveloping yourself in the craft of poetry. But it is a chance to discover an emerging poet or writer to read, learn how to market your first book or share resources with other writers for community readings. You might even get a chance to hear your favorite writer expound on the writer’s life, because I still believe those true moments exist at the conference — when a poetry enthusiast gets to tell a poet she has loved for years about the poem that saved her life. Or a conference participant offers a contrarian opinion during a question and answer session, which makes the know-it-all panelists reconsider their positions and makes the audience applaud. Yes, those pure moments still happen at AWP.
If you’re like me, you’ll take everything home, rifle through your heavy suitcase of books and promotional postcards, and make a to-do list. Top of the list: write a poem. That’s where the real business of poetry begins.
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June 20, 2010 | 1:36 pmThe Read Write Poem NaPoWriMo Anthology is still in production. Selection, placement, layout and copyediting are taking longer than anticipated. Thank you for your patience. I hope to have the piece completed in July. For those who have emailed asking if they can be included, the May 7 deadline for submission of work stands. Those who met that deadline will be included. Please check the post on this site listing who I received submissions from by that date. If you submitted your work by the May 7 deadline in accordance with our guidelines and your name is not listed, send an email to info (at) readwritepoem (dot) org.
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May 5, 2010 | 3:09 pmRemember that Friday* is the deadline for submitting work to the Read Write Poem NaPoWriMo Anthology. Check out the guidelines for submission in the main column (to the left). On May 8, we’ll post a news item listing everyone we’ve received work from. If you submitted work and your name is not on that list, please let us know. Thanks!
*I initially said “tomorrow,” but I meant to say “Friday.”
- napowrimo congratulations, and a reminder
April 24, 2010 | 12:05 pmIt’s the final week of the Read Write Poem NaPoWriMo Challenge! Just 7 days left. With that, a reminder that Read Write Poem will culminate with the anthology featuring work from those who complete the challenge. A post with details for submitting to the anthology will be published May 1. Be sure you remove any information from the site that you want preserved — such as group content and personal messages. Those elements of the site will be removed May 1 as well. The main site will remain up as an archive.
- ‘underlife’ tour at january gill o’neil’s blog
April 20, 2010 | 8:11 pmJanuary Gill O’Neil’s virtual book tour has moved to her site and is underway now. Check out the lineup at Poet Mom.
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thank you and farewell As of May 1, 2010, Read Write Poem is no longer active.
In late May, an anthology featuring work from those who completed the Read Write Poem NaPoWriMo Challenge will be published here and on issuu.com.
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