Comments on: get your poem on #94 http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/10/01/get-your-poem-on-94/ Mon, 03 May 2010 01:01:02 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=abc hourly 1 By: Scene from a Bar that Closed Ten Years Ago | Coyote Mercury http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/10/01/get-your-poem-on-94/comment-page-1/#comment-10389 Scene from a Bar that Closed Ten Years Ago | Coyote Mercury Fri, 30 Oct 2009 22:32:54 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=6702#comment-10389 [...] This is for Read Write Poem’s Prompt # 94. It’s an image prompt. A detail shot of the red and blue players on a foosball table called “My Angel and My Devil” by Thomas Hawk. Check out other people’s responses to the prompt here. [...] [...] This is for Read Write Poem’s Prompt # 94. It’s an image prompt. A detail shot of the red and blue players on a foosball table called “My Angel and My Devil” by Thomas Hawk. Check out other people’s responses to the prompt here. [...]

]]> By: mark Stratton http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/10/01/get-your-poem-on-94/comment-page-1/#comment-9601 mark Stratton Sun, 04 Oct 2009 12:55:54 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=6702#comment-9601 Suureal and fun. Thoroughly enjoyed this... Suureal and fun. Thoroughly enjoyed this…

]]> By: rallentanda http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/10/01/get-your-poem-on-94/comment-page-1/#comment-9557 rallentanda Sat, 03 Oct 2009 16:45:51 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=6702#comment-9557 I'm so disappointed I couldn't get the sound to work on my computer...looked so interesting! I’m so disappointed I couldn’t get the sound to work on my computer…looked so interesting!

]]> By: Just Someone http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/10/01/get-your-poem-on-94/comment-page-1/#comment-9538 Just Someone Sat, 03 Oct 2009 00:53:53 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=6702#comment-9538 http://monthofapril2008.blogspot.com/2009/10/riddle-of-life.html http://monthofapril2008.blogspot.com/2009/10/riddle-of-life.html

]]> By: wordsculptor http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/10/01/get-your-poem-on-94/comment-page-1/#comment-9523 wordsculptor Fri, 02 Oct 2009 18:54:42 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=6702#comment-9523 Photo: Thomas Hawk Face off. I am not the definer of space you are my boundary you my shadow you my opponent my nemesis. In my steel sprung tension I face you sin red viewing holy white we cannot touch or fall in love but dance to the vagueries of dextrous demi-gods. Photo: Thomas Hawk
Face off.

I am not the definer of space
you are my boundary
you my shadow
you my opponent
my nemesis.
In my steel sprung tension
I face you
sin red viewing holy white
we cannot touch
or fall in love
but dance to the vagueries
of dextrous demi-gods.

]]> By: velveteenrabbi http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/10/01/get-your-poem-on-94/comment-page-1/#comment-9513 velveteenrabbi Fri, 02 Oct 2009 13:41:05 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=6702#comment-9513 Once again I didn't manage to write to the prompt, but I did write a poem this week even so: Permeable http://velveteenrabbi.blogs.com/blog/2009/10/permeable-a-poem-for-sukkot.html Once again I didn’t manage to write to the prompt, but I did write a poem this week even so:

Permeable
http://velveteenrabbi.blogs.com/blog/2009/10/permeable-a-poem-for-sukkot.html

]]> By: derrick http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/10/01/get-your-poem-on-94/comment-page-1/#comment-9510 derrick Fri, 02 Oct 2009 10:10:54 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=6702#comment-9510 Hi Rall, Given the current conditions in the South Pacific, I'll take the medication, thanks! Hi Rall,

Given the current conditions in the South Pacific, I’ll take the medication, thanks!

]]> By: Nathan Landau http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/10/01/get-your-poem-on-94/comment-page-1/#comment-9504 Nathan Landau Fri, 02 Oct 2009 07:14:30 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=6702#comment-9504 Tried rocking the prompt this week, but it didn't fly right. Here's something else I cobbled together: <a href="http://poemsaboutnothinginparticular.blogspot.com/2009/10/jubilee-year.html" rel="nofollow">Jubilee Year</a> Thanks for the photo prompt, Nathan. I'll keep plugging away at it and maybe things'll assemble themselves. Tried rocking the prompt this week, but it didn’t fly right. Here’s something else I cobbled together:

Jubilee Year

Thanks for the photo prompt, Nathan. I’ll keep plugging away at it and maybe things’ll assemble themselves.

]]> By: Linda Fraser http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/10/01/get-your-poem-on-94/comment-page-1/#comment-9495 Linda Fraser Fri, 02 Oct 2009 00:47:40 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=6702#comment-9495 I enjoyed your poem and the questions you posed. Instant gratification is a strong force to be reckoned with these days. The choices aren't nearly as clear as red and white foosball players. Thanks for this great poem, Marian. I enjoyed your poem and the questions you posed. Instant gratification is a strong force to be reckoned with these days. The choices aren’t nearly as clear as red and white foosball players. Thanks for this great poem, Marian.

]]> By: Cynthia Short http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/10/01/get-your-poem-on-94/comment-page-1/#comment-9494 Cynthia Short Thu, 01 Oct 2009 22:41:50 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=6702#comment-9494 I could not find where to make a comment on your blog site, so here it is! I loved your piece..yes it was very dark and tortured, and that is what made it very good! The repeating of the word "correctly" after the first few times really became upsetting, which was perfect. I could not find where to make a comment on your blog site, so here it is! I loved your piece..yes it was very dark and tortured, and that is what made it very good! The repeating of the word “correctly” after the first few times really became upsetting, which was perfect.

]]> By: Linda Fraser http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/10/01/get-your-poem-on-94/comment-page-1/#comment-9493 Linda Fraser Thu, 01 Oct 2009 22:15:58 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=6702#comment-9493 I spent the whole week visiting trees in the north of southern Ontario while you were composing this. Red leaves, yellow leaves.... =D. Your poem is so fun, your highness. I really enjoyed reading it. Merci. I spent the whole week visiting trees in the north of southern Ontario while you were composing this. Red leaves, yellow leaves…. =D. Your poem is so fun, your highness. I really enjoyed reading it. Merci.

]]> By: Linda Fraser http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/10/01/get-your-poem-on-94/comment-page-1/#comment-9491 Linda Fraser Thu, 01 Oct 2009 21:44:47 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=6702#comment-9491 <a href="http://livingintheeasternwoodlands.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">Living In The Eastern Woodlands. My poem is Puttin' on the Jitz</a> Living In The Eastern Woodlands. My poem is Puttin’ on the Jitz

]]> By: David Moolten http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/10/01/get-your-poem-on-94/comment-page-1/#comment-9490 David Moolten Thu, 01 Oct 2009 20:31:44 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=6702#comment-9490 I like how you divide the poem in terms of time and innocence into two stanzas, and how in the second stanza the sentences are more gritty, more terse, fitting the ominous evolution of things. The questions, open-ended as they are become a thread of hope, of things yet undefined or undecided. I like how you divide the poem in terms of time and innocence into two stanzas, and how in the second stanza the sentences are more gritty, more terse, fitting the ominous evolution of things. The questions, open-ended as they are become a thread of hope, of things yet undefined or undecided.

]]> By: David Moolten http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/10/01/get-your-poem-on-94/comment-page-1/#comment-9483 David Moolten Thu, 01 Oct 2009 19:01:00 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=6702#comment-9483 Touche. Very witty, well imagined and sustained. I suppose one would need an ex-marine receptionist under the circumstances. Remind me not to divulge any further personal details about myself... Touche. Very witty, well imagined and sustained. I suppose one would need an ex-marine receptionist under the circumstances. Remind me not to divulge any further personal details about myself…

]]> By: Nathan http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/10/01/get-your-poem-on-94/comment-page-1/#comment-9481 Nathan Thu, 01 Oct 2009 17:42:32 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=6702#comment-9481 New age? Most of the time it's more like old age, I think. Great work, Rallentanda. New age? Most of the time it’s more like old age, I think.
Great work, Rallentanda.

]]> By: tumblewords http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/10/01/get-your-poem-on-94/comment-page-1/#comment-9480 tumblewords Thu, 01 Oct 2009 17:32:32 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=6702#comment-9480 Thanks for the prompt! <a href="http://firsttumblewords.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">Nadir of a Summit</a> Thanks for the prompt!

Nadir of a Summit

]]> By: Lawrence Gladeview http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/10/01/get-your-poem-on-94/comment-page-1/#comment-9479 Lawrence Gladeview Thu, 01 Oct 2009 17:19:44 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=6702#comment-9479 well nathan this image coupled with my current bradbury reading produced Degrees of Separation, it was the placement and color that really pulled the trigger. http://beatnikprose.blogspot.com/2009/10/degrees-of-separation.html enjoy- lawrence well nathan this image coupled with my current bradbury reading produced Degrees of Separation, it was the placement and color that really pulled the trigger.

http://beatnikprose.blogspot.com/2009/10/degrees-of-separation.html

enjoy-
lawrence

]]> By: Neil Reid http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/10/01/get-your-poem-on-94/comment-page-1/#comment-9478 Neil Reid Thu, 01 Oct 2009 17:07:50 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=6702#comment-9478 Brother, can you spare a dime? Brother, brother http://bearlyaudible.wordpress.com/2009/10/01/brother-brother/ Brother, can you spare a dime?

Brother, brother
http://bearlyaudible.wordpress.com/2009/10/01/brother-brother/

]]> By: Rallentanda http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/10/01/get-your-poem-on-94/comment-page-1/#comment-9477 Rallentanda Thu, 01 Oct 2009 16:54:54 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=6702#comment-9477 Hi Derrick Hmmm...2 solutions to this mood state 1. Medication or 2.Lots of frolicking and cavorting on a tropical island in the South Pacific Hi Derrick
Hmmm…2 solutions to this mood state
1. Medication or
2.Lots of frolicking and cavorting on a tropical island in the South Pacific

]]> By: barbara_y http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/10/01/get-your-poem-on-94/comment-page-1/#comment-9475 barbara_y Thu, 01 Oct 2009 15:57:57 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=6702#comment-9475 There was a time when I carried ten pens in my pocket protector. And used every one for something different. There was a time when I carried ten pens in my pocket protector. And used every one for something different.

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