by Deb Scott
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having nearly disappeared for the month of April (alas) I am back with something sparked by the Read Write Image this week:
http://havingwrit.blogspot.com/2009/05/evening-daydream.html
I can’t wait to catch up on reading the poetry from last month!
This was a good motivation for revising one of my April poems that I wasn’t yet happy with. Thanks!
http://freckledwriter.blogspot.com/2009/05/readwriterevise.html
I used the photo prompt.
Let a Boat Rest Here
loved the photo–but nothing to show for it…
instead, I’ve been playing with this twitter magnetic poetry site and posted a few poems and want to encourage everybody here to go play over there! it’s really fun.
http://artpredator.wordpress.com/2009/05/04/twitter-magnetic-poetry-site/
This is a new poem, inspired by a certain period in my life.
Behind Guises
http://thinkingcities.blogspot.com/2009/05/behind-guises.html
this is the poem I wrote in response to the image you provided
http://knittingthewind.blogspot.com/2009/05/this-here-poem-was-written-for-weekly.html
I’m posting a link to my new poem here
http://eneri-hot.blogspot.com/2009/05/be-with-me.html#comments
Revision prompt for me:
Holy Sonnet I (Mark II)
yayy! finally its thurs, can i post my poem now?:) its not related to the image though!
pls read my ‘The orange tree’ here, thanks!
http://etopiakilla.blogspot.com/
No revision but what a great idea. I did revist the word: “confession”.
http://deowriter.wordpress.com/2009/05/07/sunday-scribblings-confess/
pants/shorts
How Blessed Is the Man Whose Quiver Is Full
A walk down a darkened path
I swallowed my own medicine ;^} with The knife thrower.
New, revised, recycled? It’s all good!
Here’s one for the critique circle. Yes, I know this is not a critique forum. This is an invitation to help me revision.
This is a recycled one……:)
I used the picture prompt for “evolving”
http://therer2doors-thespacebetweenwords.blogspot.com/2009/05/evolving.html
using my “sunset” photo from Cuba
here is todays
Si Tu Me Miras (watching the sunset)
Here’s my read write image poem!
http://cassandralee.tumblr.com/post/104748426
so glad people are writing and/or revising still!
here’s my thursday offering: the romantic …
now that napowrimo is over, i’m using a password on my poetry posts again. if you need it, email me: caroleesherwood at gmail
http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2009/05/wanderer.html
I forgot to mention. Mine is a revised work.
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Here is my revision. There is a link to the original poem at the bottom of the post. I would love some feedback.
Ode For a Rain Drop
here’s mine…
revised poem
Better late than never, here’s my final NaPoWriMo entry:
Going to Grayland