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	<title>Comments on: napowrimo #1: shuffle a poem</title>
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		<title>By: DJ Vorreyer</title>
		<link>http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2010/04/01/napowrimo-1-shuffle-a-poem/comment-page-3/#comment-18145</link>
		<dc:creator>DJ Vorreyer</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 09 Apr 2010 23:22:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>There is no &quot;wrong&quot; - you still used the random phrase in the piece!   I really like an eggshell skirt shudder - great sound there!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>There is no &#8220;wrong&#8221; &#8211; you still used the random phrase in the piece!   I really like an eggshell skirt shudder &#8211; great sound there!</p>
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		<title>By: Shannon Rayne</title>
		<link>http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2010/04/01/napowrimo-1-shuffle-a-poem/comment-page-3/#comment-17841</link>
		<dc:creator>Shannon Rayne</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 08 Apr 2010 16:25:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Oops.  Posted in wrong spot.  Sorry.</description>
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		<title>By: Shannon Rayne</title>
		<link>http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2010/04/01/napowrimo-1-shuffle-a-poem/comment-page-3/#comment-17840</link>
		<dc:creator>Shannon Rayne</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 08 Apr 2010 16:24:04 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Shuffle poem:
- Panic
- Two tickets to Paradise
- When Doves Cry
- The Great Escape
- Runner

http://shannons-words.livejournal.com/153094.html</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Shuffle poem:<br />
- Panic<br />
- Two tickets to Paradise<br />
- When Doves Cry<br />
- The Great Escape<br />
- Runner</p>
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		<title>By: wendi</title>
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		<dc:creator>wendi</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 07 Apr 2010 21:56:20 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>http://jazzandpoetry.com/2010/04/napowrimo-1-shuffle-a-poem/</description>
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		<title>By: Shannon Rayne</title>
		<link>http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2010/04/01/napowrimo-1-shuffle-a-poem/comment-page-3/#comment-17607</link>
		<dc:creator>Shannon Rayne</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 07 Apr 2010 20:53:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<title>By: Jennifer Jilks</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jennifer Jilks</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 06 Apr 2010 23:51:25 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>This is a hoot!

That old man river

sings his February song

with the days ahead

telling me it&#039;s love

I must have had brains for breakfast.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This is a hoot!</p>
<p>That old man river</p>
<p>sings his February song</p>
<p>with the days ahead</p>
<p>telling me it&#8217;s love</p>
<p>I must have had brains for breakfast.</p>
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		<title>By: William</title>
		<link>http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2010/04/01/napowrimo-1-shuffle-a-poem/comment-page-3/#comment-17252</link>
		<dc:creator>William</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 06 Apr 2010 11:15:37 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;a href=&quot;http://wecampbell.blogspot.com/2010/04/blog-entry-dated-412010-616-am.html&quot; title=&quot;Marilyn Manson&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;

Androgynous – The Crashtest Dummies
You Don&#039;t Need A Reason - Monte Montgomery
Italian Leather Sofa - Cake
Crazy She Calls Me - Rod Stewart
Get Over It - OK Go</description>
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<p>Androgynous – The Crashtest Dummies<br />
You Don&#8217;t Need A Reason &#8211; Monte Montgomery<br />
Italian Leather Sofa &#8211; Cake<br />
Crazy She Calls Me &#8211; Rod Stewart<br />
Get Over It &#8211; OK Go</a></p>
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		<title>By: Surazeus</title>
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		<dc:creator>Surazeus</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 06 Apr 2010 01:47:55 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Universe Diamond God
Angeliad of Surazeus
2010 04 01
http://open.salon.com/blog/surazeus/2010/04/01/universe_diamond_god</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Universe Diamond God<br />
Angeliad of Surazeus<br />
2010 04 01<br />
<a href="http://open.salon.com/blog/surazeus/2010/04/01/universe_diamond_god" rel="nofollow">http://open.salon.com/blog/surazeus/2010/04/01/universe_diamond_god</a></p>
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		<title>By: kh09f</title>
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		<dc:creator>kh09f</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 05 Apr 2010 21:43:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;m not the Same Girl
when I Party Like a Rockstar,
Forever enveloped in the smog of a back alley nightclub.
I rock like the cool kids,
not thinking of the Karma
that will visit me in the AM.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m not the Same Girl<br />
when I Party Like a Rockstar,<br />
Forever enveloped in the smog of a back alley nightclub.<br />
I rock like the cool kids,<br />
not thinking of the Karma<br />
that will visit me in the AM.</p>
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		<title>By: DJ Vorreyer</title>
		<link>http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2010/04/01/napowrimo-1-shuffle-a-poem/comment-page-3/#comment-17070</link>
		<dc:creator>DJ Vorreyer</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 05 Apr 2010 20:33:29 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Glad so many people found the prompt a challenge - it usually pushes people outside of the box!  I just returned from a weeklong trip where I completed my first 5 poems -they will be posted later at 
http://djvorreyer.wordpress.com</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Glad so many people found the prompt a challenge &#8211; it usually pushes people outside of the box!  I just returned from a weeklong trip where I completed my first 5 poems -they will be posted later at<br />
<a href="http://djvorreyer.wordpress.com" rel="nofollow">http://djvorreyer.wordpress.com</a></p>
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		<title>By: wilspam</title>
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		<dc:creator>wilspam</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 05 Apr 2010 05:28:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Fair Damsel

Awake late into the night, I slipped A Knight’s Tale into the DVD player
a terrifying scritchity-scratch growl and grumble
reminiscent of mail-and-chain armor of a horsed
errant Knight Ride
betwixt and between verdant English wooded dales,
down centuries old cobbled lanes in search of a tryst (or two)
seeking
The Primrose Lady/Molly from Langfort; the Four Kisses
success of medieval dreams.

The Spirit Within  - love everlasting, magic mornings, evening desire - has not dulled over the centuries
knights and damsels, ladies and gents, men and women from the
Streets of Philadelphia to those who Thank God I’m a Country Boy
fall in love whether they should or not
and give this lurching-along world
new lovers for new times.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Fair Damsel</p>
<p>Awake late into the night, I slipped A Knight’s Tale into the DVD player<br />
a terrifying scritchity-scratch growl and grumble<br />
reminiscent of mail-and-chain armor of a horsed<br />
errant Knight Ride<br />
betwixt and between verdant English wooded dales,<br />
down centuries old cobbled lanes in search of a tryst (or two)<br />
seeking<br />
The Primrose Lady/Molly from Langfort; the Four Kisses<br />
success of medieval dreams.</p>
<p>The Spirit Within  &#8211; love everlasting, magic mornings, evening desire &#8211; has not dulled over the centuries<br />
knights and damsels, ladies and gents, men and women from the<br />
Streets of Philadelphia to those who Thank God I’m a Country Boy<br />
fall in love whether they should or not<br />
and give this lurching-along world<br />
new lovers for new times.</p>
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		<title>By: Ingeborg</title>
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		<dc:creator>Ingeborg</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 04 Apr 2010 13:38:46 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>http://ingeborgsblog.blogspot.com/2010/04/napowrimo-aril-1st-leaving-on-jet-plane.html</description>
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		<title>By: Legacy Leonard</title>
		<link>http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2010/04/01/napowrimo-1-shuffle-a-poem/comment-page-3/#comment-16613</link>
		<dc:creator>Legacy Leonard</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 04 Apr 2010 04:12:01 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>http://legacyleonard.blogspot.com/2010/04/napowrimo-1-selfcity-prayer.html</description>
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		<title>By: Mary Holmes</title>
		<link>http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2010/04/01/napowrimo-1-shuffle-a-poem/comment-page-3/#comment-16502</link>
		<dc:creator>Mary Holmes</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 03 Apr 2010 18:05:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>here it is with graphic (I think)

http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?pid=4499264&amp;l=aa9085e2d1&amp;id=638476499</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>here it is with graphic (I think)</p>
<p><a href="http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?pid=4499264&amp;l=aa9085e2d1&amp;id=638476499" rel="nofollow">http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?pid=4499264&amp;l=aa9085e2d1&amp;id=638476499</a></p>
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		<title>By: Stiletto</title>
		<link>http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2010/04/01/napowrimo-1-shuffle-a-poem/comment-page-3/#comment-16490</link>
		<dc:creator>Stiletto</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 03 Apr 2010 17:05:40 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Too late again :-(

http://stiletto.crisopeya.eu/2010/04/03/napowrimo-1-shuffle-a-poem/</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Too late again <img src='http://readwritepoem.org/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_sad.gif' alt=':-(' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
<p><a href="http://stiletto.crisopeya.eu/2010/04/03/napowrimo-1-shuffle-a-poem/" rel="nofollow">http://stiletto.crisopeya.eu/2010/04/03/napowrimo-1-shuffle-a-poem/</a></p>
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		<title>By: angel</title>
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		<dc:creator>angel</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 03 Apr 2010 14:43:18 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I think i posted mine in the wrong place on day 1, so adding it here just in case

Electricity

The boy wanted to know what electricity was,
peered into sockets to see currents flow hot as blood, 
or cool rivers of neon, fluid as faces, spilled as milk. 
But even his father didn’t know what he worked with
looked like, a man who could fix anything with a screw,
every sound of the house connected to his coiled grin,
a twitch at the corner wired to a switch in his hands
and a Danger: High Voltage sign flash in his eyes.
The boy looked for trails of electric but saw only white
pour into the night, the colours of day fuse into one 
nuclear blur. He saw an instrument of power’s presence, 
lamps off and on, flicked quick as moods/
an eggshell skirt shudder and cling to her legs 
when father comes home/ opens the fridge.
No one explains it/something not visible still there/
the light of the fridge goes on, then out
like mother closes a door on small bright sparks,
brilliant parts of herself she keeps in the dark.


(my songs were- Electricity- apoptyma beserka, into the night- siouxsie and the banshees,electric- the cult (though i got that wring i found later as its the name of the album!), danger hight voltage- electric 6, the river- joe bonamssa- which in ed lost the the.)</description>
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<p>Electricity</p>
<p>The boy wanted to know what electricity was,<br />
peered into sockets to see currents flow hot as blood,<br />
or cool rivers of neon, fluid as faces, spilled as milk.<br />
But even his father didn’t know what he worked with<br />
looked like, a man who could fix anything with a screw,<br />
every sound of the house connected to his coiled grin,<br />
a twitch at the corner wired to a switch in his hands<br />
and a Danger: High Voltage sign flash in his eyes.<br />
The boy looked for trails of electric but saw only white<br />
pour into the night, the colours of day fuse into one<br />
nuclear blur. He saw an instrument of power’s presence,<br />
lamps off and on, flicked quick as moods/<br />
an eggshell skirt shudder and cling to her legs<br />
when father comes home/ opens the fridge.<br />
No one explains it/something not visible still there/<br />
the light of the fridge goes on, then out<br />
like mother closes a door on small bright sparks,<br />
brilliant parts of herself she keeps in the dark.</p>
<p>(my songs were- Electricity- apoptyma beserka, into the night- siouxsie and the banshees,electric- the cult (though i got that wring i found later as its the name of the album!), danger hight voltage- electric 6, the river- joe bonamssa- which in ed lost the the.)</p>
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		<title>By: Divine Speech</title>
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		<dc:creator>Divine Speech</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 03 Apr 2010 13:55:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>This was challenging!!! Late, but I like where I ended up. Thanks!!

&lt;a href=&quot;http://quicksilvermind.blogspot.com/2010/04/napowrimo-1-cattitude.html&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt; Cattitude&lt;/a&gt;

5 Albums: 
E.badu - penitentiary
Carly Simon - revelation
Paris Lounge - Paris By Night
Compilation - Voices of Forgotten Worlds
Black Bottom Collective - Peoplemover</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This was challenging!!! Late, but I like where I ended up. Thanks!!</p>
<p><a href="http://quicksilvermind.blogspot.com/2010/04/napowrimo-1-cattitude.html" rel="nofollow"> Cattitude</a></p>
<p>5 Albums:<br />
E.badu &#8211; penitentiary<br />
Carly Simon &#8211; revelation<br />
Paris Lounge &#8211; Paris By Night<br />
Compilation &#8211; Voices of Forgotten Worlds<br />
Black Bottom Collective &#8211; Peoplemover</p>
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		<title>By: Tammy Gillmore</title>
		<link>http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2010/04/01/napowrimo-1-shuffle-a-poem/comment-page-3/#comment-16437</link>
		<dc:creator>Tammy Gillmore</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 03 Apr 2010 13:26:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>April 1&#039;s poem:  &quot;The Voices of Spring&quot; ~  http://treasures.edublogs.org/2010/04/01/readwritepoem-april-1/</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>April 1&#8217;s poem:  &#8220;The Voices of Spring&#8221; ~  <a href="http://treasures.edublogs.org/2010/04/01/readwritepoem-april-1/" rel="nofollow">http://treasures.edublogs.org/2010/04/01/readwritepoem-april-1/</a></p>
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		<title>By: viviblake</title>
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		<dc:creator>viviblake</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 03 Apr 2010 10:04:59 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I can&#039;t find the page for yesterday or today. PLEASE  HEEEELLLLP!</description>
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		<title>By: Vanessa</title>
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		<dc:creator>Vanessa</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 03 Apr 2010 06:55:51 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>1 &amp; 2 both written day 2, posted day 3 wee hours
http://vanessavaile.posterous.com/1-nawripomo</description>
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