Comments on: get your poem on #79 http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/06/18/get-your-poem-on-79-wordlicious/ Mon, 03 May 2010 01:01:02 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=abc hourly 1 By: Rallentanda http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/06/18/get-your-poem-on-79-wordlicious/comment-page-1/#comment-6473 Rallentanda Sun, 28 Jun 2009 09:47:41 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=3529#comment-6473 The huge folds of convoluted flesh smooth as vellum draped in sheer writhed in rhythm as she belly danced to the exotic strains of the middle east His eyes devoured her His hand shook as he threw gold coins at her feet She edged closer fixing her kohled intense gaze on him Suddenly the prospect of wrestling so awesome a tonnage struck a chord of fear in him and fortunately for him an inner sapient voice instructed him to leave now to go home to finish the bibliography to forget this night. The huge folds of convoluted flesh
smooth as vellum
draped in sheer
writhed in rhythm
as she belly danced to the exotic strains
of the middle east

His eyes devoured her
His hand shook as he threw
gold coins at her feet
She edged closer
fixing her kohled intense gaze
on him

Suddenly the prospect of
wrestling
so awesome a tonnage
struck a chord of fear in him
and fortunately for him an inner sapient voice
instructed him

to leave now
to go home
to finish the bibliography
to forget this night.

]]> By: Takakow http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/06/18/get-your-poem-on-79-wordlicious/comment-page-1/#comment-6503 Takakow Wed, 24 Jun 2009 02:52:04 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=3529#comment-6503 Pagan What Pagan King streamed onion’s tears As arriving with sapient sword in hand Demanded of a monkish cloister Their holy herbal bibliography His furtive eyes to devour For some convoluted recipe Of rare spices and bark To reverse the mist of death’s shroud Which did drape over youthful blushes That only hours before Had in a fairy circle played But mistakenly swallowed The trumpet born of velum Who’s poison inside now pummelled and tore Making the young innocent’s belly dance Feverishly in haste that pagan worked possessed As the Ferryman cast a tether Upon the realm’s earthly bank Followed imminently with a demand For his rightful tonnage Lest the King have an antidote For his moribund heiress; And as light sputtered, the bees toil spent A father gave thanks and of past wrongs he repent. Pagan

What Pagan King streamed onion’s tears
As arriving with sapient sword in hand
Demanded of a monkish cloister
Their holy herbal bibliography
His furtive eyes to devour
For some convoluted recipe
Of rare spices and bark
To reverse the mist of death’s shroud
Which did drape over youthful blushes
That only hours before
Had in a fairy circle played
But mistakenly swallowed
The trumpet born of velum
Who’s poison inside now pummelled and tore
Making the young innocent’s belly dance
Feverishly in haste that pagan worked possessed
As the Ferryman cast a tether
Upon the realm’s earthly bank
Followed imminently with a demand
For his rightful tonnage
Lest the King have an antidote
For his moribund heiress;
And as light sputtered, the bees toil spent
A father gave thanks and of past wrongs he repent.

]]> By: gautami tripathy http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/06/18/get-your-poem-on-79-wordlicious/comment-page-1/#comment-6502 gautami tripathy Sun, 21 Jun 2009 10:46:05 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=3529#comment-6502 Better late than never! http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2009/06/x-y-z-all-three-axes.html Better late than never!

http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2009/06/x-y-z-all-three-axes.html

]]> By: Erin Davis http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/06/18/get-your-poem-on-79-wordlicious/comment-page-1/#comment-6501 Erin Davis Fri, 19 Jun 2009 20:04:50 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=3529#comment-6501 Oh, this one was a challenge! It's a day late, but here it is: http://freckledwriter.blogspot.com/2009/06/grieving.html Oh, this one was a challenge! It’s a day late, but here it is:

http://freckledwriter.blogspot.com/2009/06/grieving.html

]]> By: Radio Nowhere http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/06/18/get-your-poem-on-79-wordlicious/comment-page-1/#comment-6500 Radio Nowhere Fri, 19 Jun 2009 15:08:19 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=3529#comment-6500 Sorry it's late this week. I didn't use all the words. Enjoy! http://strattonm.wordpress.com/2009/06/19/get-your-poem-on-79-wordlicious/ Sorry it’s late this week. I didn’t use all the words.

Enjoy!

http://strattonm.wordpress.com/2009/06/19/get-your-poem-on-79-wordlicious/

]]> By: get your poem on #79: Wordlicious! « Mark's Notebook http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/06/18/get-your-poem-on-79-wordlicious/comment-page-1/#comment-6499 get your poem on #79: Wordlicious! « Mark's Notebook Fri, 19 Jun 2009 15:04:24 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=3529#comment-6499 [...] ReadWritePoem [...] [...] ReadWritePoem [...]

]]> By: Jeeves http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/06/18/get-your-poem-on-79-wordlicious/comment-page-1/#comment-6498 Jeeves Fri, 19 Jun 2009 05:11:09 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=3529#comment-6498 http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2009/06/x-y-z-all-three-axes.html Posted on behalf of Gautami... http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2009/06/x-y-z-all-three-axes.html

Posted on behalf of Gautami…

]]> By: wayne http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/06/18/get-your-poem-on-79-wordlicious/comment-page-1/#comment-6497 wayne Thu, 18 Jun 2009 22:36:15 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=3529#comment-6497 here is mine with many of the words here is mine with many of the words

]]> By: godess http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/06/18/get-your-poem-on-79-wordlicious/comment-page-1/#comment-6496 godess Thu, 18 Jun 2009 21:03:27 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=3529#comment-6496 i just wrote another one. i will call it as ''cloaked thoughts'' when i lost the track of place amidst some funny senseless conversations, them and us. http://etopiakilla.blogspot.com/ i just wrote another one.

i will call it as ”cloaked thoughts” when i lost the track of place amidst some funny senseless conversations, them and us.

http://etopiakilla.blogspot.com/

]]> By: godess http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/06/18/get-your-poem-on-79-wordlicious/comment-page-1/#comment-6495 godess Thu, 18 Jun 2009 20:09:56 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=3529#comment-6495 ''so''.. here's mine called ''so..'' http://etopiakilla.blogspot.com/ ‘’so”.. here’s mine
called ‘’so..”

http://etopiakilla.blogspot.com/

]]> By: Dana http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/06/18/get-your-poem-on-79-wordlicious/comment-page-1/#comment-6494 Dana Thu, 18 Jun 2009 15:06:16 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=3529#comment-6494 Tiel, I had to fish it out of spam again. Eventually, the filter should "learn." Tiel, I had to fish it out of spam again. Eventually, the filter should “learn.”

]]> By: Claire HM http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/06/18/get-your-poem-on-79-wordlicious/comment-page-1/#comment-6493 Claire HM Thu, 18 Jun 2009 14:55:52 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=3529#comment-6493 I went for the selective approach: <a href="http://thisbrokensky.wordpress.com/2009/06/18/read-write-poem-79/" rel="nofollow">Devour</a> I went for the selective approach:

Devour

]]> By: lawrence gladeview http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/06/18/get-your-poem-on-79-wordlicious/comment-page-1/#comment-6492 lawrence gladeview Thu, 18 Jun 2009 14:32:09 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=3529#comment-6492 didn't get them all in there, but a damn good amount! http://beatnikprose.blogspot.com/2009/06/votive-plush.html#comments hope you enjoy! didn’t get them all in there, but a damn good amount!

http://beatnikprose.blogspot.com/2009/06/votive-plush.html#comments

hope you enjoy!

]]> By: Tiel Aisha Ansari http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/06/18/get-your-poem-on-79-wordlicious/comment-page-1/#comment-6491 Tiel Aisha Ansari Thu, 18 Jun 2009 14:27:57 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=3529#comment-6491 Still can't get the site to take my comments from Opera. Weird... anyway here's my poem from today's words: <a href="http://knockingfrominside.blogspot.com/2009/06/volume-and-final-pages.html" rel="nofollow">Volume and Final Pages</a> Still can’t get the site to take my comments from Opera. Weird…

anyway here’s my poem from today’s words: Volume and Final Pages

]]> By: Tiel Aisha Ansari http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/06/18/get-your-poem-on-79-wordlicious/comment-page-1/#comment-6490 Tiel Aisha Ansari Thu, 18 Jun 2009 14:25:12 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=3529#comment-6490 <a href="http://knockingfrominside.blogspot.com/2009/06/volume-and-final-pages.html" rel="nofollow">Volume and Final Pages</a> Volume and Final Pages

]]> By: laughing dove http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/06/18/get-your-poem-on-79-wordlicious/comment-page-1/#comment-6489 laughing dove Thu, 18 Jun 2009 13:24:29 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=3529#comment-6489 Here is mine: <a title="That Stick, That Wind" href="http://laughingdove.haystravelogue.com/free-form/2009/06/that-stick-that-wind/." rel="nofollow">That Stick, That Wind</a> Here is mine: That Stick, That Wind

]]> By: Nicole Nicholson http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/06/18/get-your-poem-on-79-wordlicious/comment-page-1/#comment-6488 Nicole Nicholson Thu, 18 Jun 2009 12:41:30 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=3529#comment-6488 Oh! Forgot to leave my comment with the link above! This was a challenge, and a very fun one...anything that adds to my vocabulary is a *good* thing. Oh! Forgot to leave my comment with the link above! This was a challenge, and a very fun one…anything that adds to my vocabulary is a *good* thing.

]]> By: Nicole Nicholson http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/06/18/get-your-poem-on-79-wordlicious/comment-page-1/#comment-6487 Nicole Nicholson Thu, 18 Jun 2009 12:40:30 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=3529#comment-6487 http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2009/06/16/on-an-average-afternoon-on-north-high-street-in-columbus-ohio/ http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2009/06/16/on-an-average-afternoon-on-north-high-street-in-columbus-ohio/

]]> By: James http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/06/18/get-your-poem-on-79-wordlicious/comment-page-1/#comment-6486 James Thu, 18 Jun 2009 12:17:02 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=3529#comment-6486 Here's mine: <a href="http://coyotemercury.com/blog1/2009/06/17/waking-for-the-descent/" rel="nofollow">Waking for the Descent</a> Here’s mine:

Waking for the Descent

]]> By: Ingrid (durable pigments) http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/06/18/get-your-poem-on-79-wordlicious/comment-page-1/#comment-6485 Ingrid (durable pigments) Thu, 18 Jun 2009 09:33:51 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=3529#comment-6485 Here's my offering... I'm not sure how many of the original words made it all the way through to this draft, but I see at least a few of them there. <a href="http://durablepigments.wordpress.com/2009/06/18/pallavi-at-table/" rel="nofollow">Pallavi At Table</a> Here’s my offering… I’m not sure how many of the original words made it all the way through to this draft, but I see at least a few of them there.

Pallavi At Table

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