by the Read Write Poem Staff
Nicole Nicholson has a big challenge for us on Day 14: Write a cleave poem. What’s a cleave poem, you ask? It’s three poems in one.
The whole idea works something like this (quoting the creator of the form, Dr. Phuoc-Tan Diep): “In its most basic form it is three poems: two parallel ‘vertical’ poems (left and right)…[with] a third ‘horizontal’ poem being the fusion of the vertical poems read together.” He goes on to say, “One of my aims was to examine how something can be more than the sum of its parts and can be 3 in 1: synergy, fusion, co-operation, dialectics, marriage, interdependence, teamwork and The Trinity.”
More info can be found at The Cleave (including samples) and at the “cleave” entry at Writing.com.
Happy writing! (Editor’s note: A good idea, for those who fear the cleave is too challenging: Try a short one or simply try a form you have never tried before.) ![]()
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Love the cleave idea, but will have to save it for a day when I have more time. All I could manage today was this lame haiku.
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I keep the red shoes
slingback heels, a gleaming key
To another self
Kelly replied:
April 15th, 2010 at 9:43 am
Draft 2, after some sleep…
I keep the red shoes
Sleek slingback pumps, secret key
To another self
while you were walking and texting
april 14, 2010
you missed the black oak
cup the fading sun,
turning light to liquid,
you missed the soft breeze
whisk seed pods afloat,
turning leaf to light,
and you missed the evening
close around the day
like fingers curling
around a seed pod
cupped in an open palm,
turning light to night
Kayin Wong replied:
April 15th, 2010 at 7:08 am
I love that this poem can be read in so many different combination of ways! Beautiful and well done!
Kelly replied:
April 15th, 2010 at 9:44 am
Love this. Beautiful.
hard to get these to show up correctly format-wise
http://seashelllz.livejournal.com/115466.html
Kayin Wong replied:
April 15th, 2010 at 7:03 am
Do . This page has a sample: http://www.w3schools.com/HTML/tryit.asp?filename=tryhtml_layout
Then you need to text align=”right” for your left column. Adjust the padding to increase or decrease the cell space between the two columns, and make each column less than 50%.
The Cleave Poem. Great Concept but you nearly killed me. There are even a couple of things I love in this one (which immediately brings to mind a writing instructor who demanded that we kill our babies. If you’re awake, I hope you’re in a far different time zone than me and please have a look.
http://menremainboys.wordpress.com/
OFF PROMPT.
http://self-intoxication.deviantart.com/art/Thirty-Apologies-160788152
My poem is here:
http://ragbone.wordpress.com
Behind w/my prompts, due to work. You have no idea. Anyways, this is my attempt at prompt 14. Definitely would like to explore this form further in the future.
http://inthemindswell.blogspot.com/2010/04/cleave-to-me-napowrimo-14.html
The Cleave was a bit too much for me to attempt, I’m afraid. So I decided to go with a more compact form of writing, what I call a boxed poem (for want of a better name. I’m open to suggestions and if anyone knows if such forms have been attempted before). Here they are.
Holy Trinity
Love, truth, and fidelity,
Trust, love, and faithfulness,
Father, fulfillment, and love.
Http://www.inkingthepaper.blogspot.com
I’m off prompt, with a poem inspired by today’s Titanic anniversary–
http://theresebroderick.wordpress.com
http://tasmith1122.wordpress.com/2010/04/15/rwp-napowrimopoetic-asides-day-14/
safe island
I went with a sonnet in an attempt to try something new: Sonnet for Ho-Ho’s and Ding Dongs.
In case I don’t finish the longer one here are 2 haikus I wrote while remembering summer carnivals
Burnt sugar breezes
bring relief to coaster fans
waiting in long line
and
Humid August air
putrefying spilled cola
on dinosaur tar
Here’s my piece from April 14 – as I have been having problems with the rwp commenting and managed to finally get through today.
http://mayaganesan.blogspot.com/2010/04/napowrimo-14.html
It is very short – these are hard! But I kind of love the idea of this kind of poem.
http://thebooklife.wordpress.com/2010/04/18/4-14/
http://poetry-life-distilled.blogspot.com/2010/04/napowrimo-day-14.html
I loved this form. I’m creating graphics to go with my poems. Here’s this one.
http://www.facebook.com/album.php?aid=175130&id=638476499#!/photo.php?pid=4636462&id=638476499
I loved this form. I’m creating graphics to go with my poems. Here’s this one.
http://bit.ly/9GE6CW
hoping this shortened link works.