by the Read Write Poem Staff
Today’s prompt is provided by member, Julie Jordan Scott.
Arthur Koestler wrote: “The moment of truth, the sudden emergence of a new insight, is an act of intuition.” Akin to a “sixth sense,” intuition brings pieces together. It gives the gift of heightened awareness.
One single, specific memory I have from a math class comes from the first day of geometry class. I was 15 years old.
The teacher asked “What is intuition?”
I raised my hand — an unusual act for me when math was involved. “Intuition is having a hunch,” I said, “sort of knowing or having an idea of something out of the blue, like without really knowing you somehow know.”
What does this have to do with your life and your poetry?
Take a moment to remember a breakthrough moment in your life or a “freeze-frame” moment from long, long ago. An “a-ha” or an “epiphany” moment or a moment that has a story yet to tell.
Let’s prepare to write a poem using our intuition intentionally today. Write this prompt on your page: “When I remember my “a-ha moment” from my past, I understand the place I am meant to go with my words and poetry today is … ”
Restate the prompt as you free-write and don’t write a poem yet. Instead, go about your business of the day purposefully not writing a poem.
Notice surprising turns of phrases you hear. Listen to people who say things to you that seem especially surprising, lyrics to songs. Eavesdrop intentionally. Wait for at least 2 hours and then write your poem from the words your intuition and your free-writing gave you.![]()
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Four weeks I’ve been logging in at 1 am to get on the prompt, and now you’re telling me not to write a poem? Diabolical!
But an interesting exercise in discipline. All right, I’m up for it.
me too!
… the same feeling of certainty and not pushing it: Intuition
NaPoWriMo day 28 — the moment of Not Spring
rob kistner replied:
April 28th, 2010 at 12:34 am
…incidentally, I haven’t written my poem to today’s prompt yet — but I had to post something out of habit…
rob kistner replied:
April 28th, 2010 at 3:29 am
REMEMBER: In 3 days — First weekly prompt on the re-opening Writer’s Island goes up this Saturday, May 1st… all are welcome to come stroll the beaches and write…
…rob
rob kistner replied:
April 28th, 2010 at 1:22 pm
Here is the NaPoWriMo #28 poem I wrote after following Julie Jordan Scott’s intuitive prompt: Sanity
Oh no! – I ignored part of the instructions (because I only read them now), didn’t wait 2 hours, wrote something right away. Is that terrible?
I am providing modest but colourful accomodation at POW (Poetry On Wednesday) for those gypsy poets who are seeking refuge from the bland, stitched and conventional. Eccentrics
(amusing only), misfits and outcasts are welcome.
My intuition tells me not to do this….so here goes!
Andy Sewina replied:
April 28th, 2010 at 10:25 am
Thanks for the prompt Julie, here’s mine: Something
I too found this prompt immediately inspired me to write a poem
http://ingeborgsblog.blogspot.com/2010/04/napowrimo-28-intuition.html
I thought we did the aha moment already? Here’s my poem, sort of. http://thelaughinghousewife.wordpress.com
Aha again
‘ I’m breaking the rules ‘
http://rallentanda.blogspot.com
I guess that’s 2 hours: SEMI-DETACHED
Hee, fun!
It was intuition
that made me reject that job.
It was gut feeling
that made me say no.
In hindsight
I must have known
you were sneaky bastards
who had stolen my file.
In hindsight
you blackmailed me
to agree.
I’m glad I didn’t.
You’re bankrupt
now.
Didn’t take long
to go down.
With ethics of your kind
I wonder why?
Janet replied:
April 28th, 2010 at 5:56 am
wow glad you sidestepped that one
Janet replied:
April 28th, 2010 at 6:03 am
off prompt. still thinking
http://crankymango.blogspot.com/2010/04/humberstone.html
The Tanka prompt has been nagging at me. It’s been in my head so I took the prompt’s advice, with intuition leading the way, attempting the Tanka, again. And as Irony would have it, I am confusing Tanka for something else. To be exact Tanka is a 31 Syllable 5-7-5-7-7 rhythm five line poem that expresses in vivide imagery an exact moment in time & culture.
Gotchya
a yellow line down a vacant road
a small voice screams a warning
stay behind the line
small voices ignored are replaced by screams
gut feelings grow into hauntings
The longer version is on my blog page http://menremainboys.wordpress.com/
Here’s my freewrite (not all that free, as it includes quotes) Now I’m off to try and write a poem….
Napowrimo 28
When I remember my a-ha moment from my past, I understand the place I am meant to go with my words. Today, poetry is what I do. I’ve always tinkered with doggerel, following my father’s inspirational wordplay over Sunday lunch 60 years ago, when we batted silly rhymes backwards and forwards across the dining table. But my a-ha moment came during a summer school at Caen University in 2005, when we were asked to write haiku in French. Given the rules, we set about counting syllables on our fingers, giggling and writing rubbish. Then suddenly, the words came into my head:
Le bébé est né
Tout neuf, tout nu, sans cheveux
L’espérance de tout
And I realised that thoughts expressed poetically take on a new meaning, and didn’t have to be silly, trivial, inconsequential. It was another year before this one attacked me from behind:
Le doux bourdonnement
Des abeilles dans la lavande
Soulage mon esprit
I thought: if I can do it in a language not my own*, surely I can do it in my mother tongue, and so I wrote this:
Childhood
A wonderful place
I live there still
I was hooked, and I’ve been writing poems ever since.
*translations for non-francophones – no longer classic haiku:
The baby is born
new, nude and bald
the hope of all
and
The sweet buzzing
of bees in the lavender
soothes my spirit
derrick replied:
April 28th, 2010 at 4:00 am
These are FAB in whichever language, Vivienne, but the French does give them a certain je ne sais quoi!
vivienne Blake replied:
April 28th, 2010 at 4:46 am
Thanks Derek. Woops: from the now of my language competence to the then of writing that first haiku, I’ve spotted a grammatical error:
It should read ‘l’esperance de tous’
My poem is here:
http://ragbone.wordpress.com
I didn’t like this prompt the first time; little has changed!
http://melrosemusings.blogspot.com/2010/04/intuition-superstition-napowrimo-day-28.html
haikujunky replied:
April 28th, 2010 at 1:55 pm
i’m with you derrick and i didn’t write one last time and nothing is happening now either : <
poemsotherwise.blogspot.com
Something told me you would knock the doors again. I still remember the disappearing silhouette in the darkness. I don’t even remember whether you looked back. But today, when I heard the bell ring, I knew it was you.
Through the walls
And then the doors
Never opened, never
Knocked, you disappeared.
As though the air suck you
And you became formless.
Today, when the bell rung,
I saw you back in the
Same form you left,
Without even opening the doors
And breaking the walls.
Not playin the prompt game today, but really happy with what I got at Scrambled, Not Fried
Here is a little story about “Intuition & Deja Vu.”
http://babblingoninbabylon.com/blog
Got some knitting done in the break: Leaving
My Day 28 poem is an acrostic: Emporium. I’ll get on to the intuition one first thing in the morning.
Here are my Intuition/inspiration poems:
http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com
http://mothersparrow.wordpress.com/2010/04/28/an-almanc-can-prove-quite-useful/
I wrote about the psychologist Wolfgang Kohler:
“Insight Learning”
http://www.redbubble.com/people/nebsy/writing/5085704-napowrimo-28
A poem that’s anti-prompt. But maybe I’ve read too much into it?
http://novaheart.wordpress.com/2010/04/28/poem-42810-wait-for-her-name/
Did my free-writing bit last night, and lo and behold, first thing when I woke up this morning tied right into it. So here it is.
Romance Languages
Chickens took centre stage for me today. One woke me up this morning and they’ve been on my mind ever since….
http://www.shicho.net/words/?p=1160
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Tried to stick to the prompt but needed to borrow a line from an earlier poem.
Atonement
http://jdmackenzie.blogspot.com/2010/04/atonement.html
I have missed being a part of these prompts- so I have combined #27 and #28-
http://tmi-chef.blogspot.com/2010/04/napowrimo-27-28-read-write-poem-prompt.html
Chef E
I don’t know why the words that were stuck on my head were “something real” and here is my poem:
http://stiletto.crisopeya.eu/2010/04/28/napowrimo-28-intuition/
the moon says sleep
which way the moon
To the Digital Historian Who Filmed a Music Camp Full of Old Women can be read at musetomyeyes.blogspot.com
Good morning (where applicable)!
Here’s my offering for today:
“April”
http://jasoncrane.org/2010/04/28/poem-april/
Enjoy!
Jason
I see: writer of poem who cheats on prompts will pay the price….but not this morning
the Night’s tale
My first Judith Butler reference in a poem, I think. http://rhiannonproblematising.wordpress.com/2010/04/28/napowrimo-28-unstraight-mind/
This really happened to me, I didn’t make it up. I changed the personna narrating – she is not me. But, it’s my aha.
napowrimo # 28 Golden Sex
http://www.synecdochicstuff.blogspot.com/
Finally got in. Followed the prompt, but I didn’t have to cogitate too long, the words fell into my lap.
http://poemblaze.wordpress.com/2010/04/28/rwp-napowrimo-28/
My Words http://www.gather.com/viewArticle.action?articleId=281474978202824
My brain twisted the key word a bit, from intuition to inspiration. They’re linked intuitively, right?
http://jasonriedy.wordpress.com/2010/04/28/napowrimo-28/
I’m not sure if this about intuition, more about a leap of faith and just not knowing what’s next
Leaving Vegas
We drove from Vegas the day we got married.
I wore three quarter trousers with a garter
over the top, glitter shoes that caught the dessert
and turned it into pink glass. You wore a hat.
We drove down roads winding further down
than I’d ever been before, in this bowl of sun
a blue deeper than I’d encountered, an eye
there was no looking away from. Round we went,
suspended over the water, so many rivets and bolts.
Bridges where never my thing, too much
depended on the men who built them, yet
down we drove, over the dam, no bypass.
We drove towards a biker gang who stopped
and asked to take our picture, a girl in a garter
over her shorts, glitter slippers and a stripper top,
and a man in shades and a hat, we drove towards
this but we did not know it. All we knew
is the parking lot outside the drive through chapel
had been rained on by shed sequins. I picked
them from my the tops of my feet and held
them to the light as we drove unfamiliar highways
and left Hoover dam behind us. Through the rear view
I could still it winking. Ahead, nothing but rocks and sky,
a single red rose drying, an offering to the dessert, on the dash.
I Know: http://poetry.disorderedcosmos.com/2010/04/napowrimo-28-i-know/
Skipped the prompt again. I have no idea why, since it’s a good one.
But here’s Water Woman.
http://yearofthebooks.wordpress.com/2010/04/28/poem-a-day-day-28/
Coffee Shop, Mid-day Wednesday
Here is my poem ‘The Nudge’ http://umaathreya.blogsome.com/2010/04/28/the-nudge/
Intuition
Lucky are those who heed their intuition
Recognize it for what it is – a warning
Not to be confused with the still, small
Voice of conscience
That whispers “This is wrong. It is a sin.
You could be audited.”
There are some of us whose intuition
Runs a bit behind the action. After
What was meant to happen happens,
That little voice murmurs in our head
“I told you so.”
Wall
http://systematicweasel.blogspot.com/2010/04/wall-4-28-2010-poem-day-challenge.html
A wall is not a door.
-Weasel
On tiny insects, big cities, and no important lessons learned:
Grassy Splatters of a Hint
I was thinking of my dad today, when I penned this. “C’est la Vie”:
http://caraholman.wordpress.com/2010/04/28/2010-napowrimo-28/
Remembering the teacher who complained that all my stories were sad, my “aha” moment was realizing I should try to make people smile.
http://sheiladeethdrabbles.blogspot.com/2010/04/april-napowrimo-28.html
…here is the NaPoWriMo #28 poem I wrote after following Julie Jordan Scott’s intuitive prompt — Sanity…
Not a very heightened sense of intuition in mine…even though I did follow the directions…
http://rrosenchang.blogspot.com
Sorry, all, I admire your inspired work but this is the best I can do today:
A Haiku:
son has transferred schools
found a better match for him
in tuition now
haikujunky replied:
April 28th, 2010 at 2:45 pm
!
When memory fails, all you have is your gut.
http://tinacelio.wordpress.com/2010/04/28/an-fyi/
This is a true story. And now, all these years later, I have a poem out of it.
http://mmw113.blogspot.com/2010/04/napowrimo-28-not-result-he-expected.html
blech I can’t write a thing this morning. well, I guess I did write that…
What an epiphany: http://kagerrr.tumblr.com/post/556526693/april28thpoem
Night Owl
http://pamelavillars.wordpress.com/2010/04/28/april-28-10-night-owl/
This one was a challenge, since I work at home alone and rarely put on the radio. So – “I Write Whatever the Little Voices Tell Me”
http://www.cathymcguire.com/poetry.htm
my link for day #28
http://caroleesherwood.wordpress.com/2010/04/28/napowrimo-28/
Here’s a poem on something of a “freeze-frame” moment that features a slug
I started with a moment—followed the directions and came to a place I didn’t know I was heading.
http://word-painting.blogspot.com/2010/04/one-upon-time.html
Claire On The Front Steps
http://herwordsbloomed.blogspot.com/2010/04/napowrimo-28-intuition.html
http://poetry-life-distilled.blogspot.com/2010/04/napowrimo-day-28.html
Surreal, just a bit, to write from my own prompt. Thank you, everyone who participated!
http://juliejordanscott.typepad.com/jjspoetry/2010/04/coat-of-convention-napowrimo-day-28-two-poems-to-go.html
and for today
This is one of my shortest – day 28
http://lanijo.com/poetry/i-am-five
well, there’s only 2 days left & I haven’t really followed directions yet. ok, sorta–a found poem with conversational snippets.
http://another2doors.wordpress.com/2010/04/28/the-theoretical-physicist-goes-to-music-class/
Here is mine #28….another acrostic that seemed to work….thanks JULIE for the prompt and THANKS to ALLLLLLLLLL who provided prompts for this month….I think they were allllll great…mine is at
http://www.waynepitchko.blogspot.com
Off prompt today.
http://poiesis3.blogspot.com/2010/04/napowrimo-28-poem-in-my-pocket.html
A somewhat loose interpretation of the prompt… To Do Today
Waiting for the big bang…
http://redshoepoet.blogspot.com/2010/04/napowrimo-28.html
Wonder-Whispers
http://nothinghypothetical.wordpress.com/2010/04/28/wonder-whispers/
and this one
Off-prompt again today:
http://memali.posterous.com/2830
Thanks for the prompt Julie!
http://flaubert-poetrywithme.blogspot.com/2010/04/what-bunch-of.html