by the Read Write Poem Staff
Today, Alan Summers wants us to write poems about “humor in love,” and he has a specific form in mind!
Write and capture humorous incidents related to love in a 5-line love poem called a tanka. (You may even decide to create your own tanka journal for love poems!) Here’s how to write one:
- Describe in concrete terms one or two simple images (two or three lines) from your humorous love encounter, not just what you saw but also what you tasted, touched, smelled or heard.
- What were you were thinking at the time this love encounter happened? Write that down, too, as two or three lines, so you have five lines in total for the poem.
- Think about making the third line of your poem into a pivot line, so that it links to both the previous two lines and to the final two lines.
- Test the tanka by dividing it into two parts so the third line acts both as the last line of the first part and as the first line of the second part. Does each section make sense separately, and then together?
- Think about reducing — and even avoiding — capitalization and punctuation because a tanka needn’t be like a sentence or merely a flat statement.

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big trouble. nothing funny to write about!
I have been waiting to run into my my private “uggggh” prompt, this is it!
Terri Light replied:
April 7th, 2010 at 12:34 pm
Mine too! Good luck to you!!!
I’m in with TEFLON
One of those cases where I immediately had a touchstone story to write about.
In Flagrante Delicto
poemsotherwise.blogspot.com/2010/04/fell-over.html
derrick replied:
April 7th, 2010 at 4:58 am
Hi Jeeves,
This is a good fun memory!
(In your bell poem, is that a view from Meteora by any chance?)
pamela sayers replied:
April 7th, 2010 at 6:25 pm
Jeeves,
This is fun!
Pamela
Oh my! I’m in trouble with this one.
Err.. yep! This image always makes me laugh after all these years
http://redshoepoet.blogspot.com/2010/04/napowrimo-challege-7.html
Uhh…using this prompt was a genuinely bad idea…
Gotta roll with it now, though.
The Value in DIY
Not quite a tanka.
More of a
‘Tankette’
http://rallentanda.blogspot.com
My response: Sandy. Hope you like it
.
Tanka, eh? I suppose it was inevitable. Oh well.
Peace Talks at Scrambled, Not Fried.
…here’s my NaPoWriMo #7 – four for fun, and please make certain you read all the way down…
viviblake replied:
April 7th, 2010 at 3:33 am
This isn’t one poem it’s 4, and brilliant they are too! I like the shape of the first one very much. Shape poems don’t work on here and I don’t know how to post them otherwise!
In for a penny:
Tanka
I hated him then
arrogant bastard he was
my secret lover
unexpectedly gorgeous
I didn’t want it to end
Andy Sewina replied:
April 7th, 2010 at 5:31 am
This is Cool! The writer must have great memories!!
Marie replied:
April 7th, 2010 at 9:26 am
Fabulous.
rallentanda replied:
April 7th, 2010 at 10:50 am
Liked this poem. Ending is awful isn’t it?
rob kistner replied:
April 7th, 2010 at 12:18 pm
The read was touching and engaging – well done Vivi…
…rob
Image & Verse
Alejandra Garza replied:
April 7th, 2010 at 1:03 pm
viviblake – I think we’ve all been there
I love your tanka poem
pamela sayers replied:
April 7th, 2010 at 6:45 pm
Viviblake,
I enjoyed this!
Pamela
Marianne McNamara replied:
April 7th, 2010 at 8:56 pm
Wonderful tanka, Vivi! A bit naughty and definitely appealing!
a married woman
and Chatsworth car-park
in the dead of night
a hurried scramble to leave
under flashing police lights
Ron. Lavalette replied:
April 7th, 2010 at 4:08 am
Oy.
Andy Sewina replied:
April 7th, 2010 at 5:29 am
Phew, this is revealing! I love the fun way you told it!!
Marie replied:
April 7th, 2010 at 9:27 am
This hits the spot.
rob kistner replied:
April 7th, 2010 at 12:19 pm
Been in similar bind! Good read – well done…
…rob
Image & Verse
Jason Riedy replied:
April 7th, 2010 at 4:33 pm
Ha! I love the image and the wonderfully smooth pivot.
pamela sayers replied:
April 7th, 2010 at 6:47 pm
oops! good one!
Pamela
Nothing exciting!
http://melrosemusings.blogspot.com/2010/04/hiatus-napowrimo-day-7.html
Uma Gowrishankar replied:
April 7th, 2010 at 11:27 am
That was a good one Derrick.
Today’s poem from yesterday’s prompt
http://thelaughinghousewife.wordpress.com
phew…
http://ragbone.wordpress.com
I am counting on humility being the new black.
http://www.redbubble.com/people/nebsy/writing/4957388-napowrimo-7
barbara_y replied:
April 7th, 2010 at 1:05 pm
judging from most of these stories, it is.
pamela sayers replied:
April 7th, 2010 at 7:01 pm
Nebs,
Oh my!
Pamela
My prompt was a trip to a gallery.
Water colour window:
http://culdesaccastaways.blogspot.com/2010/04/water-colour-window-unfinished-trees.html
Thanks for the belting prompt Alan, here’s mines: Lovers in the air
I wrote about the funniest attempted pick-up I have experienced. Tanka was fun.
http://poiesis3.blogspot.com/2010/04/napowrimo-day-7.html
He smelled too strongly of peppermint and Stetson
I fumbled for my keys, looking for escape
Strange, he sounded perfect online
His resume boasted a love of nature
I hadn’t known he meant only for his dog
Or – in true tanka form –
He smelled of Stetson
I looked for my escape route
online he was great
where was his love of nature
other than only his dog?
Marie replied:
April 7th, 2010 at 9:28 am
You make it look so easy! Good ones.
rallentanda replied:
April 7th, 2010 at 10:51 am
I like the illustration of both poems.
rob kistner replied:
April 7th, 2010 at 12:42 pm
The read was engaging but seems your encounter was not – well written…
…rob
Image & Verse
pamela sayers replied:
April 7th, 2010 at 7:18 pm
Marija,
I thin that is what you get from the internet.
Good one both of them.
Pamela
Here is my day 7 poem – as always, using the prompt from the day before because of time zone issues.
Holy Cow
Good morning (where applicable)!
My first attempt at a visual poem. You can read or listen to “Malmcolm” here:
http://jasoncrane.org/2010/04/07/poem-malcolm/
All the best,
Jason
Glad that’s over and done with. Bring on tomorrow’s prompt! NaPoWriMo Tanka
vivienne Blake replied:
April 7th, 2010 at 7:17 am
Why are you glad that’s over: yours is great fun, though if true, really frustrating.
Joanne Johns replied:
April 7th, 2010 at 4:15 pm
I struggled with it
It is true, but someone had found them and handed them in so it all worked out in the end!
cut up poem from vintage text
http://mothersparrow.wordpress.com/2010/04/07/above-her-station/
Trying to catch up with the pack – so I jumped a head
Tantric – Funny
vivienne Blake replied:
April 7th, 2010 at 7:18 am
Definitely funny.
vivienne Blake replied:
April 7th, 2010 at 7:47 am
Why does it say my comment is awaiting moderation and then they’ve put it up anyway?
Weird. Also, I altered my avatar crop so that I got a face instead of just a shoulder and now there’s only the top of my head. Grrrr!
Haha!
get there soldier
man! I totally did this prompt yesterday: http://poetry.disorderedcosmos.com/2010/04/napowrimo-6b-lifes-finest-moments/
Now I have to think of another one . . .
This was an enjoyable prompt. I haven’t thought about this incident for years! I may come back later to add another. Today’s poem – Summer Love.
http://bridgeanna.blogspot.com
Blessings on your day!
Like any good love poem set in the Upper Midwest, my poem features cheddarwurst.
What Love Made Me Do
Marie replied:
April 7th, 2010 at 9:32 am
Nothing like a big plate of eggs to start a romance.
pamela sayers replied:
April 7th, 2010 at 7:40 pm
I love quesadillas! Yum! Good one!
Pamela
http://ingeborgsblog.blogspot.com/2010/04/napowrimo-april-7th-love-funny-side.html
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Therese L. Broderick replied:
April 7th, 2010 at 8:15 am
P.S. Alan — Thanks for not requiring us to follow the tanka’s usual 5/7/5/7/7 syllable scheme!
Marie replied:
April 7th, 2010 at 9:29 am
Poignant. Spot-on.
pamela sayers replied:
April 7th, 2010 at 7:44 pm
Therese,
As always a good one!
Pamela
Tougher than most for me.
Bourbon Love Affair
I didn’t quite manage “funny” but I loved the prompt and I love Haikus. Tankas are very similar to that. So here:
—
the springtime of love
is a time of butterflies
they dance in the sun
but when love has grown older
we turn secure of ourselves
—
Honest critique very welcome!
great prompt. but still not sticking to them!
http://travelsinthefloatingelvis.blogspot.com/2010/04/april-7th.html
I enjoyed this one. http://rhiannonproblematising.wordpress.com/2010/04/07/napowrimo-7-the-millers-daughter/
I don’t have a funny love story, so I decided to make one up. I used a culturally popular (or at least I believe it to be culturally popular today)theme and applied to the Tanka format (which is the first time I’ve done a Tanka). Here’s my attempt on today’s prompt.
http://systematicweasel.blogspot.com/2010/04/zombie-tanka-4-7-2010-poem-day.html
A walk in the woods
We planned a happy day
Hiking and an evening together
A three-leaved intruder changed
Our plans to you dabbing
Calamine lotion on my poison ivy.
rallentanda replied:
April 7th, 2010 at 10:55 am
That is a very quaint euphemism Marianv.I have never heard it called that before! Good poem.
pamela sayers replied:
April 7th, 2010 at 8:00 pm
Mariann,
Sweet! Love it!
Pamela
This was hard, actually!
http://poetry.disorderedcosmos.com/2010/04/napowrimo-7a-waking-moments/
my first tanka — not funny, but about love:
http://caroleesherwood.wordpress.com/2010/04/07/napowrimo-7/
This was a bit of a challenge, but I managed it:
Reflections Internal: NaPoWriMo #7: Love (Funny Side Up)
Tanka Poem, new to this….
Halloween Party
Meeting again with small talk
Just another time
Attracting you with Vodka
falling in your arms for good
Read my ‘Lobe Bite’ here
http://umaathreya.blogsome.com/2010/04/07/love-bite/
Read my ‘Love Bite’
http://umaathreya.blogsome.com/2010/04/07/love-bite/
Marie replied:
April 7th, 2010 at 10:43 am
I can’t tell if my comment posted on your blog. Enjoyed this!
Uma Gowrishankar replied:
April 7th, 2010 at 11:31 am
Thanks Marie for your comments, thanks for visiting.
rob kistner replied:
April 7th, 2010 at 1:13 pm
your site wouldn’t let me leave a comment? .. but I liked what I read…
…rob
Uma Gowrishankar replied:
April 7th, 2010 at 10:18 pm
Thanks Rob for reading. Leave your comments and they will show only after I moderate them.
Here’s mine, “Carnal Love”
http://rrosenchang.blogspot.com
she’s been thinking – love, funny side up & I’m supposed to be the victim
It’s good to write a funny poem once in a while!
http://katharinewhitcomb.blogspot.com/2010/04/napowrimo-7-tanka.html
Here’s Dana’s link: http://mygorgeoussomewhere.org/2010/04/07/17-syllable-poems-inspired-by-the-first-15-poems-in-billy-collins%E2%80%99-%E2%80%98sailing-alone-around-the-room%E2%80%99/
Here’s mine, also found at http://1965footprints.blogspot.com
I could not resist your lamb’s wool touch,
your yearning eyes, your jazzy enthusiasm.
Your devotion took me by surprise
when I took you home
from the pound.
Thanks, Alan. This was fun. I may try a few more.
pamela sayers replied:
April 7th, 2010 at 8:58 pm
Marie,
Oh! I love this!
Pamela
I love the daily poetry prompts!
Andrew buys new shoes
Feel like I’m getting into my stride now…
http://becomingamethyst.blogspot.com/2010/04/napowrimo-read-write-poem-prompt-7.html
A tanka, more twisted than funny, and certainly not true:
He pleads
Tete-a-Tete …
http://herwordsbloomed.blogspot.com/2010/04/napowrimo-7-love-funny-side-up.html
New forms be difficult – must practice in the offseason…
http://jdmackenzie.blogspot.com/2010/04/another-try.html
Okay 7 down 23 to go.
http://www.gather.com/viewArticle.action?articleId=281474978157883
hosking replied:
April 7th, 2010 at 11:27 am
This past Valentine’s Day, my hubby decided to start a love journal as a new tradition. He began it with 4 haiku he borrowed. I’m trying to get him to write his own.
Off-topic for today, but it speaks to a kind of humor, and a kind of love.
http://avniously.blogspot.com/2010/04/napowrimo-day-7.html
Off-prompt, but kind of funny, kind of about love.
http://avniously.blogspot.com/2010/04/napowrimo-day-7.html
I think you guys are following me around! This, honest to God, happened yesterday:
http://poemblaze.wordpress.com/2010/04/07/rwp-napowrimo-7/
I liked this one despite myself!
My Funny Love Tanka
Well, it is funny to me!
I’m not sure if I did this one correctly, but I tried anyway.
http://evelynnalfred.blogspot.com/2010/04/napowrimo-readwritepoem-prompt-7.html
Day 7
Wrote a Poem Starter, collaborative Septolet, a poem that works with a picture I was looking at, AND a poem for the Tanka Prompt.
Also will suggesting some prompts to further encourage NaPoWriMo writers starting tonight after 9 p.m. at the dash 30 site
Keep writing!!!!
I have a rotten memory for anecdote, cannot tell a joke, and found this prompt the hardest yet, but every first step is a fresh beginning, I guess. My tanka try is stepping in
Number seven: http://thekitchenbitchponders.blogspot.com/2010/04/national-poetry-writing-month-day-seven.html
Fantastic attempt at tanka. Thank goodness most of you avoided the urban myth of syllable counting, and just attempted darned good short humorous, and contemporary love poems. Alan, With Words
Hungry Love
when in Tokyo at age 17
my son was propositioned by
two women of the night
when they learned his age
they bought him lunch
Marie replied:
April 7th, 2010 at 11:59 am
Adorable. Like your title.
lunch on tuesday replied:
April 7th, 2010 at 3:16 pm
Ha! Wonderful!
Jason Riedy replied:
April 7th, 2010 at 4:50 pm
Lovely, all around. And there’s always the question of when the lunch was relative to the meeting…
Andy Sewina replied:
April 7th, 2010 at 5:41 pm
And you believed him? Nice one Mum!
http://yearofthebooks.wordpress.com/2010/04/07/poem-a-day-day-7/
Whew. My creative spidey-senses are getting tired
My tanka is not very funny but it´s about love encounters.
http://stiletto.crisopeya.eu/2010/04/07/napowrimo-7-love-funny-side-up/
Coffee and Reginald
i love it he hates it
he teases me but i win
the bell rings we’re late again
begrudgingly we leave my car
savoring the few moments left
Actually Stiletto’s is one of the best examples of contemporary tanka.
The humour is delightfully underplayed, and all the more powerful for that, in its humor.
It’s also very much in the style of Machi Tawara who sold over TWO MILLION copies of her first tanka collection called “Salad Anniversary”.
You can’t get a new copy anywhere now, but get one, you will fall in love with tanka just as a whole Japanese generation, and Westerners did.
Alan
With Words
Evelyn N. Alfred replied:
April 7th, 2010 at 4:44 pm
Thank you for your help.
rob kistner replied:
April 7th, 2010 at 6:38 pm
Alan — here is a rhyming tanka I wrote several years ago (June 2008), and has been posted on my site ever since…
my love is a song
a melody transcendent
sung in harmony
but she will not sing along
likely she would sing off key
I had discovered haiku and tanka a wahile back and found them fascinating. I’ve continued writing haiku, but had stopped the tanka. Thank you for reviving my interest. I have several new tanka’s in draft now…
…rob
Image & Verse
Alan Summers replied:
April 7th, 2010 at 7:04 pm
That’s great! Yes, there is something about tanka isn’t there? Good luck with the tanka and there are plenty of quality tanka magazines to consider submitting to!
Alan
With Words
“Elated”
Read it on my blog:
http://redpetals04.wordpress.com/2010/04/07/napowrimo-prompt-7-humor-in-love-tanka/
Or here:
“Elated”
tall bookish stunner
clumsy coy conversation
“Let’s go out sometime…”
nervous shy girl takes a chance
on cloud nine when he says yes
pamela sayers replied:
April 7th, 2010 at 10:28 pm
Ale,
Sweet!
Pamela
number 7 – I am never brief, so this was a great exercise. Even then, I think I stretched out each single line as far as it could go.
http://lanijo.com/poetry/what-do-we-want-justice-when-do-we-want-it-now
Day 7 up at http://www.alienfireworks.blogspot.com
Can we settle for irony instead of humor? Or maybe we could call this morbid humor….
http://mmw113.blogspot.com/2010/04/napowrimo-7-pointless.html
A Tanka! Good exercise. Never thought I’d try to write one of these…
http://just-somestuff.blogspot.com/2010/04/napowrimo-7-they-had-been-standing.html