Comments on: read write prompt #83: words are up! http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/07/10/read-write-prompt-83-read-write-word-19/ Mon, 22 Mar 2010 08:35:45 -0600 http://wordpress.org/?v=abc hourly 1 By: hajar http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/07/10/read-write-prompt-83-read-write-word-19/comment-page-1/#comment-6795 hajar Mon, 20 Jul 2009 16:53:21 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=3771#comment-6795 Flower of the valley So many words inside my broken heart I can’t say them, I can feel them I tried to forget my awful past But eyes of spite make that forbidden I called you to rescue me but you didn’t answer Flower of the valley! Make from my soul your shelter Flower of the valley! I ask you to love me Love me as you wish Make my world a sea And let me swim as a fish Melt in my mouth like the snow Dance in my heart Make me forget my sorrow Let your warmth in my blood runs too fast Flower of the valley! I want you to be my storm Flower of the valley! I want you to be my own home Be my wealth and my misery Be the moon, the trees and the winds Be my reality, my fantasy Be the sun, the oceans and the fields Change my name and my history Let your leaves wipe my tears Burn the papers of my identity Your love can wreck all my fears Flower of the valley, oh! Flower of the valley Love me just for seconds I don’t ask you to love me for ever Make me smile only for moments Your love will make me feel safer Be the earth that I walk on Treat me as the harp is treated Stay with me, don’t leave me alone Melt in my body as the candle is melted Flower of the valley! Why on earth don’t you answer? Flower of the valley! I want you to be my lover… Flower of the valley

So many words inside my broken heart

I can’t say them, I can feel them

I tried to forget my awful past

But eyes of spite make that forbidden

I called you to rescue me but you didn’t answer

Flower of the valley!

Make from my soul your shelter

Flower of the valley!

I ask you to love me

Love me as you wish

Make my world a sea

And let me swim as a fish

Melt in my mouth like the snow

Dance in my heart

Make me forget my sorrow

Let your warmth in my blood runs too fast

Flower of the valley!

I want you to be my storm

Flower of the valley!

I want you to be my own home

Be my wealth and my misery

Be the moon, the trees and the winds

Be my reality, my fantasy

Be the sun, the oceans and the fields

Change my name and my history

Let your leaves wipe my tears

Burn the papers of my identity

Your love can wreck all my fears

Flower of the valley, oh! Flower of the valley

Love me just for seconds

I don’t ask you to love me for ever

Make me smile only for moments

Your love will make me feel safer

Be the earth that I walk on

Treat me as the harp is treated

Stay with me, don’t leave me alone

Melt in my body as the candle is melted

Flower of the valley!

Why on earth don’t you answer?

Flower of the valley!

I want you to be my lover…

]]> By: Jessica GC http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/07/10/read-write-prompt-83-read-write-word-19/comment-page-1/#comment-6796 Jessica GC Fri, 17 Jul 2009 02:32:11 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=3771#comment-6796 Great words! http://paperdreams-jgc.blogspot.com/2009/07/dear-rwp-and-getting-my-poem-on-with.html Great words!

http://paperdreams-jgc.blogspot.com/2009/07/dear-rwp-and-getting-my-poem-on-with.html

]]> By: Rallentanda http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/07/10/read-write-prompt-83-read-write-word-19/comment-page-1/#comment-6791 Rallentanda Thu, 16 Jul 2009 05:53:48 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=3771#comment-6791 10. I'd prefer to be described as a strange poet myself rather than narrator 10.
I’d prefer to be described as a strange poet myself
rather than narrator

]]> By: I Got A Wordle! « everything feeds process http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/07/10/read-write-prompt-83-read-write-word-19/comment-page-1/#comment-6790 I Got A Wordle! « everything feeds process Thu, 16 Jul 2009 05:40:18 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=3771#comment-6790 [...] Dance. Since I want to start off fresh with the prompts, I figure that I may as well start with the Read Write Word prompt I help to organize.  They are my favorites, after all.  Below is my [...] [...] Dance. Since I want to start off fresh with the prompts, I figure that I may as well start with the Read Write Word prompt I help to organize.  They are my favorites, after all.  Below is my [...]

]]> By: rmilana http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/07/10/read-write-prompt-83-read-write-word-19/comment-page-1/#comment-6792 rmilana Thu, 16 Jul 2009 04:03:45 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=3771#comment-6792 wow love those words *grab a note to write a poem again* yeepeee wow love those words *grab a note to write a poem again* yeepeee

]]> By: read write prompt #83: wordle love : mygorgeoussomewhere.org http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/07/10/read-write-prompt-83-read-write-word-19/comment-page-1/#comment-6793 read write prompt #83: wordle love : mygorgeoussomewhere.org Thu, 16 Jul 2009 01:42:40 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=3771#comment-6793 [...] piece is my response to Read Write Prompt #83, which uses words provided by Read Write Poem participants. I am exploring strange narrators [...] [...] piece is my response to Read Write Prompt #83, which uses words provided by Read Write Poem participants. I am exploring strange narrators [...]

]]> By: The Terrace http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/07/10/read-write-prompt-83-read-write-word-19/comment-page-1/#comment-6794 The Terrace Thu, 16 Jul 2009 01:02:51 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=3771#comment-6794 [...] poem was inspired by Read Write Poem Prompt #83: use as many or as few of the following words as you want. I used heart, slump, and sky. Loiter [...] [...] poem was inspired by Read Write Poem Prompt #83: use as many or as few of the following words as you want. I used heart, slump, and sky. Loiter [...]

]]> By: Dana http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/07/10/read-write-prompt-83-read-write-word-19/comment-page-1/#comment-6797 Dana Mon, 13 Jul 2009 20:57:45 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=3771#comment-6797 No worries. We're just trying to train people to post on the right posts, otherwise the whole community -- especially new participants -- get confused. No worries. We’re just trying to train people to post on the right posts, otherwise the whole community — especially new participants — get confused.

]]> By: Rallentanda http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/07/10/read-write-prompt-83-read-write-word-19/comment-page-1/#comment-6798 Rallentanda Mon, 13 Jul 2009 10:10:34 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=3771#comment-6798 Sorry but I just had to write it instantly otherwise I cant remember it . If I have to struggle it doesnt seem to work.. the poems just zap out themselves. I' ll put it on the next Thursday post as well. They are never exactly the same anyway.Sorry Dana. Sorry but I just had to write it instantly otherwise I cant remember it . If I have to struggle it doesnt seem to work.. the poems just zap out themselves. I’ ll put it on the next Thursday post as well. They are never exactly the same anyway.Sorry Dana.

]]> By: Rallentanda http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/07/10/read-write-prompt-83-read-write-word-19/comment-page-1/#comment-6799 Rallentanda Mon, 13 Jul 2009 10:02:09 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=3771#comment-6799 We have no hearts we lost them in the economic slump the homeless loiter about while madam in fur and manolo blahniks click clacks across the road to the beauty parlour reemerging with flaming red hair a contrast vision to the pale winter sky She drives in chauffeured car to a seance held monthly in the latest venue examining her varnished nails and glossy pages with sanguine interest nonchalant completely oblivious that acuity and erudition will forever elude her and her poodle coiffeured mind We have no hearts
we lost them in the economic slump
the homeless loiter about
while madam in fur and manolo blahniks
click clacks across the road
to the beauty parlour
reemerging with flaming red hair
a contrast vision to the pale winter sky

She drives in chauffeured car to a seance
held monthly in the latest venue
examining her varnished nails and glossy pages with sanguine interest nonchalant
completely oblivious that acuity and erudition
will forever elude her
and her poodle coiffeured mind

]]> By: Katie http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/07/10/read-write-prompt-83-read-write-word-19/comment-page-1/#comment-6800 Katie Mon, 13 Jul 2009 04:10:03 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=3771#comment-6800 I get so excited about these wordles, I just can't seem to help myself...and didn't read the post very well, either! I'll pay better attention next time, I promise! I get so excited about these wordles, I just can’t seem to help myself…and didn’t read the post very well, either! I’ll pay better attention next time, I promise!

]]> By: Dana http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/07/10/read-write-prompt-83-read-write-word-19/comment-page-1/#comment-6802 Dana Sun, 12 Jul 2009 19:28:05 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=3771#comment-6802 <strong>Please, please, please save your poems until Thursday's Get Your Poem On post. Since this prompt will serve as our weekly prompt, we really want your poem to get as much attention as possible.</strong> Please, please, please save your poems until Thursday’s Get Your Poem On post. Since this prompt will serve as our weekly prompt, we really want your poem to get as much attention as possible.

]]> By: Katie http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/07/10/read-write-prompt-83-read-write-word-19/comment-page-1/#comment-6803 Katie Sun, 12 Jul 2009 08:16:13 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=3771#comment-6803 http://intothewoode.blogspot.com/2009/07/at-close-of-day-poem-prompt.html LOOVED these words!!! http://intothewoode.blogspot.com/2009/07/at-close-of-day-poem-prompt.html
LOOVED these words!!!

]]> By: Phil Boiarski http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/07/10/read-write-prompt-83-read-write-word-19/comment-page-1/#comment-6804 Phil Boiarski Sat, 11 Jul 2009 22:03:18 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=3771#comment-6804 Pigeons in the rain lost birds loiter under the damp fur sky slump of clouds, thump of thunder, their little watch fob hearts drum in their feathered breasts to have the acuity to hear that purring beat, akin to a seer at a séance, sanguine, yet flaming. Pigeons in the rain

lost birds loiter under the damp fur sky
slump of clouds, thump of thunder,

their little watch fob hearts drum
in their feathered breasts

to have the acuity to hear
that purring beat,

akin to a seer
at a séance,

sanguine,
yet flaming.

]]> By: little miss scatterbrain http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/07/10/read-write-prompt-83-read-write-word-19/comment-page-1/#comment-6801 little miss scatterbrain Fri, 10 Jul 2009 11:08:20 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=3771#comment-6801 http://littlemisscatterbrain.blogspot.com/2009/07/i-feel-like-prompt.html http://littlemisscatterbrain.blogspot.com/2009/07/i-feel-like-prompt.html

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