Comments on: read write prompt #104: how to write the sex poem right, by nick carbó http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/12/04/read-write-prompt-104-writing-the-sex-poem-right-by-nick-carbo/ Mon, 03 May 2010 01:01:02 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=abc hourly 1 By: Beth http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/12/04/read-write-prompt-104-writing-the-sex-poem-right-by-nick-carbo/comment-page-1/#comment-11465 Beth Thu, 10 Dec 2009 19:56:53 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=8154#comment-11465 Now don't tell me it was a sheep on the kitchen table... Now don’t tell me it was a sheep on the kitchen table…

]]> By: Read Write prompt #104: The Sex Poem « Vicious Or Virtuous http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/12/04/read-write-prompt-104-writing-the-sex-poem-right-by-nick-carbo/comment-page-1/#comment-11457 Read Write prompt #104: The Sex Poem « Vicious Or Virtuous Thu, 10 Dec 2009 18:04:12 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=8154#comment-11457 [...] Poetry by viciousorvirtuous on 12.10.09 Among the recommendations for this week’s prompt at Read Write Poem: “No cars and sex, overdone.” How about Carl Sagan and [...] [...] Poetry by viciousorvirtuous on 12.10.09 Among the recommendations for this week’s prompt at Read Write Poem: “No cars and sex, overdone.” How about Carl Sagan and [...]

]]> By: Reverie « Zouxzoux http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/12/04/read-write-prompt-104-writing-the-sex-poem-right-by-nick-carbo/comment-page-1/#comment-11452 Reverie « Zouxzoux Thu, 10 Dec 2009 15:58:40 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=8154#comment-11452 [...] 2009 December 10 tags: Erotica, New Orleans, Poetry, Read Write Poem by zouxzoux In Read Write Prompt #104 on ReadWritePoem, poet Nick Carbo tells us “how to write the sex poem right” and gives an example of his [...] [...] 2009 December 10 tags: Erotica, New Orleans, Poetry, Read Write Poem by zouxzoux In Read Write Prompt #104 on ReadWritePoem, poet Nick Carbo tells us “how to write the sex poem right” and gives an example of his [...]

]]> By: Southwest http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/12/04/read-write-prompt-104-writing-the-sex-poem-right-by-nick-carbo/comment-page-1/#comment-11428 Southwest Thu, 10 Dec 2009 10:52:13 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=8154#comment-11428 [...] Write Poem Prompt #104 was called How to Write the Sex Poem Right. That’s right. The Sex Poem. Two of my favorite [...] [...] Write Poem Prompt #104 was called How to Write the Sex Poem Right. That’s right. The Sex Poem. Two of my favorite [...]

]]> By: get your poem on #104 « Read Write Poem http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/12/04/read-write-prompt-104-writing-the-sex-poem-right-by-nick-carbo/comment-page-1/#comment-11410 get your poem on #104 « Read Write Poem Thu, 10 Dec 2009 06:03:34 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=8154#comment-11410 [...] car, even though Nick said not to? Did you get it on by using nonsexual words in a sexual context, which Nick recommended? Did you take it off to get it on? Did you like taking it off? Did you run away in horror, unable [...] [...] car, even though Nick said not to? Did you get it on by using nonsexual words in a sexual context, which Nick recommended? Did you take it off to get it on? Did you like taking it off? Did you run away in horror, unable [...]

]]> By: the sexually active are: » mygorgeoussomewhere.org http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/12/04/read-write-prompt-104-writing-the-sex-poem-right-by-nick-carbo/comment-page-1/#comment-11408 the sexually active are: » mygorgeoussomewhere.org Thu, 10 Dec 2009 03:57:18 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=8154#comment-11408 [...] Moore and I wrote this piece in response to Nick Carbó’s prompt at Read Write Poem this [...] [...] Moore and I wrote this piece in response to Nick Carbó’s prompt at Read Write Poem this [...]

]]> By: How to Tie a Stimulator redoux | Stoney Moss http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/12/04/read-write-prompt-104-writing-the-sex-poem-right-by-nick-carbo/comment-page-1/#comment-11407 How to Tie a Stimulator redoux | Stoney Moss Thu, 10 Dec 2009 03:03:28 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=8154#comment-11407 [...] * * This is a try at a sex poem via Read Write Poem’s prompt by the wonderful Nick Carbó. *This is also a found poem with bits twisted and shaved and appended, a revision to another [...] [...] * * This is a try at a sex poem via Read Write Poem’s prompt by the wonderful Nick Carbó. *This is also a found poem with bits twisted and shaved and appended, a revision to another [...]

]]> By: Linda Fraser http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/12/04/read-write-prompt-104-writing-the-sex-poem-right-by-nick-carbo/comment-page-1/#comment-11406 Linda Fraser Thu, 10 Dec 2009 02:17:19 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=8154#comment-11406 I have written a poem, but being a grandmother I am, like Wendy, feeling uncomfortable posting it. I too love writing poems, if I was younger I would have no hesitancy. "Granny" and "sex poems" seems an unconventional pairing. Thank you Wendy and Barbara for focusing on what's really important here.... my love of writing poems. =D I have written a poem, but being a grandmother I am, like Wendy, feeling uncomfortable posting it. I too love writing poems, if I was younger I would have no hesitancy. “Granny” and “sex poems” seems an unconventional pairing. Thank you Wendy and Barbara for focusing on what’s really important here…. my love of writing poems. =D

]]> By: Wanda McCollar http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/12/04/read-write-prompt-104-writing-the-sex-poem-right-by-nick-carbo/comment-page-1/#comment-11400 Wanda McCollar Wed, 09 Dec 2009 22:34:39 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=8154#comment-11400 You know what, Barbara, you're right. I love writing poetry, and I need to write as I see the world, and not worry if my grandchildren, or students, might get the wrong impression. Pretty silly. So I will be posting on the site when it's up tomorrow - but not quite what might be expected. A draft - but it's in the ball park (left field). You know what, Barbara, you’re right. I love writing poetry, and I need to write as I see the world, and not worry if my grandchildren, or students, might get the wrong impression. Pretty silly. So I will be posting on the site when it’s up tomorrow – but not quite what might be expected. A draft – but it’s in the ball park (left field).

]]> By: barbara_y http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/12/04/read-write-prompt-104-writing-the-sex-poem-right-by-nick-carbo/comment-page-1/#comment-11398 barbara_y Wed, 09 Dec 2009 21:40:54 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=8154#comment-11398 Frankly, I believe Wanda is just shy. If she really wanted to, she'd post here. The kiddos would never think to look for naughtiness on a poetry website. Frankly, I believe Wanda is just shy. If she really wanted to, she’d post here. The kiddos would never think to look for naughtiness on a poetry website.

]]> By: Dave Bonta http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/12/04/read-write-prompt-104-writing-the-sex-poem-right-by-nick-carbo/comment-page-1/#comment-11389 Dave Bonta Wed, 09 Dec 2009 16:00:05 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=8154#comment-11389 I've read it. But the Portuguese poet Eugenio de Andrade has a much more innocent and beautiful poem about his first love, a nanny goat. I’ve read it. But the Portuguese poet Eugenio de Andrade has a much more innocent and beautiful poem about his first love, a nanny goat.

]]> By: gautami tripathy http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/12/04/read-write-prompt-104-writing-the-sex-poem-right-by-nick-carbo/comment-page-1/#comment-11386 gautami tripathy Wed, 09 Dec 2009 15:25:04 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=8154#comment-11386 Well, I did it differently: http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2009/12/nature-copulates.html Well, I did it differently:

http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2009/12/nature-copulates.html

]]> By: Dana Guthrie Martin http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/12/04/read-write-prompt-104-writing-the-sex-poem-right-by-nick-carbo/comment-page-1/#comment-11379 Dana Guthrie Martin Wed, 09 Dec 2009 02:20:16 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=8154#comment-11379 Dave, you need to read the poem "The Sheep Child," by James Dickey. It's one of Clare L. Martin's favorites. It's creepy, just like your admission of arousal by a sheep is creepy. Dave, you need to read the poem “The Sheep Child,” by James Dickey. It’s one of Clare L. Martin’s favorites. It’s creepy, just like your admission of arousal by a sheep is creepy.

]]> By: rallentanda http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/12/04/read-write-prompt-104-writing-the-sex-poem-right-by-nick-carbo/comment-page-1/#comment-11376 rallentanda Tue, 08 Dec 2009 22:49:41 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=8154#comment-11376 I'm never inviting you to my farm! I’m never inviting you to my farm!

]]> By: Dave Bonta http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/12/04/read-write-prompt-104-writing-the-sex-poem-right-by-nick-carbo/comment-page-1/#comment-11375 Dave Bonta Tue, 08 Dec 2009 22:27:43 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=8154#comment-11375 What a great prompt! This definitely makes me want to go out and buy some of Carbo's work (hint to other celebrity poets to unwind a little, too). I might have to write that poem about how, as a farm boy of 6 or 7, I was aroused by a sheep. (That's true.) What a great prompt! This definitely makes me want to go out and buy some of Carbo’s work (hint to other celebrity poets to unwind a little, too). I might have to write that poem about how, as a farm boy of 6 or 7, I was aroused by a sheep. (That’s true.)

]]> By: Therese L. Broderick http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/12/04/read-write-prompt-104-writing-the-sex-poem-right-by-nick-carbo/comment-page-1/#comment-11372 Therese L. Broderick Tue, 08 Dec 2009 19:22:26 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=8154#comment-11372 Ok, so I've written mine, to be posted tomorrow, after I get consent from my husband! Of course, my poem is tempered with the decorum and discretion incumbent upon a woman "of a certain age" (me). I'm also now reading the "Song of Songs"...talk about erotic...Wanda, better keep your grandchildren away from those verses... Ok, so I’ve written mine, to be posted tomorrow, after I get consent from my husband! Of course, my poem is tempered with the decorum and discretion incumbent upon a woman “of a certain age” (me). I’m also now reading the “Song of Songs”…talk about erotic…Wanda, better keep your grandchildren away from those verses…

]]> By: jessiecarty http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/12/04/read-write-prompt-104-writing-the-sex-poem-right-by-nick-carbo/comment-page-1/#comment-11367 jessiecarty Tue, 08 Dec 2009 16:13:28 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=8154#comment-11367 terrific prompt! although i am tempted, instead, to write about your sexy picture :) terrific prompt! although i am tempted, instead, to write about your sexy picture :)

]]> By: Wanda McCollar http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/12/04/read-write-prompt-104-writing-the-sex-poem-right-by-nick-carbo/comment-page-1/#comment-11353 Wanda McCollar Mon, 07 Dec 2009 19:27:57 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=8154#comment-11353 I know, Rallentanda expected so much from me - and I thought it was such great fun to write the kind of suggestive, ellusive sex poem Nick Carbo told us so well how to write. But, I found out my grandchildren read my poems on my Blog - and, I can't write a sex poem, funny, weird, or otherwise. A great idea, Nick, and I loved it. But, Grandmas don't write poems they know their clever teen-aged progeny will absolutely undestand and be upset it's what their Grandma wrote, not understanding the wit. On the other hand, I have posted a sensual poem, not sexual, sensual, in defense of apples on my blog. http://synecdochicstuff.blogspot.com I know, Rallentanda expected so much from me – and I thought it was such great fun to write the kind of suggestive, ellusive sex poem Nick Carbo told us so well how to write. But, I found out my grandchildren read my poems on my Blog – and, I can’t write a sex poem, funny, weird, or otherwise.

A great idea, Nick, and I loved it. But, Grandmas don’t write poems they know their clever teen-aged progeny will absolutely undestand and be upset it’s what their Grandma wrote, not understanding the wit.

On the other hand, I have posted a sensual poem, not sexual, sensual, in defense of apples on my blog. http://synecdochicstuff.blogspot.com

]]> By: Sterling Elysian http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/12/04/read-write-prompt-104-writing-the-sex-poem-right-by-nick-carbo/comment-page-1/#comment-11330 Sterling Elysian Sat, 05 Dec 2009 16:58:54 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=8154#comment-11330 Ha....the humanity of it all...when everything else fail, even in desperate times, the irrepressible urge of sex, built into everyone of us will carry us on and give us hope....pink rules..... Ha….the humanity of it all…when everything else fail, even in desperate times, the irrepressible urge of sex, built into everyone of us will carry us on and give us hope….pink rules…..

]]> By: Prats/Pratsie http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/12/04/read-write-prompt-104-writing-the-sex-poem-right-by-nick-carbo/comment-page-1/#comment-11325 Prats/Pratsie Sat, 05 Dec 2009 09:40:30 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=8154#comment-11325 I have never tried a sex poem ! this gonna be a tough assignment fr me .. I have never tried a sex poem ! this gonna be a tough assignment fr me ..

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