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	<title>Comments on: napowrimo #16: what&#8217;s that smell?</title>
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		<title>By: lauraajk</title>
		<link>http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2010/04/16/napowrimo-prompt-16-whats-that-smell/comment-page-2/#comment-20152</link>
		<dc:creator>lauraajk</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 20 Apr 2010 22:06:35 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>http://poetry-life-distilled.blogspot.com/2010/04/napowrimo-day-15.html</description>
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		<title>By: juliejordanscott</title>
		<link>http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2010/04/16/napowrimo-prompt-16-whats-that-smell/comment-page-2/#comment-19959</link>
		<dc:creator>juliejordanscott</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 19 Apr 2010 17:32:37 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I have notebook after notebook after notebook, Vivienne. I am amazed sometimes by what I find later!</description>
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		<title>By: juliejordanscott</title>
		<link>http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2010/04/16/napowrimo-prompt-16-whats-that-smell/comment-page-2/#comment-19923</link>
		<dc:creator>juliejordanscott</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 19 Apr 2010 12:44:19 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>From &quot;It was growth&quot; to &quot;engorged by the rising until there were no gaps&quot; I was swept up in the memory.

These lines:

the smell swelling further
than father’s breath or the toes of stockings
surrendered over the radiator, your underwear
hoisted over the bath on a pole like a flag.

were especially evocative for me.

Thank you for writing to my prompt!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>From &#8220;It was growth&#8221; to &#8220;engorged by the rising until there were no gaps&#8221; I was swept up in the memory.</p>
<p>These lines:</p>
<p>the smell swelling further<br />
than father’s breath or the toes of stockings<br />
surrendered over the radiator, your underwear<br />
hoisted over the bath on a pole like a flag.</p>
<p>were especially evocative for me.</p>
<p>Thank you for writing to my prompt!</p>
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		<title>By: laurashannon</title>
		<link>http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2010/04/16/napowrimo-prompt-16-whats-that-smell/comment-page-2/#comment-19797</link>
		<dc:creator>laurashannon</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 18 Apr 2010 19:06:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>This was a surprise. 

http://thebooklife.wordpress.com/2010/04/18/4-16/</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This was a surprise. </p>
<p><a href="http://thebooklife.wordpress.com/2010/04/18/4-16/" rel="nofollow">http://thebooklife.wordpress.com/2010/04/18/4-16/</a></p>
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		<title>By: angela readman</title>
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		<dc:creator>angela readman</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 18 Apr 2010 10:13:33 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I know i&#039;m supposed to post on the day of prompt, but my internet has been off for 3 days- finally got it fixed! so catching up.


Yeast

It was growth, everything warming up,
the whole week of the house’s
sweet and sour had their bout
in the old baby bath you used for a bowl.
With the chime of your spoon on the rim
the sugar, yeast and flour punched each other out,
their blows hung their gloves up in the air.

On bread making day, yeast was everywhere, 
Expanding, breathing, scum rose to the surface
of a glass jug, the smell swelling further
than father’s breath or the toes of stockings
surrendered over the radiator, your underwear 
hoisted over the bath on a pole like a flag.

Not one of us was allowed to open a window,
as you poured the yeast into a white well
your hands clicked as you pounded the dough.
The rising was temperamental , affected
by a whim of air, a slammed door, a dirty look, 
and the whole bowl would flop, smooth to
wrinkled, an empty bag pale as a belly 

Before the men came home, you tucked in your lips
for raw dough, threw it onto the counter 
with a soft slap, your ring cut half circles 
into the surface, the small delves of eight knuckles
engorged by the rising until there were no gaps.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I know i&#8217;m supposed to post on the day of prompt, but my internet has been off for 3 days- finally got it fixed! so catching up.</p>
<p>Yeast</p>
<p>It was growth, everything warming up,<br />
the whole week of the house’s<br />
sweet and sour had their bout<br />
in the old baby bath you used for a bowl.<br />
With the chime of your spoon on the rim<br />
the sugar, yeast and flour punched each other out,<br />
their blows hung their gloves up in the air.</p>
<p>On bread making day, yeast was everywhere,<br />
Expanding, breathing, scum rose to the surface<br />
of a glass jug, the smell swelling further<br />
than father’s breath or the toes of stockings<br />
surrendered over the radiator, your underwear<br />
hoisted over the bath on a pole like a flag.</p>
<p>Not one of us was allowed to open a window,<br />
as you poured the yeast into a white well<br />
your hands clicked as you pounded the dough.<br />
The rising was temperamental , affected<br />
by a whim of air, a slammed door, a dirty look,<br />
and the whole bowl would flop, smooth to<br />
wrinkled, an empty bag pale as a belly </p>
<p>Before the men came home, you tucked in your lips<br />
for raw dough, threw it onto the counter<br />
with a soft slap, your ring cut half circles<br />
into the surface, the small delves of eight knuckles<br />
engorged by the rising until there were no gaps.</p>
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		<title>By: Ingeborg</title>
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		<dc:creator>Ingeborg</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 18 Apr 2010 10:07:51 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Well I gave up trying with objects around me so am going back to a smell from two weeks ago that always evokes strong memories.

http://ingeborgsblog.blogspot.com/2010/04/napowrimo-april-16th-smell.html</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Well I gave up trying with objects around me so am going back to a smell from two weeks ago that always evokes strong memories.</p>
<p><a href="http://ingeborgsblog.blogspot.com/2010/04/napowrimo-april-16th-smell.html" rel="nofollow">http://ingeborgsblog.blogspot.com/2010/04/napowrimo-april-16th-smell.html</a></p>
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		<title>By: Maya</title>
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		<dc:creator>Maya</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 18 Apr 2010 04:10:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;ve been having difficulty leaving comments here the past several days (seems to be a problem with my computer), but now it seems to be working - here&#039;s my offering from yesterday.

http://mayaganesan.blogspot.com/2010/04/napowrimo-16.html</description>
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<p><a href="http://mayaganesan.blogspot.com/2010/04/napowrimo-16.html" rel="nofollow">http://mayaganesan.blogspot.com/2010/04/napowrimo-16.html</a></p>
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		<title>By: Sandra</title>
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		<dc:creator>Sandra</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 17 Apr 2010 19:49:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Wonderful! Huntington Beach was one of my favourite places in the world when I was young. Thx for taking me back there today :)</description>
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		<title>By: seashelllz</title>
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		<dc:creator>seashelllz</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 17 Apr 2010 16:23:45 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>http://seashelllz.livejournal.com/116180.html</description>
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		<title>By: toxi1</title>
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		<dc:creator>toxi1</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 17 Apr 2010 12:59:58 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>late night.


http://self-intoxication.deviantart.com/art/Untitled-Again-161015696</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>late night.</p>
<p><a href="http://self-intoxication.deviantart.com/art/Untitled-Again-161015696" rel="nofollow">http://self-intoxication.deviantart.com/art/Untitled-Again-161015696</a></p>
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		<title>By: Sable</title>
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		<dc:creator>Sable</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 17 Apr 2010 09:32:53 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Sweet and sad--like the tide carrying the words away like a promise...</description>
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		<title>By: Robert Wynne</title>
		<link>http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2010/04/16/napowrimo-prompt-16-whats-that-smell/comment-page-2/#comment-19556</link>
		<dc:creator>Robert Wynne</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 17 Apr 2010 08:16:05 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Huntington Beach


Driving south on PCH, windows down
and the Pacific Ocean exhales
its salty breath. I remember being thrown

into that water, high school weekends
crowded around a fire pit
waiting to see how long a soda could last

before the flames coaxed it into a geyser.
Coat hangers gave their lives
for hot dogs and marshmallows

only to end up bent, charred
and hoarding heat in cool grey ash.
The aroma is acrid and nostalgic

as it reaches the street, and I remember
sand between my toes, waves tickling foam
across my feet, moonlight bathing

my pale form. The scent intoxicates
but I always forget how lonely I was
on that beach, how certain

I would never be happy enough
to remember Coke splashing down,
pooling in the flickering glow

while all the couples snuck away
to dark lifeguard towers
and I drew words in wet sand,

watched the tide carry them away
like a promise.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Huntington Beach</p>
<p>Driving south on PCH, windows down<br />
and the Pacific Ocean exhales<br />
its salty breath. I remember being thrown</p>
<p>into that water, high school weekends<br />
crowded around a fire pit<br />
waiting to see how long a soda could last</p>
<p>before the flames coaxed it into a geyser.<br />
Coat hangers gave their lives<br />
for hot dogs and marshmallows</p>
<p>only to end up bent, charred<br />
and hoarding heat in cool grey ash.<br />
The aroma is acrid and nostalgic</p>
<p>as it reaches the street, and I remember<br />
sand between my toes, waves tickling foam<br />
across my feet, moonlight bathing</p>
<p>my pale form. The scent intoxicates<br />
but I always forget how lonely I was<br />
on that beach, how certain</p>
<p>I would never be happy enough<br />
to remember Coke splashing down,<br />
pooling in the flickering glow</p>
<p>while all the couples snuck away<br />
to dark lifeguard towers<br />
and I drew words in wet sand,</p>
<p>watched the tide carry them away<br />
like a promise.</p>
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		<title>By: Sable</title>
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		<dc:creator>Sable</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 17 Apr 2010 06:56:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>At the wire today:
http://alienfireworks.blogspot.com/2010/04/rose-and-saffron.html</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>At the wire today:<br />
<a href="http://alienfireworks.blogspot.com/2010/04/rose-and-saffron.html" rel="nofollow">http://alienfireworks.blogspot.com/2010/04/rose-and-saffron.html</a></p>
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		<title>By: Neil Reid</title>
		<link>http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2010/04/16/napowrimo-prompt-16-whats-that-smell/comment-page-2/#comment-19544</link>
		<dc:creator>Neil Reid</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 17 Apr 2010 06:06:42 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>NaPoWriMo #16 &lt;a href=&quot;http://bearlyaudible.wordpress.com/2010/04/16/unpacked-napowrimo-16/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;&lt;strong&gt;Unpacked&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/a&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>NaPoWriMo #16 <a href="http://bearlyaudible.wordpress.com/2010/04/16/unpacked-napowrimo-16/" rel="nofollow"><strong>Unpacked</strong></a></p>
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		<title>By: ddickens</title>
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		<dc:creator>ddickens</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 17 Apr 2010 05:57:29 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Anomie
http://nothinghypothetical.wordpress.com/2010/04/16/anomie/</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Anomie<br />
<a href="http://nothinghypothetical.wordpress.com/2010/04/16/anomie/" rel="nofollow">http://nothinghypothetical.wordpress.com/2010/04/16/anomie/</a></p>
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		<title>By: azha irving</title>
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		<dc:creator>azha irving</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 17 Apr 2010 05:25:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;a href=&quot;http://artofsoul.wordpress.com/2010/04/17/scent-of-a-woman/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Where there is Smoke&lt;/a&gt;</description>
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		<title>By: Kelly</title>
		<link>http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2010/04/16/napowrimo-prompt-16-whats-that-smell/comment-page-2/#comment-19531</link>
		<dc:creator>Kelly</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 17 Apr 2010 05:10:33 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Well done, Therese. I especially like this line:
Youth is caught/ like a bubble inside/ a hardened syrup</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Well done, Therese. I especially like this line:<br />
Youth is caught/ like a bubble inside/ a hardened syrup</p>
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		<title>By: Robert Lunday</title>
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		<dc:creator>Robert Lunday</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 17 Apr 2010 05:01:56 +0000</pubDate>
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		<title>By: Kelly</title>
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		<dc:creator>Kelly</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 17 Apr 2010 04:54:49 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Great prompt! I smelled the pages of an old book. I expected my memories to be related to libraries or school, but instead it led me here. Needs some work, but it&#039;s a start... 

~~~~~~~~~ 

At My Grandparents’ House

Summer, circa 1975
Late afternoon dissolves into evening. 
Shadows lengthen on fresh cut grass, 
Crickets sing their lullaby.

In the kitchen surrounded by warm pecan cupboards 
Grandma and Mom start dinner.
In the living room Grandpa sits in his plaid chair 
smoking a pipe and talking with Dad.

Sent to the basement for a jar of pickles,
I descend the wooden steps, pretending
it’s one of my brother’s dares—
I know I can’t reach the chain to turn on the light,

So I cross the thin rugs on the concrete floor
in the dim light from the stairwell,
past fishing poles, birdseed, laundry baskets,
past cardboard boxes full of National Geographics.

I reach the white shelf, the rows of Ball jars—  
green beans, wrinkly tomatoes, apple butter, 
I snatch the pickles and run 
fast as I can, back up the stairs.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great prompt! I smelled the pages of an old book. I expected my memories to be related to libraries or school, but instead it led me here. Needs some work, but it&#8217;s a start&#8230; </p>
<p>~~~~~~~~~ </p>
<p>At My Grandparents’ House</p>
<p>Summer, circa 1975<br />
Late afternoon dissolves into evening.<br />
Shadows lengthen on fresh cut grass,<br />
Crickets sing their lullaby.</p>
<p>In the kitchen surrounded by warm pecan cupboards<br />
Grandma and Mom start dinner.<br />
In the living room Grandpa sits in his plaid chair<br />
smoking a pipe and talking with Dad.</p>
<p>Sent to the basement for a jar of pickles,<br />
I descend the wooden steps, pretending<br />
it’s one of my brother’s dares—<br />
I know I can’t reach the chain to turn on the light,</p>
<p>So I cross the thin rugs on the concrete floor<br />
in the dim light from the stairwell,<br />
past fishing poles, birdseed, laundry baskets,<br />
past cardboard boxes full of National Geographics.</p>
<p>I reach the white shelf, the rows of Ball jars—<br />
green beans, wrinkly tomatoes, apple butter,<br />
I snatch the pickles and run<br />
fast as I can, back up the stairs.</p>
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		<title>By: Shari Smothers</title>
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		<dc:creator>Shari Smothers</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 17 Apr 2010 04:48:36 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>It was an interesting, busy day. Took me a while to get to this. Sorry I had to rush it.

My poem for today: &lt;a href=&quot;http://slstellingstories.com/2010/04/smells-like-home/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Smells like Home&lt;/a&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>It was an interesting, busy day. Took me a while to get to this. Sorry I had to rush it.</p>
<p>My poem for today: <a href="http://slstellingstories.com/2010/04/smells-like-home/" rel="nofollow">Smells like Home</a></p>
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