Comments on: get your poem on #99 http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/11/05/get-your-poem-on-99/ Mon, 03 May 2010 01:01:02 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=abc hourly 1 By: Jae Vanausdal http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/11/05/get-your-poem-on-99/comment-page-1/#comment-15567 Jae Vanausdal Wed, 31 Mar 2010 05:40:46 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=7539#comment-15567 Precisely strategies that we had been searching for. Well put too. Precisely strategies that we had been searching for. Well put too.

]]> By: Chance Encounter « Zouxzoux http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/11/05/get-your-poem-on-99/comment-page-1/#comment-13464 Chance Encounter « Zouxzoux Wed, 10 Feb 2010 03:51:10 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=7539#comment-13464 [...] Read Write Prompt #99: Setting the Scene [...] [...] Read Write Prompt #99: Setting the Scene [...]

]]> By: Wayne Pitchko http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/11/05/get-your-poem-on-99/comment-page-1/#comment-10660 Wayne Pitchko Tue, 10 Nov 2009 03:40:29 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=7539#comment-10660 Ive been to the city for a week...Vancouver...so I am late but here it is. BROKEN GLASS http://waynepitchko.blogspot.com Ive been to the city for a week…Vancouver…so I am late but here it is.
BROKEN GLASS
http://waynepitchko.blogspot.com

]]> By: tamrahays http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/11/05/get-your-poem-on-99/comment-page-1/#comment-10598 tamrahays Fri, 06 Nov 2009 09:09:40 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=7539#comment-10598 I thought I posted it. I wonder where I posted it. Anyway, here is mine. <a title="Things that have left" href="http://laughingdove.haystravelogue.com/poem/2009/11/things-that-have-left/" rel="nofollow">Things that have left</a> I thought I posted it. I wonder where I posted it. Anyway, here is mine.

Things that have left

]]> By: tzarsun http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/11/05/get-your-poem-on-99/comment-page-1/#comment-10591 tzarsun Fri, 06 Nov 2009 01:11:38 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=7539#comment-10591 Very nice work everyone. This is my attempt at.... http://marksord.blogspot.com/2009/11/15-two-minutes-past-midnight.html Very nice work everyone.

This is my attempt at….

http://marksord.blogspot.com/2009/11/15-two-minutes-past-midnight.html

]]> By: Andre Tan http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/11/05/get-your-poem-on-99/comment-page-1/#comment-10589 Andre Tan Fri, 06 Nov 2009 00:36:31 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=7539#comment-10589 Hi everyone, I haven't had a chance to read all of your work yet, but what I've seen so far is fantastic! Thanks for playing along! Hi everyone, I haven’t had a chance to read all of your work yet, but what I’ve seen so far is fantastic! Thanks for playing along!

]]> By: DJ Vorreyer http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/11/05/get-your-poem-on-99/comment-page-1/#comment-10588 DJ Vorreyer Fri, 06 Nov 2009 00:34:50 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=7539#comment-10588 Here's my attempt - "After the Last Supper" http://djvorreyer.wordpress.com/2009/11/05/readwritepoem-prompt-99-the-scene-unsaid/ Thanks for your comments! Here’s my attempt –
“After the Last Supper”

http://djvorreyer.wordpress.com/2009/11/05/readwritepoem-prompt-99-the-scene-unsaid/

Thanks for your comments!

]]> By: Irene http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/11/05/get-your-poem-on-99/comment-page-1/#comment-10587 Irene Fri, 06 Nov 2009 00:28:26 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=7539#comment-10587 Stupid daughter!! Stupid daughter!!

]]> By: Anthony North http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/11/05/get-your-poem-on-99/comment-page-1/#comment-10582 Anthony North Thu, 05 Nov 2009 22:22:51 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=7539#comment-10582 I think I'm cracking up today. Been following the poems all day and forgot to put my own link on. http://beyondtheblog.wordpress.com/2009/11/03/politics I think I’m cracking up today. Been following the poems all day and forgot to put my own link on.

http://beyondtheblog.wordpress.com/2009/11/03/politics

]]> By: David Moolten http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/11/05/get-your-poem-on-99/comment-page-1/#comment-10579 David Moolten Thu, 05 Nov 2009 21:52:29 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=7539#comment-10579 A very complete and well painted scene. I like how the poem has a "camera-like" tone, merely describing rather than judging, until the very end, and even then, though ironic, the comment is still wistful and oblique,which makes it all the more poignant. The impersonal quality of the gate, the constraints of it, no time or way to chase after the daughter and fix things, and the separation yawning before the mother. She is innocent and damned. A very complete and well painted scene. I like how the poem has a “camera-like” tone, merely describing rather than judging, until the very end, and even then, though ironic, the comment is still wistful and oblique,which makes it all the more poignant. The impersonal quality of the gate, the constraints of it, no time or way to chase after the daughter and fix things, and the separation yawning before the mother. She is innocent and damned.

]]> By: one more believer http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/11/05/get-your-poem-on-99/comment-page-1/#comment-10578 one more believer Thu, 05 Nov 2009 21:34:12 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=7539#comment-10578 itz been a long while since writing, this post seemed a great approach to begin again... <a href="http://pieceofpie.wordpress.com/2009/11/05/blue-blanket-2/" rel="nofollow">blue blanket</a> itz been a long while since writing, this post seemed a great approach to begin again… blue blanket

]]> By: Cynthia Short http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/11/05/get-your-poem-on-99/comment-page-1/#comment-10575 Cynthia Short Thu, 05 Nov 2009 21:18:09 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=7539#comment-10575 This is a wonderful sad story, and even though I felt badly from the mother, I, like Zouxzoux wonders if the daughter behaved the way she was taught... I like the small details you put in here, the clothing, crumpled paper, the sun. It gave it a sense of reality, of watching it unfold through a "candid camera". This is a wonderful sad story, and even though I felt badly from the mother, I, like Zouxzoux wonders if the daughter behaved the way she was taught…
I like the small details you put in here, the clothing, crumpled paper, the sun. It gave it a sense of reality, of watching it unfold through a “candid camera”.

]]> By: Lawrence Gladeview http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/11/05/get-your-poem-on-99/comment-page-1/#comment-10567 Lawrence Gladeview Thu, 05 Nov 2009 18:31:38 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=7539#comment-10567 arriving late to the party but never the less arriving! hope you enjoy my poem for the week, thanks andre for the prompt, enjoyed the avenues it offered to explore http://beatnikprose.blogspot.com/2009/11/at-gate.html thanks guys and gals, look forward to reading your pieces -lawrence arriving late to the party but never the less arriving! hope you enjoy my poem for the week, thanks andre for the prompt, enjoyed the avenues it offered to explore

http://beatnikprose.blogspot.com/2009/11/at-gate.html

thanks guys and gals, look forward to reading your pieces

-lawrence

]]> By: Linda Fraser http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/11/05/get-your-poem-on-99/comment-page-1/#comment-10566 Linda Fraser Thu, 05 Nov 2009 17:33:03 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=7539#comment-10566 Struggling, struggling, struggling. Here's mine, I'm still not happy with it. <a href="http://livingintheeasternwoodlands.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">Living In The Eastern Woodlands. My poem is The East Block Extravaganza 1973</a> Struggling, struggling, struggling.

Here’s mine, I’m still not happy with it.

Living In The Eastern Woodlands. My poem is The East Block Extravaganza 1973

]]> By: barbara_y http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/11/05/get-your-poem-on-99/comment-page-1/#comment-10564 barbara_y Thu, 05 Nov 2009 16:41:16 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=7539#comment-10564 Thanks for the prompt. It was fun. <a href="http://wp.me/pdTja-lW" rel="nofollow">Summoned to a Lady's Rooms</a> Thanks for the prompt. It was fun.

Summoned to a Lady’s Rooms

]]> By: ekswitaj http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/11/05/get-your-poem-on-99/comment-page-1/#comment-10563 ekswitaj Thu, 05 Nov 2009 16:27:47 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=7539#comment-10563 By which I mean Two Rooms, heh. I need more coffee. By which I mean Two Rooms, heh. I need more coffee.

]]> By: ekswitaj http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/11/05/get-your-poem-on-99/comment-page-1/#comment-10562 ekswitaj Thu, 05 Nov 2009 16:26:37 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=7539#comment-10562 <a href="http://blog.elizabethkateswitaj.net/2009/11/thurday-read-write-poem/" rel="nofollow">Two Poems</a> Two Poems

]]> By: Zouxzoux http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/11/05/get-your-poem-on-99/comment-page-1/#comment-10560 Zouxzoux Thu, 05 Nov 2009 16:08:00 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=7539#comment-10560 A sad story. But it makes me think of that old saying "What goes around comes around." Nice work, hon. A sad story. But it makes me think of that old saying “What goes around comes around.”

Nice work, hon.

]]> By: iverhyck http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/11/05/get-your-poem-on-99/comment-page-1/#comment-10558 iverhyck Thu, 05 Nov 2009 15:51:23 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=7539#comment-10558 Well... Perhaps it'll make you smile. http://iverhyck.wordpress.com/2009/11/03/it-is-no-use-crying-over-spilt-milk/ Well… Perhaps it’ll make you smile.
http://iverhyck.wordpress.com/2009/11/03/it-is-no-use-crying-over-spilt-milk/

]]> By: Derrick http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/11/05/get-your-poem-on-99/comment-page-1/#comment-10557 Derrick Thu, 05 Nov 2009 15:29:23 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=7539#comment-10557 This paints a picture of a sad and 'lost' lady and we can't quite know what awful thing her daughter has done apart from her stark, unfeeling character. I feel sorry for the mother and the final two sentences emphasise that. This paints a picture of a sad and ‘lost’ lady and we can’t quite know what awful thing her daughter has done apart from her stark, unfeeling character. I feel sorry for the mother and the final two sentences emphasise that.

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