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		<title>By: Shannon Rayne</title>
		<link>http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2010/04/04/napowrimo-prompt-4-inside-out/comment-page-3/#comment-18063</link>
		<dc:creator>Shannon Rayne</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 09 Apr 2010 14:41:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>My morning coffee
a generation of underpaid immigrant workers
burning the back of my throat.</description>
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a generation of underpaid immigrant workers<br />
burning the back of my throat.</p>
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		<title>By: Jennifer Jilks</title>
		<link>http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2010/04/04/napowrimo-prompt-4-inside-out/comment-page-3/#comment-17367</link>
		<dc:creator>Jennifer Jilks</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 07 Apr 2010 00:25:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;a HREF=&quot;http://myreflectionsmusings.blogspot.com/2010/04/napowrimo-prompt-4.html&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Inside Outside&lt;/A&gt;

Precious little girl
First we play inside
Then we play outside
Then we have to come back out
I glory in her energy
Her determination in youth
Her energy restores me
Vibrance I had lost
Young in spirit
I celebrate a rock thrown into the water
Weeding becomes a project
Bonds us in memory forever
While my old, aching body
Remembers working together
Back indoors we go
Snack time

Can you feel it?
Vibrating up to the universe
My soul sings in joy</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a HREF="http://myreflectionsmusings.blogspot.com/2010/04/napowrimo-prompt-4.html" rel="nofollow">Inside Outside</a></p>
<p>Precious little girl<br />
First we play inside<br />
Then we play outside<br />
Then we have to come back out<br />
I glory in her energy<br />
Her determination in youth<br />
Her energy restores me<br />
Vibrance I had lost<br />
Young in spirit<br />
I celebrate a rock thrown into the water<br />
Weeding becomes a project<br />
Bonds us in memory forever<br />
While my old, aching body<br />
Remembers working together<br />
Back indoors we go<br />
Snack time</p>
<p>Can you feel it?<br />
Vibrating up to the universe<br />
My soul sings in joy</p>
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		<title>By: Liz Shine</title>
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		<dc:creator>Liz Shine</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 06 Apr 2010 21:19:05 +0000</pubDate>
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		<title>By: Kat</title>
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		<dc:creator>Kat</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 06 Apr 2010 15:19:24 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Dreams are daytime life
Reality comes at dusk
Nightmares don’t exist</description>
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Reality comes at dusk<br />
Nightmares don’t exist</p>
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		<title>By: Surazeus</title>
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		<dc:creator>Surazeus</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 06 Apr 2010 01:55:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hymn To Mother Ostara
Angeliad of Surazeus
2010 04 04 
http://open.salon.com/blog/surazeus/2010/04/04/hymn_to_mother_ostara

Daughter of Ishtar who creates new life 
come in darkness of long winter sleep 
and cast rays of light to warm our hearts 
to wake souls from sleep in frozen snow. 

Descend on beams of glowing sunlight 
sweet mother Ostara who gives new life 
and kiss our hearts with your apple lips 
to wake souls from sleep in frozen snow. 

Spirit of Inanna creator of life after death 
scatter seeds to sprout flowers and trees 
in soil of our hearts warmed by your kiss 
to wake souls from sleep in frozen snow. 

Complete poem here: 
http://open.salon.com/blog/surazeus/2010/04/04/hymn_to_mother_ostara</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hymn To Mother Ostara<br />
Angeliad of Surazeus<br />
2010 04 04<br />
<a href="http://open.salon.com/blog/surazeus/2010/04/04/hymn_to_mother_ostara" rel="nofollow">http://open.salon.com/blog/surazeus/2010/04/04/hymn_to_mother_ostara</a></p>
<p>Daughter of Ishtar who creates new life<br />
come in darkness of long winter sleep<br />
and cast rays of light to warm our hearts<br />
to wake souls from sleep in frozen snow. </p>
<p>Descend on beams of glowing sunlight<br />
sweet mother Ostara who gives new life<br />
and kiss our hearts with your apple lips<br />
to wake souls from sleep in frozen snow. </p>
<p>Spirit of Inanna creator of life after death<br />
scatter seeds to sprout flowers and trees<br />
in soil of our hearts warmed by your kiss<br />
to wake souls from sleep in frozen snow. </p>
<p>Complete poem here:<br />
<a href="http://open.salon.com/blog/surazeus/2010/04/04/hymn_to_mother_ostara" rel="nofollow">http://open.salon.com/blog/surazeus/2010/04/04/hymn_to_mother_ostara</a></p>
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		<title>By: laurashannon</title>
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		<dc:creator>laurashannon</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 06 Apr 2010 01:21:19 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>http://thebooklife.wordpress.com/2010/04/05/4-4/</description>
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		<title>By: Susanne Barrett</title>
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		<dc:creator>Susanne Barrett</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 05 Apr 2010 22:18:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Still having blog issues with a custom domain, so I&#039;m posting here.

I didn&#039;t follow the prompt. As the kids finished dying eyes on Saturday, my youngest approached me to show off his favorite egg. Here&#039;s my response:

Easter Life

Proudly he shows his egg
dyed greenly-blue--
a small earth
of continents and seas
enclosed in his palm.

Child, you hold a world:
beneath colored surface
the boiled skin glistens whitely,
encircling sterilized yolk--
a life once possible.

Your life, mine-- 
all life now possible, 
enclosed in His palm
because,
as sun peeps between hills
the stone unhinges,
revealing His deserted tomb.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Still having blog issues with a custom domain, so I&#8217;m posting here.</p>
<p>I didn&#8217;t follow the prompt. As the kids finished dying eyes on Saturday, my youngest approached me to show off his favorite egg. Here&#8217;s my response:</p>
<p>Easter Life</p>
<p>Proudly he shows his egg<br />
dyed greenly-blue&#8211;<br />
a small earth<br />
of continents and seas<br />
enclosed in his palm.</p>
<p>Child, you hold a world:<br />
beneath colored surface<br />
the boiled skin glistens whitely,<br />
encircling sterilized yolk&#8211;<br />
a life once possible.</p>
<p>Your life, mine&#8211;<br />
all life now possible,<br />
enclosed in His palm<br />
because,<br />
as sun peeps between hills<br />
the stone unhinges,<br />
revealing His deserted tomb.</p>
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		<title>By: seashelllz</title>
		<link>http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2010/04/04/napowrimo-prompt-4-inside-out/comment-page-3/#comment-17038</link>
		<dc:creator>seashelllz</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 05 Apr 2010 17:58:01 +0000</pubDate>
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		<title>By: Kelly</title>
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		<dc:creator>Kelly</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 05 Apr 2010 14:35:18 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thank you, Greg! I&#039;ll check out your poem tonight. Just popping in to see the prompt. :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thank you, Greg! I&#8217;ll check out your poem tonight. Just popping in to see the prompt. <img src='http://readwritepoem.org/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Ingeborg</title>
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		<dc:creator>Ingeborg</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 05 Apr 2010 11:58:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>http://ingeborgsblog.blogspot.com/2010/04/napowrimo-april-4th-inside-out.html</description>
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		<title>By: toxi1</title>
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		<dc:creator>toxi1</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 05 Apr 2010 09:32:19 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Ugh.  So tired tonight.  It took me forever to find inspiration and actually start writing.  

This one&#039;s pretty blatantly inspired by the prompt, but I had a lot of fun writing it.


http://self-intoxication.deviantart.com/art/Ephemera-159617106</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Ugh.  So tired tonight.  It took me forever to find inspiration and actually start writing.  </p>
<p>This one&#8217;s pretty blatantly inspired by the prompt, but I had a lot of fun writing it.</p>
<p><a href="http://self-intoxication.deviantart.com/art/Ephemera-159617106" rel="nofollow">http://self-intoxication.deviantart.com/art/Ephemera-159617106</a></p>
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		<title>By: viviblake</title>
		<link>http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2010/04/04/napowrimo-prompt-4-inside-out/comment-page-3/#comment-16950</link>
		<dc:creator>viviblake</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 05 Apr 2010 08:18:59 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;m overwhelmed that everyone seems to like my little bit of doggerel, written in five minutes!  Why can&#039;t I write proper poems any more?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m overwhelmed that everyone seems to like my little bit of doggerel, written in five minutes!  Why can&#8217;t I write proper poems any more?</p>
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		<title>By: viviblake</title>
		<link>http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2010/04/04/napowrimo-prompt-4-inside-out/comment-page-3/#comment-16949</link>
		<dc:creator>viviblake</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 05 Apr 2010 08:14:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Some great images here.  I particularly liked mocha-muddy waters.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Some great images here.  I particularly liked mocha-muddy waters.</p>
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		<title>By: jimmmaaa</title>
		<link>http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2010/04/04/napowrimo-prompt-4-inside-out/comment-page-3/#comment-16938</link>
		<dc:creator>jimmmaaa</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 05 Apr 2010 06:43:45 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Here is my # 4, Held Back:
http://brokeness.blogspot.com/2010/04/napowrimo-4-held-back.html</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Here is my # 4, Held Back:<br />
<a href="http://brokeness.blogspot.com/2010/04/napowrimo-4-held-back.html" rel="nofollow">http://brokeness.blogspot.com/2010/04/napowrimo-4-held-back.html</a></p>
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		<title>By: Ed</title>
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		<dc:creator>Ed</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 05 Apr 2010 06:01:24 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Tug and Pull
April 4, 2010

Somehow,
when I wasn’t looking,
you learned to brush 
your own hair.

You stretch your neck 
just so, arching like
those women in movies
we won’t let you watch.

You tug without pulling,
pull without tugging,
and the tangles give way
like yellow grasses
bending for a breeze.

I squint at your reflection,
trying to find the face,
eager for Easter,
I saw this morning,
but all I see is your
concentration,
your competence,
your confidence;
the face of a kid
superimposed
on the face of my child.

So tonight,
when you gruffly
grabbed the brush
and said, “Daddy,
let me do it myself,”
I thought I heard you say,
“Daddy, I don’t
need you anymore.”</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Tug and Pull<br />
April 4, 2010</p>
<p>Somehow,<br />
when I wasn’t looking,<br />
you learned to brush<br />
your own hair.</p>
<p>You stretch your neck<br />
just so, arching like<br />
those women in movies<br />
we won’t let you watch.</p>
<p>You tug without pulling,<br />
pull without tugging,<br />
and the tangles give way<br />
like yellow grasses<br />
bending for a breeze.</p>
<p>I squint at your reflection,<br />
trying to find the face,<br />
eager for Easter,<br />
I saw this morning,<br />
but all I see is your<br />
concentration,<br />
your competence,<br />
your confidence;<br />
the face of a kid<br />
superimposed<br />
on the face of my child.</p>
<p>So tonight,<br />
when you gruffly<br />
grabbed the brush<br />
and said, “Daddy,<br />
let me do it myself,”<br />
I thought I heard you say,<br />
“Daddy, I don’t<br />
need you anymore.”</p>
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		<title>By: Lizzie</title>
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		<dc:creator>Lizzie</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 05 Apr 2010 05:47:04 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>wasn&#039;t feeling today&#039;s prompt (sorry!), but wrote something anyway...
http://meetinggrace.wordpress.com/2010/04/04/napowrimo-4/</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>wasn&#8217;t feeling today&#8217;s prompt (sorry!), but wrote something anyway&#8230;<br />
<a href="http://meetinggrace.wordpress.com/2010/04/04/napowrimo-4/" rel="nofollow">http://meetinggrace.wordpress.com/2010/04/04/napowrimo-4/</a></p>
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		<title>By: Vanessa</title>
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		<dc:creator>Vanessa</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 05 Apr 2010 05:37:25 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Skewed
http://vanessavaile.posterous.com/wripo-4-skewed</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Skewed<br />
<a href="http://vanessavaile.posterous.com/wripo-4-skewed" rel="nofollow">http://vanessavaile.posterous.com/wripo-4-skewed</a></p>
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		<title>By: robertwynne</title>
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		<dc:creator>robertwynne</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 05 Apr 2010 04:45:56 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>My version of Inside Out: A World in Which Ed Hardy clothes are actually cool, and not just worn by Dougebags...


Love Kills Slowly


In this odd small world
Supreme Court Justice
Kermit the Frog announces

we will no longer wait
for anyone to quietly
accept the judgment

of skulls wearing top hats.
Instead, we will conduct
interviews with anyone

who’s smelled the roses
on the long-sleeve t-shirt,
which claims that “Love

Kills Slowly,” the way everything
becomes more important
simply because we’re told it is

and we choose to believe.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>My version of Inside Out: A World in Which Ed Hardy clothes are actually cool, and not just worn by Dougebags&#8230;</p>
<p>Love Kills Slowly</p>
<p>In this odd small world<br />
Supreme Court Justice<br />
Kermit the Frog announces</p>
<p>we will no longer wait<br />
for anyone to quietly<br />
accept the judgment</p>
<p>of skulls wearing top hats.<br />
Instead, we will conduct<br />
interviews with anyone</p>
<p>who’s smelled the roses<br />
on the long-sleeve t-shirt,<br />
which claims that “Love</p>
<p>Kills Slowly,” the way everything<br />
becomes more important<br />
simply because we’re told it is</p>
<p>and we choose to believe.</p>
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		<title>By: MARIAN MOORE</title>
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		<dc:creator>MARIAN MOORE</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 05 Apr 2010 04:42:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&quot;Proving Myself&quot;
http://makeda42.livejournal.com/60121.html</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>&#8220;Proving Myself&#8221;<br />
<a href="http://makeda42.livejournal.com/60121.html" rel="nofollow">http://makeda42.livejournal.com/60121.html</a></p>
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		<title>By: Shari Smothers</title>
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		<dc:creator>Shari Smothers</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 05 Apr 2010 04:41:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;m not sure this uploaded the first time: &lt;a href=&quot;http://slstellingstories.com/2010/04/i-hear-the-music/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;I Hear the Music&lt;/a&gt;.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m not sure this uploaded the first time: <a href="http://slstellingstories.com/2010/04/i-hear-the-music/" rel="nofollow">I Hear the Music</a>.</p>
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