by the Read Write Poem Staff
With words like codswallop, it’s clear that Read Write Poem member Marie Gauthier means business! Now is not the time to let your NaPoWriMo work ethic slack.
Clichés, idioms, what-have-you. As points of inspiration, you might think they’re dead in the water, but that’s a load of codswallop. Time spent investigating word origins is never time wasted. “Left in the lurch” is one example. Here’s what The Phrase Finder says about it:
There are suggestions that lurch is a noun originating from lych – the Old English word for corpse, which gives the name to the covered lych-gates that adjoin many English churches. The theory goes that jilted brides would be ‘left in the lych (or lurch)’ when the errant bridegroom failed to appear. The lych-gate is where coffins are left when waiting for the clergyman to arrive to conduct a funeral service. Both theories are plausible but there’s no evidence to support either and in fact lych and lurch are unrelated.
For our purposes, it doesn’t matter whether the derivation pans out as true or not. Your inquiries are meant to be catalytic crackers. Surely “lych-gate” stirs an idea or two!
So for today’s prompt, travel a while on The Phrase Finder website until you find the phrase or phrase origin that most interests you.
There are no hard and fast rules. The Phrase Finder has phrases from the Bible, from Shakespeare, phrases coined at sea, something for every taste. Take some notes, do a free-write or three, and see where a little word exploration takes you.![]()
Reminders for everyone
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What a Piece of Work is Man
Dan Rako replied:
April 24th, 2010 at 12:19 am
With all due credit to my son…
As cold as stone
We both stuck
Ourselves to the
…
poemsotherwise.blogspot.com
Please excuse me, I am off my game tonight. I’ve just had oral surgery.
So, only two poems this time around, and I am posting early so I can go to sleep. NaPoWriMo #24
rob kistner replied:
April 24th, 2010 at 1:19 am
I almost forgot… His Cane
rob kistner replied:
April 24th, 2010 at 11:16 am
And then there is this: Evensong
Today I’ll stray from the prompt and write a simple haiku for Tiger, a friend’s cat.
Orange fur still soft
Purr in your throat now silence
Rest in piece, Tiger!
Maybe I’ll come back to the prompt later… sounds interesting.
Stan Ski replied:
April 24th, 2010 at 1:06 am
Maybe Tiger will come back – 8 more times!
Jaelle replied:
April 24th, 2010 at 1:20 am
I think he used his last life now. He roamed a lot. Still, my friend is in tears.
There will be more Tigers eventually, I’m sure.
(and that should have been “peace” not “piece” – drat!)
Jaelle replied:
April 24th, 2010 at 1:19 am
S***! That should have been “peace” *argh*
Marie replied:
April 24th, 2010 at 9:54 am
I rather liked it as “piece”.
Here’s mine: GOOD MEN AND TRUE
Jaelle replied:
April 24th, 2010 at 1:25 am
Wow, that’s awesome! I love how you drew the “wait” over to the next stanza, and how you ended on the Good-bye note. Really… good
I was absolutely intrigued by the Nautical Phrases and this is the result. Calling it Sailor’s Lament sounds a bit trite tough…
The rope is gone all overboard
Well to it’s bitter end.
Between the devil and the deep blue sea
There’s nothing more to mend
Well high and dry they’ve hung us up.
Myself and all the rest.
All at sea we cut and run.
Still hoping for the best.
Robin replied:
April 24th, 2010 at 7:46 am
Very well done, Jaelle! You certainly got quite a few in there quite seamlessly.
Janet replied:
April 24th, 2010 at 7:48 am
evocative
My prompts was to write Septolets
I combined it with the phrase/word origin (wonderful prompt it is too) prompt.
It’s on my facebook
and here:
http://dash30dash.ning.com/profiles/blogs/napowrimo-day-24-poems-writing
Keep writing on this last weekend of NaPoWriMo!!!
Used the phrase “may you live in interesting times” for a villanelle…
Bless, Curse Me Now
Used a few phrases. Thanks Marie for a great prompt. I unashamedly suffer from Bardolatory.
‘A Woman Scorned’
http://rallentanda.blogspot.com
Well, I am actually finished with mine. I think?
http://flaubert-poetrywithme.blogspot.com/2010/04/oh-my-brothers-napowrimo-24.html
Thanks Marie!
I’m definitely flagging at this point, but I don’t want to give up since I’ve managed one a day so far. Here is my view of Parliament as a three -ringed circus
And now, off to the phrase finder for the next one.
A bunch of namby-pamby
A multitude of phrase-atudes.
http://babblingoninbabylon.com/blog
You’ll find Zero Tolerance at
http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com
Cross your fingers that it works!
vivienne Blake replied:
April 24th, 2010 at 3:22 am
And you will also find an old one: In Defence of Clichés
I was raised on a plethora of german proverbs. Even though I only lived in germany for 11 years they seem to regularly pop into my head.
So that is what I based today’s poem on.
http://ingeborgsblog.blogspot.com/2010/04/napowrimo-24-find-phrase.html
My poem is here:
http://ragbone.wordpress.com
The Dancing Black Bear
We didn’t let sleeping bears lie,
but snuck into their caves
thick with grudges to wake them,
remove their claws, wear their fangs
on chains round their necks.
The carny was waiting with coins,
for us to lead the bear down
into the valley, an iron collar
clasped round its fur,
they could teach its growls
to sound like song, teach it to dance
by it coals beneath its paws.
You showed your scars to the gypsy
to haggle the price, you’d trade
the exposure of teeth marks on my breast
for a few extra coins, though the wound was old,
if you could hold it to the light it was silver,
the circumference of a feral kiss,
but no one did this, just quickly
exchanged the bear for the coins.
We had enough to buy meat
and drink vodka for a week,
you held me in your arms
and I swayed some nights,
your breath like raw
with something sleeping.
Small steps, a caged bear dancing
Hunted and caught
My tentative feet.
I have just posted today’s poem on my blog at http://thelaughinghousewife.wordpress.com
I went with “as old as the hills” for Old Hill.
Here’s my modest offering:
http://melrosemusings.blogspot.com/2010/04/saturday-spotlight-and-napowrimo-day-24.html
The Hard Truth/Hard As Nails at Scrambled, Not Fried
i tried bending the phrases
but the horseman got me
http://crankymango.blogspot.com/2010/04/horripilation.html
http://mothersparrow.wordpress.com/2010/04/24/nesting-season/
Huzzah! for Saturday!
A poem based on the life on Andre-Jacque Garnerin, the first regularly successful parachutist.
Read or listen to “Descent” here:
http://jasoncrane.org/2010/04/24/poem-descent/
Enjoy,
Jason
This lady walked West 7th Street here for years.
http://herwordsbloomed.blogspot.com/2010/04/napowrimo-24-find-phrase.html
Working from the phrase “God is dead”
http://novaheart.wordpress.com/2010/04/24/poem-42410-swallow-this-sunshine/
Is it really Day 24? Tough one but happy to be posting much earlier in the day…
http://alienfireworks.blogspot.com/2010/04/misunderstood.html
I lead my horse to water. http://rhiannonproblematising.wordpress.com/2010/04/24/napowrimo-24-not-made-to-drink/
Here’s today’s drafty-draft:
http://memali.posterous.com/2430
Deserts. Not my best contribution, I must say.
Funny where my nautical phrase went.
come back ashore
something strange for the cliché “damned if you do, damned if you don’t”:
http://caroleesherwood.wordpress.com/2010/04/24/napowrimo-24/
Apologies in advance – I’m on a political bender and witnessed a nasty collision between a recent visitor to our region and this prompt:
Wench in Mourning
http://jdmackenzie.blogspot.com/2010/04/red-wench-in-mourning.html
Here is my answer to the prompt:
http://poemblaze.wordpress.com/2010/04/24/cliche-napowrimo-24/
And then there is this for NaPoWriMo day 24: Evensong
hi there,
I choose “High and dry” and poem is here:
http://stiletto.crisopeya.eu/2010/04/24/napowrimo-24-find-a-phrase/
even in the midst of prom preparations — a poem:
http://another2doors.wordpress.com/2010/04/24/all-was-as-cold-as-any-stone/
Busy day, got grandson staying over and Little league games, so I’m off prompt. If the game is slow, I’ll take out pen and paper and tackle my phrase.
http://lanijo.com/poetry/according-rauschenberg
“Carpe Diem” in the country
The world at first light emerges
And seduces you with possibilities
Nothing is clear, all is promise
Trees emerge from the darkness
And resume their places. Closer
To the ground wisps of fog slip
Past like ghosts who have remained
Too long. Everything they have
Touched is wet with dew.
You step outside because the birds
Are singing like summer will never
End and you will have forever
To realize your dreams. Sleep
Still lingers in your eyelids and
You rub them as the sun bursts
Forth into brightness. This day
Has spread itself out before you,
It is yours to do with as you wish
And now you notice a scattering
Of small yellow leaves that have
Covered the lawn and garden.
In your retirement there are small
Tasks to perform, but there is no
Hurry so you wander into the kitchen
And pour yourself a cup of freshly
Perked coffee. You sit outside, on
The picnic table and watch a flock
Of blackbirds grow larger as
More birds arrive . Their chattering
Grows intense and they pay no attention
To you as they plan the journey they
Will soon be taking to the lands where
The sun shines all year long.
Ehh… http://goo.gl/fb/tnxG5
Another great prompt! This was such a hoot, I could write until the cows come home, but the day is a wasting, there’s mountains to climb, and now it’s time to grab the day by the horns and do a 23 skidoo! “Poet Envy”:
http://caraholman.wordpress.com/2010/04/24/2010-napowrimo-24/
OK, I was able to get it done – day 24 with a phrase
http://lanijo.com/poetry/im-my-wits-end
I chose “Whipping Boy” with its sordid little history:
Tips for Being a Whipping Boy (or Girl)
“We have had better times” – prompt # 24
http://synecdochicstuff.blogspot.com/
Here’s a quick one off prompt, however I am going to try out the prompt later on today. This one is called Evening:
http://systematicweasel.blogspot.com/2010/04/evening-4-24-2010-poem-day-challenge.html
It is a combo poem today, began an ‘evening poem’ (prompt from Poetic Asides) and completed with a proverb that can’t get more poetic – http://umaathreya.blogsome.com/2010/04/24/will-you-come/
Could not let go by yesterday’s prompt from Poetic Asides, wrote this in response – http://umaathreya.blogsome.com/2010/04/24/long-distance-families-dont-crumble/
Another fun one! Thanks, Marie. I clicked on “G” and couldn’t stop. Here’s “Go”:
http://robin-turner.blogspot.com/2010/04/go-love-poem.html
Marija Sanderling replied:
April 24th, 2010 at 4:18 pm
I like the rhythm of your poem “Go.”
I have never posted two poems in one day. But I have always been curious about this phrase. Now I know …
http://flaubert-poetrywithme.blogspot.com/2010/04/medieval-erasmus-said.html
I used “Hand over fist”… not my best work, but it is done. There was a point this morning I didn’t know if it would be or not.
http://juliejordanscott.typepad.com/jjspoetry/2010/04/april-24-napowrimo-poem-freedom-last-night.html
I put one or two together with one or two and found
a blind elephant in the mens room
Swords into Ploughshares
http://sheiladeethdrabbles.blogspot.com/2010/04/april-napowrimo-24.html
Where angels fear to tread.
http://www.gather.com/viewArticle.action?articleId=281474978195397
childhood memories
http://marcieaf.blogspot.com/2010/04/napowrimo-day.html
http://web.me.com/susansonnen/Susan_Sonnens_musings/Blog/Entries/2010/4/24_NaPoWriMo%2C_Day_24.html
I enjoyed this prompt.
Familiar phrases and fresh phrases conspire, to challenge the reader’s self-esteem.
Find ‘The Reader of this Poem’ at http://www.gregoconnell.com
This was one of the prompts that I actually followed as it was set down.
My poem can be found here: http://word-painting.blogspot.com/2010/04/blueprint.html
Here are two attempts.
http://daily-yawp.blogspot.com/
Marija Sanderling replied:
April 24th, 2010 at 4:16 pm
Love the pirate poem! Very imaginative.
(This is a really dumb poem, but I enjoyed the phrase finder. The one I chose was “floozy in the jacuzzi.)
The stiletto in the ghetto
down on O’Connell Street
Replaced the floozy in the jacuzzi
in Dublin, so they say
I say if I ever
in some irony in life
have a bronze statue made
in memory of my strife
do not place it in Dublin
where the names turn quick
as they have with James Joyce
That prick with a stick.
stiletto replied:
April 24th, 2010 at 5:47 pm
I like the way it starts
and it´s placed in Dublin!
Inspired by the phrase: “A leopard cannot change its spots.”
the leopard
Villanelle and prompt today. Woowoo!
http://yearofthebooks.wordpress.com/2010/04/24/poem-a-day-day-24/
High and Dry: http://poetry.disorderedcosmos.com/2010/04/napowrimo-24-high-and-dry/
“Joseph” at http://1965footprints.blogspot.com
Just wanted to say how fun it’s been doing this challenge with all of you. With less than a week to go, am reposting my tribute to this craziness(;
http://alienfireworks.blogspot.com/2010/04/napowrimo.html
http://www.robertlunday.net/2010/04/poem-24-3-am.html
back from a break to get back on track with
this one
This one fit right in with yesterday’s rather “hog wild” purchase: “For the Birds”
http://www.cathymcguire.com/poetry.htm
I do like this prompt. but I’m wearing out…
http://pamelavillars.wordpress.com/2010/04/24/april-24-10-napowrimo-haiku/
What marvelous results! So glad you all had fun with this prompt!
Phew! Written in the car…so definitely still in draft form…
“The Pen Is Mightier Than the Sword”
http://rrosenchang.blogspot.com
Okay…written in the car (!) so definitely still a draft…
The Pen is Mightier Than The Sword
http://rrosenchang.blogspot.com
Not sure how I got to this from the prompt, but here it is:
http://just-somestuff.blogspot.com/2010/04/napowrimo-24-old-flame-walks-past.html
The etymology of phrases! Yum. (There’s probably a word for it other than etymology of phrases.) I could spend days on that site.
Had to just take a peek and choose quickly today, and I was drawn towards batten down the: Hatches.
I truly hope I get to read some of your poems tomorrow. But until then, here’s my offering of the day “Faith: thereby hangs a tale”
http://poiesis3.blogspot.com/2010/04/napowrimo-day-24-faith-thereby-hangs.html
“Kicking the Bucket”
http://www.redbubble.com/people/nebsy/writing/5063971-napowrimo-24
barbara_y replied:
April 24th, 2010 at 7:55 pm
clever.