by Christine Swint
In her classic book, Writing Down the Bones (Shambala, 1986), Natalie Goldberg talks about “first thoughts,” those fleeting images, feelings, and ideas that cross one’s mind before the censor of the super ego swoops in and cleans things up for polite society. Those first thoughts form the primordial soup of authentic writing, and are the gold nuggets most gritty writers dive deep to find.
Interested? Wonder where Christine goes from here as she considers Louisa Adjoa Parker’s Salt-sweat and Tears? Go here to read more.
We’re trying something new at Read Write Poem. We’ll be excerpting many of our contributor’s articles and leading you back to their blogs for the full post. We hope it will build community, simplify Read Write Poem site maintenance and give you the opportunity to travel a little further afield and see what you discover. Of course we hope you come back again and again. But we really are a network, aren’t we?
by Juliet Wilson
52 Ways of Looking at a Poem is based on the articles Ruth Padel wrote for the Independent on Sunday newspaper.
The idea behind the articles and the book is to encourage the reader to read poetry more closely, to pay more attention to both form and meaning. Fifty-two poems are chosen — one for each week of the year — and dissected, with Padel’s trademark informed intelligence. Poets represented include Seamus Heaney, Don Paterson, Colette Bryce and Vicki Feaver.
The poems cover a range of styles, forms and themes, though all are relatively short, given the original constraints of the newspaper column. The analysis of each poem runs to at least two pages, starting with a brief biographical note on the writer, a discussion of the context of the poem and then an in-depth study of the way rhyme and rhythm are used in the poem and how these work to support and enhance the subject matter.
It’s a fascinating read, I certainly felt I was finding more in the poems than I otherwise would have done (and I’m a fairly close reader to start with). However, can it become counterproductive to over analyze a poem? Does such close reading drain the poem of its immediacy? These are interesting questions to ponder reading through this book.
It is also interesting to reflect on ones own writing from the standpoint of this book. How would my writing stand up to such close reading? How about yours?
by Juliet Wilson
This book is an intriguing mix of self help and poetry manual.
The tone of the book is relaxed, chatty and women-centered. Each chapter takes the reader through a specific poetic form (e.g. the sonnet) or type (e.g. the letter poem) and suggests which form is best for writing about certain personal situations, giving examples written by the women in the author’s writing circle and titles of examples by famous female poets that can be accessed online or from a library.
The focus is on using poetry to explore personal issues and to allow writing to access emotions and discover solutions to personal problems. Form and craft are described in a simple (sometimes simplistic) and straightforward way that demystifies poetry and enables the reader to feel confident about starting to write. There are also nice lists of tips for each form, along with a selection of ideas around areas such as sharing poetry, how to make time to write and using poetry in journalling.
My problem with formal verse has always centred on why to use a particular form. I’m a prolific haiku writer because that is a form that suits my way of looking at the world and the things that inspire me, but I don’t like to write, for example, a sonnet, just for the sake of it. I want to feel it’s the right form for the thoughts I want to express. This book really helped me with its chapters outlining why each form suits particular situations:
sonnet — working out emotions
sestina — making sense of memory
ghazal — allowing your mind to wander
haiku — living in the moment
villanelle — accessing your inner voice
ode — dwelling on what is good in your life
I know that each form suits other situations too, but this was really helpful in getting me to think about form and when I can use it. Since first reviewing the book, I have written and posted my first attempts at ghazals and sestinas.
The book is aimed at beginner poets and women interested in poetry as therapy. As Nyemaster says: “I decided to write a book on poetical form because it is something I can wholeheartedly believe in and can provide personal testimony about. It can help women to live fuller, more in tune lives … “
It’s a book about allowing creativity to help you explore personal issues and, though it is also useful for free verse writers who want to start exploring form, it is not a manual for the experienced poet who wants to develop skills in writing quality formal verse.<img style=”vertical-align:bottom;border:0px;margin:0 0 0 5px;padding:0 0 0 0″ src=”http://readwritepoem.org/files/2009/07/splat-ender1.jpg” alt=”" width=”20″ height=”20″ />
Nyemaster, Wendy. 2008. Unleash the Poem Within: How Reading and Writing Poetry Can Liberate Your Creative Spirit. Sourcebooks. Available here.
Note: A version of this review first appeared on Crafty Green Poet.
by Jessica Fox-Wilson
A chapbook is a miraculous venue for poets. It can be a remarkable publishing opportunity to showcase a group of poems that may not have found a single home together. It can also be an incredible challenge to present twenty or so pages of poetry in a cohesive aesthetic and theme. Karen Rigby’s Savage Machinery, coming in September from Finishing Line Press, succeeds in combining the ideas and craft from sixteen separate poems into a interconnected whole. Savage Machinery explores a specific area of the human condition: our relationship with sensuality and connection despite an often self-created distance.
The most intriguing aspect of Rigby’s work is the way in which her poems intensify as the chapbook progresses. Throughout most of her poems lingers a sensuality, hidden just below many of her characters’ surfaces. For instance, in the opening poem, “Bathing in the Burned House,” the housewife still lives in the house, obscured by burnt timbers but showers under the open sky. The neighboring husbands who pass by the house imagine (but never truly witness) her.
In another early poem, “Photo of an Autoerotic” is the distant sensuality of what should be explicit: a photo of a man indulging himself becomes almost scientific, an artifact of desire, rather than desire itself. Further in the chapbook are a series of food poems, which present sensuality in all of its physicality. Indulging in the smells, tastes and memories of food translates into indulging in the memories of our other carnal desires. The sense of sensuality becomes fully realized in these poems, and physical expression becomes about connection rather than distance.
Many of the poems in Savage Machinery are inspired by art. Through these poems, Rigby extends her meditation on sensuality to include the ways in which beauty, connection and identity have been defined for us visually. Rigby draws on a diverse pool of artists: Leonardo da Vinci, Edward Hopper, Georgia O’Keefe and Boucicaut Master. These ekphrastic poems are well-executed because Rigby retains her own voice, while still conveying the emotional tenor and visual scope of the art.
The most accomplished poem of this series is “The Story of Adam and Eve,” which is inspired by Master’s illuminated manuscript of the same name. The poem shifts between Master’s artwork, scenes from the Garden of Eden, the process to create the illuminated manuscript and the narrator’s own experience in Paris. As the poem volleys back and forth, art and experience become blurred. The sensuality of Eden before the fall mingles with sensuality of calligrapher inscribing parchment, which then mingles with memories of a love affair. Because it addresses so many of the chabook’s themes, “The Story of Adam and Eve” becomes its centerpiece.
The beauty of chapbooks is that readers are able to discover a new poet through a brief immersion in their world, much like being transported to a foreign country and quickly acquiring the language. I found I wanted to spend more time living in Rigby’s world, where da Vinci flying machines bleed into passengers on real airplanes centuries later and women rebel by bathing in burned-out houses.
Rigby, Karen (2008). Savage Machinery. Georgetown: Finishing Line Press.
Available September 2008.
by Juliet Wilson
In true poetry slam style, the Spoken Word Revolution Redux CD and book set starts out by putting a Poet Laureate head to head with a Slam Champion. Ted Kooser (former USA Poet Laureate) vs Anis Mojgani (twice National Poetry Slam Individual Champion); Andrew Motion (current UK Poet Laureate) vs Sonya Renee (former National Poetry Slam Individual Champion).
I’m not a fan of Motion’s poetry, but even if I were, his polite reading of “Anne Frank Huis” would still be totally blown out of the water by Renee’s electrifying, music backed performance of “Thick”. The comparison is of course, unfair; Motion writes for the page, Renee is a performer. However, any literary poet who is presenting their poetry in front of an audience could learn lessons from performance poets. Lessons about how to bring poetry alive and to engage an audience.
Questions, asked by Ted Kooser in his introduction to the book, about whether performance poetry will endure as literature, are, I think, irrelevant. Each performance is unique and will live on in the mind of the audience who may well memorize the words (as proven by the audience participation in the recording of David Lerner’s “Mein Kampf“*).
Dare I ask the question: is literary poetry in fact the sign of a failure in poetics? That it needs to be written down because no one can remember it otherwise? The first poets performed their work, they didn’t write it down. Performance poetry today continues this tradition. In his article, “Towards a Hip Hop Poetica,” Kevin Coval describes hip hop poets as “modern griots, indigenous keepers and tellers of his/her/stories.” Hip Hop poetry revels in rhyme and rhythm, as demonstrated here by poet Invincible, in this excerpt from “Detroit Winter”:
The city streets are bitter sweet
I pound pavement
While I’m kicking litter at my feet
Under the snow, the ground’s blanket
These heavy hitter beats.
In his article “The New Oral Poetry,” Dana Gioia notes that “the nearly universal critical bias against rhyme and meter as recently as 10 years ago, especially in University writing programmes, indicates how distant the poets in a print culture have become from the orality of verse.”
Some literary poets can seem to be afraid of emotion and humour and often appear to be engaging with a select gathering of fellow literary poets, rather than reaching out to a wider audience. Performance poets however, are rarely afraid of emotion, whether raw anger in Mayda del Valle’s poem about Puerto Rican Spanish speakers, “Tongue Tactics,” or more controlled as in Patricia Smith’s rambling poem of love for her father “When the Burning Begins”:
……. I’m telling you it’s the first thing
I ever cooked, that my daddy was laughing
and breathing and no bullet in his head.
Nor are performance poets afraid to connect with the audience’s points of reference, as in this line from “Lebron James,” by Nate Marshall one of the many young poets featured in this book:
I’ll be the first spoken word brotha with a shoe
deal.
Performance poetry also is unafraid to engage with politics, which can seem confrontational, but it is hard not to at least see where Nikki Giovanni is coming from in her angry poem “All Eyez on U”:
if those who lived by the sword died by the sword there would be no
white men on earth.
There are some performance poets who I find too confrontational, just as there are some literary poets who bore me; at the same time there are literary poets who stun me with their distillations of powerful emotion and there are performance poets who move me with their subtlety. Both sides can learn from each other. This book is a perfect starting point for literary minded poets (or anyone else) to start learning from performance poets.
* The link is to a Lerner reading of his work, not from the CD.
The Spoken Word Revolution Redux, edited by Mark Eleveld, is available from Source Books and Powell’s Books.
Eleveld, Mark, ed. (2007.) Spoken Word Revolution Redux. Naperville: Sourcebooks Mediafusion.
Note: A version of this review first appeared on Crafty Green Poet.
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