Comments on: napowrimo #28: intuition http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2010/04/28/napowrimo-28-intuition/ Mon, 03 May 2010 01:01:02 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=abc hourly 1 By: laurashannon http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2010/04/28/napowrimo-28-intuition/comment-page-2/#comment-21711 laurashannon Fri, 30 Apr 2010 23:50:39 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=11029#comment-21711 http://thebooklife.wordpress.com/2010/04/30/4-28/ http://thebooklife.wordpress.com/2010/04/30/4-28/

]]> By: scriptophobe http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2010/04/28/napowrimo-28-intuition/comment-page-2/#comment-21585 scriptophobe Fri, 30 Apr 2010 06:33:53 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=11029#comment-21585 Come Hither Pretty http://scriptophobe.blogspot.com/2010/04/napowrimo-28-intuition.html Come Hither Pretty

http://scriptophobe.blogspot.com/2010/04/napowrimo-28-intuition.html

]]> By: Damian http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2010/04/28/napowrimo-28-intuition/comment-page-2/#comment-21549 Damian Fri, 30 Apr 2010 02:40:21 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=11029#comment-21549 So, the internet is down, so I haven't been able to link to my poems for the final three days of NaPoWriMo (Yes, it's Friday for me today). So, Wednesday was <a href="http://damianinreallife.wordpress.com/2010/04/28/wrenched-napowrimo/" rel="nofollow">Wrenched</a>, Thursday was <a href="http://damianinreallife.wordpress.com/2010/04/29/golem-napowrimo/" rel="nofollow">Golem</a>, and Friday is <a href="http://damianinreallife.wordpress.com/2010/04/30/lilac-napowrimo/" rel="nofollow">Lilac</a>. I hope you enjoy them all. Congratulations on finishing NaPoWriMo! So, the internet is down, so I haven’t been able to link to my poems for the final three days of NaPoWriMo (Yes, it’s Friday for me today). So, Wednesday was Wrenched, Thursday was Golem, and Friday is Lilac. I hope you enjoy them all. Congratulations on finishing NaPoWriMo!

]]> By: Marcie http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2010/04/28/napowrimo-28-intuition/comment-page-2/#comment-21534 Marcie Fri, 30 Apr 2010 00:48:38 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=11029#comment-21534 http://marcieaf.blogspot.com/2010/04/napowrimo-day-28.html http://marcieaf.blogspot.com/2010/04/napowrimo-day-28.html

]]> By: michelle http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2010/04/28/napowrimo-28-intuition/comment-page-2/#comment-21526 michelle Thu, 29 Apr 2010 23:53:58 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=11029#comment-21526 http://bitsandpieces.wordpress.com/2010/04/29/napowrimo-28-intuition/ needs lots of work but.... http://bitsandpieces.wordpress.com/2010/04/29/napowrimo-28-intuition/

needs lots of work but….

]]> By: Nicole Nicholson http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2010/04/28/napowrimo-28-intuition/comment-page-2/#comment-21506 Nicole Nicholson Thu, 29 Apr 2010 20:14:58 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=11029#comment-21506 A day behind, but none the less here is my offering: <a href="http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2010/04/29/napowrimo-poem-28-letter-to-my-father/" rel="nofollow">Letter to My Father</a> A day behind, but none the less here is my offering:

Letter to My Father

]]> By: Allan Cox http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2010/04/28/napowrimo-28-intuition/comment-page-2/#comment-21495 Allan Cox Thu, 29 Apr 2010 17:55:19 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=11029#comment-21495 My submission: "Devil" http://yourinnerceo.blogspot.com Best, Allan My submission: “Devil”

http://yourinnerceo.blogspot.com

Best,

Allan

]]> By: swiss http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2010/04/28/napowrimo-28-intuition/comment-page-2/#comment-21463 swiss Thu, 29 Apr 2010 14:11:27 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=11029#comment-21463 finally! finally!

]]> By: swiss http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2010/04/28/napowrimo-28-intuition/comment-page-2/#comment-21462 swiss Thu, 29 Apr 2010 14:10:53 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=11029#comment-21462 will i be able to post today? http://travelsinthefloatingelvis.blogspot.com/2010/04/april-28th.html will i be able to post today?

http://travelsinthefloatingelvis.blogspot.com/2010/04/april-28th.html

]]> By: robertwynne http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2010/04/28/napowrimo-28-intuition/comment-page-2/#comment-21453 robertwynne Thu, 29 Apr 2010 11:46:23 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=11029#comment-21453 Hinge Dirt sweeps the sweet earth with a loamy promise of growth, holding the grass just tight enough to let each blade sway in its own green way. Water carries flotillas full of tourists and sunscreen, all-you-can-eat buffets buffeted by a glittering surface which serves as invitation to drown, and buoy against the ocean’s dark end. Breath is taken for granted. Flames lick the air, banish the cold and our daughter holds us like a hinge. We pivot around her because that’s our design. Without her we’d be a simple wooden door, latched shut. Hinge

Dirt sweeps the sweet earth
with a loamy promise of growth,
holding the grass just tight enough
to let each blade sway

in its own green way. Water carries
flotillas full of tourists and sunscreen,
all-you-can-eat buffets buffeted
by a glittering surface which serves

as invitation to drown, and buoy
against the ocean’s dark end.
Breath is taken for granted.
Flames lick the air, banish the cold

and our daughter holds us
like a hinge. We pivot around her
because that’s our design. Without her
we’d be a simple wooden door, latched shut.

]]> By: Maya http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2010/04/28/napowrimo-28-intuition/comment-page-2/#comment-21427 Maya Thu, 29 Apr 2010 05:41:45 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=11029#comment-21427 I heard people talking about directions to someplace, so this is what I got out of that: http://mayaganesan.blogspot.com/2010/04/napowrimo-28_28.html I heard people talking about directions to someplace, so this is what I got out of that:

http://mayaganesan.blogspot.com/2010/04/napowrimo-28_28.html

]]> By: Sable http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2010/04/28/napowrimo-28-intuition/comment-page-2/#comment-21424 Sable Thu, 29 Apr 2010 05:33:05 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=11029#comment-21424 Day 28 at http://alienfireworks.blogspot.com/2010/04/road-trip.html Day 28 at http://alienfireworks.blogspot.com/2010/04/road-trip.html

]]> By: Neil Reid http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2010/04/28/napowrimo-28-intuition/comment-page-2/#comment-21422 Neil Reid Thu, 29 Apr 2010 05:08:58 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=11029#comment-21422 NaPoWriMo #28 <a href="http://bearlyaudible.wordpress.com/2010/04/28/when-moons-collide-napowrimo-28/" rel="nofollow"><strong>when moons collide</strong></a> NaPoWriMo #28 when moons collide

]]> By: troysworktable http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2010/04/28/napowrimo-28-intuition/comment-page-2/#comment-21421 troysworktable Thu, 29 Apr 2010 04:42:54 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=11029#comment-21421 Poem #28. "Naming Stars." Posted at: http://troysworktable.blogspot.com/2010/04/napowrimo-28.html Poem #28. “Naming Stars.”

Posted at: http://troysworktable.blogspot.com/2010/04/napowrimo-28.html

]]> By: Matt Blair http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2010/04/28/napowrimo-28-intuition/comment-page-2/#comment-21420 Matt Blair Thu, 29 Apr 2010 04:30:33 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=11029#comment-21420 My work didn't feel that intuitive today, but I did follow the process described in the prompt, and it led me to a place I didn't expect when starting out: <a href="http://surdus.posterous.com/the-aegean-sea" rel="nofollow">The Aegean Sea</a>. My work didn’t feel that intuitive today, but I did follow the process described in the prompt, and it led me to a place I didn’t expect when starting out: The Aegean Sea.

]]> By: Robin http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2010/04/28/napowrimo-28-intuition/comment-page-2/#comment-21419 Robin Thu, 29 Apr 2010 04:22:27 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=11029#comment-21419 My #28 is here: http://robin-turner.blogspot.com/2010/04/visit.html My #28 is here:
http://robin-turner.blogspot.com/2010/04/visit.html

]]> By: ChrisJarmick http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2010/04/28/napowrimo-28-intuition/comment-page-2/#comment-21418 ChrisJarmick Thu, 29 Apr 2010 03:59:48 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=11029#comment-21418 Not sure why earlier post didn't appear. Today's poem on my Facebook and right here: http://dash30dash.ning.com/profiles/blogs/napowrimo-day-28-poems-writing Interesting coincidence about Intuition... My acrostic double prompt poem yesterday spelled out Intuition. Keep writing... This NaPoWriMo is freaky!!! Not sure why earlier post didn’t appear.

Today’s poem on my Facebook and
right here:

http://dash30dash.ning.com/profiles/blogs/napowrimo-day-28-poems-writing

Interesting coincidence about Intuition… My acrostic double prompt poem yesterday spelled out Intuition.

Keep writing…

This NaPoWriMo is freaky!!!

]]> By: Shari Smothers http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2010/04/28/napowrimo-28-intuition/comment-page-2/#comment-21417 Shari Smothers Thu, 29 Apr 2010 03:58:26 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=11029#comment-21417 Two days to go after this one and I'm more than a little giddy about that. I suspect, though, it's more accurate to say I'm punchy at this point. My #28 effort: <a href="http://slstellingstories.com/2010/04/just-go-fishing/" rel="nofollow">Just go Fishing</a> Two days to go after this one and I’m more than a little giddy about that. I suspect, though, it’s more accurate to say I’m punchy at this point.

My #28 effort: Just go Fishing

]]> By: Lindsay Illich http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2010/04/28/napowrimo-28-intuition/comment-page-2/#comment-21416 Lindsay Illich Thu, 29 Apr 2010 03:56:51 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=11029#comment-21416 Roadtripping #2 http://eveningpoems.blogspot.com/ Roadtripping #2

http://eveningpoems.blogspot.com/

]]> By: Kelly http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2010/04/28/napowrimo-28-intuition/comment-page-2/#comment-21415 Kelly Thu, 29 Apr 2010 03:54:02 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=11029#comment-21415 Definitely not on prompt today. Not on anything. Tired. ~~~~~~~ Bad Poem This is a bad poem. Full of boring shit, flat and dull as a cliché sandwich or my dirty glass coffee table, whichever comes first. So boring I am falling asleep as I write it. It sits on the couch, a mousy brunette in a frumpy frock It sighs and farts. It has nothing to say— a big fat hollow bucket of Nothing. Don’t say I didn’t warn you. Definitely not on prompt today. Not on anything. Tired.

~~~~~~~

Bad Poem

This is a bad poem.
Full of boring shit,
flat and dull as
a cliché sandwich
or my dirty glass coffee table,
whichever comes first.
So boring I am falling asleep
as I write it.
It sits on the couch, a mousy
brunette in a frumpy frock
It sighs and farts.
It has nothing to say—
a big fat hollow bucket of
Nothing.
Don’t say I didn’t
warn you.

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