napowrimo #30: leave a line, take a line

by the Read Write Poem Staff

This is it, your last prompt of the month, your last NaPoWriMo poem waiting to be written and put to bed.

In the spirit of 30 days of sharing poetry, we thought it would be fun to ring out National Poetry Month with a giant collaborative line-by-line poem! Consider today’s prompt a little like the “take a penny, leave a penny” dish at the quickie-mart. To begin, help us write a kickin’ poem by contributing a line in the comments section. It’s ok to come back often, just try not to leave two in a row.

Next, because we’re not through with you just yet … you are invited to choose your favorite line as inspiration or a starting point for a poem of your own. Please be sure to give credit where credit is due and attribute your chosen line’s author!

All together now … Leave a line (in the comments section), take a line (to write your own poem).

It’s that easy!

Today, post your favorite poem you wrote in April at the “Get Your Poem On” post, or post today’s poem. The GYPO is waiting for you (it’s a different post, right?). Whenever you are ready; it will stay open for a week.

And don’t forget to go read the poems of others in this wonderful writing community. We’re all in this NaPoWriMo “mess” (ha ha!) together; let’s support each other in the insanity that is was writing (every day)!

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36 comments to napowrimo #30: leave a line, take a line

  • A handful of feathers

  • Deb

    carries leftover conversations

  • between the birds and the trees

  • Nestling secrets is a community of nocturnal riot

  • laid bare in trembling anticipation

  • I clutched at my vacuumed belly

  • the bird on the lampshade turns away from me

  • the path of the rainbow

  • bleeds out under my feet

  • soft like tiny feet

  • the raindrops rustle the leaves

  • (So far we have these, keep it going and grab the whole poem as you go, now. Makes it easier to read and work :-) .)

    A handful of feathers
    carries leftover conversations
    between the birds and the trees
    Nestling secrets is a community of nocturnal riot
    laid bare in trembling anticipation
    I clutched at my vacuumed belly
    the bird on the lampshade turns away from me
    the path of the rainbow
    bleeds out under my feet
    soft like tiny feet
    the raindrops rustle the leaves

  • soaking the spring-wakening fertile earth

  • easing memories of last summer’s fires

  • painting a colorful picture with words

  • A handful of feathers
    carries leftover conversations
    between the birds and the trees
    Nestling secrets is a community of nocturnal riot
    laid bare in trembling anticipation
    I clutched at my vacuumed belly
    the bird on the lampshade turns away from me
    the path of the rainbow
    bleeds out under my feet
    soft like tiny feet
    the raindrops rustle the leaves
    soaking the spring-wakening fertile earth
    painting a colorful picture with words
    as black as a bird flying out the window

  • A handful of feathers
    carries leftover conversations
    between the birds and the trees
    Nestling secrets is a community of nocturnal riot
    laid bare in trembling anticipation
    I clutched at my vacuumed belly
    the bird on the lampshade turns away from me
    the path of the rainbow
    bleeds out under my feet
    soft like tiny feet
    the raindrops rustle the leaves
    soaking the spring-wakening fertile earth
    painting a colorful picture with words
    as black as a bird flying out the window
    its wings flapping toward freedom

  • A handful of feathers
    carries leftover conversations
    between the birds and the trees
    Nestling secrets is a community of nocturnal riot
    laid bare in trembling anticipation
    I clutched at my vacuumed belly
    the bird on the lampshade turns away from me
    the path of the rainbow
    bleeds out under my feet
    soft like tiny feet
    the raindrops rustle the leaves
    soaking the spring-wakening fertile earth
    painting a colorful picture with words
    as black as a bird flying out the window
    its wings flapping toward freedom
    blue skies more than a memory

  • Liz

    in the branches of a blighted elm tree

  • A handful of feathers
    carries leftover conversations
    between the birds and the trees
    Nestling secrets is a community of nocturnal riot
    laid bare in trembling anticipation
    I clutched at my vacuumed belly
    the bird on the lampshade turns away from me
    the path of the rainbow
    bleeds out under my feet
    soft like tiny feet
    the raindrops rustle the leaves
    soaking the spring-wakening fertile earth
    painting a colorful picture with words
    as black as a bird flying out the window
    its wings flapping toward freedom
    blue skies more than a memory
    in the branches of a blighted elm tree
    clouds dare not approach

  • A handful of feathers
    carries leftover conversations
    between the birds and the trees
    Nestling secrets is a community of nocturnal riot
    laid bare in trembling anticipation
    I clutched at my vacuumed belly
    the bird on the lampshade turns away from me
    the path of the rainbow
    bleeds out under my feet
    soft like tiny feet
    the raindrops rustle the leaves
    soaking the spring-wakening fertile earth
    painting a colorful picture with words
    as black as a bird flying out the window
    its wings flapping toward freedom
    blue skies more than a memory
    in the branches of a blighted elm tree
    clouds dare not approach
    Calypso coral sky, unexpected arrangement

  • A handful of feathers
    carries leftover conversations
    between the birds and the trees
    Nestling secrets is a community of nocturnal riot
    laid bare in trembling anticipation
    I clutched at my vacuumed belly
    the bird on the lampshade turns away from me
    the path of the rainbow
    bleeds out under my feet
    soft like tiny feet
    the raindrops rustle the leaves
    soaking the spring-wakening fertile earth
    painting a colorful picture with words
    as black as a bird flying out the window
    its wings flapping toward freedom
    blue skies more than a memory
    in the branches of a blighted elm tree
    clouds dare not approach
    Calypso coral sky, unexpected arrangement
    of blank slate and overworked canvas

  • I take a deep breath and blow the feathers

  • A handful of feathers
    carries leftover conversations
    between the birds and the trees
    Nestling secrets is a community of nocturnal riot
    laid bare in trembling anticipation
    I clutched at my vacuumed belly
    the bird on the lampshade turns away from me
    the path of the rainbow
    bleeds out under my feet
    soft like tiny feet
    the raindrops rustle the leaves
    soaking the spring-wakening fertile earth
    painting a colorful picture with words
    as black as a bird flying out the window
    its wings flapping toward freedom
    blue skies more than a memory
    in the branches of a blighted elm tree
    clouds dare not approach
    Calypso coral sky, unexpected arrangement
    of blank slate and overworked canvas
    I take a deep breath and blow the feathers

    ruffling overused terms of endearment

  • loving inhibitions caress the clouds

    (and here’s yesterday’s, I had a huge essay to write and had no time for NaPoWriMo: http://cassandralee.tumblr.com/post/102007844)

  • A handful of feathers
    carries leftover conversations
    between the birds and the trees
    Nestling secrets is a community of nocturnal riot
    laid bare in trembling anticipation
    I clutched at my vacuumed belly
    the bird on the lampshade turns away from me
    the path of the rainbow
    bleeds out under my feet
    soft like tiny feet
    the raindrops rustle the leaves
    soaking the spring-wakening fertile earth
    painting a colorful picture with words
    as black as a bird flying out the window
    its wings flapping toward freedom
    blue skies more than a memory
    in the branches of a blighted elm tree
    clouds dare not approach
    Calypso coral sky, unexpected arrangement
    of blank slate and overworked canvas
    I take a deep breath and blow the feathers
    ruffling overused terms of endearment,

    blowing out a lifetime of broken dreams and forgotten promises.

  • slow rhythm pounding in my ears

  • Oops, I forgot to post the whole poem. :) Here ’tis:

    A handful of feathers
    carries leftover conversations
    between the birds and the trees
    Nestling secrets is a community of nocturnal riot
    laid bare in trembling anticipation
    I clutched at my vacuumed belly
    the bird on the lampshade turns away from me
    the path of the rainbow
    bleeds out under my feet
    soft like tiny feet
    the raindrops rustle the leaves
    soaking the spring-wakening fertile earth
    painting a colorful picture with words
    as black as a bird flying out the window
    its wings flapping toward freedom
    blue skies more than a memory
    in the branches of a blighted elm tree
    clouds dare not approach
    Calypso coral sky, unexpected arrangement
    of blank slate and overworked canvas
    I take a deep breath and blow the feathers
    ruffling overused terms of endearment,
    blowing out a lifetime of broken dreams and forgotten promises.
    Slow rhythm pounding in my ears,

  • A handful of feathers
    carries leftover conversations
    between the birds and the trees
    Nestling secrets is a community of nocturnal riot
    laid bare in trembling anticipation
    I clutched at my vacuumed belly
    the bird on the lampshade turns away from me
    the path of the rainbow
    bleeds out under my feet
    soft like tiny feet
    the raindrops rustle the leaves
    soaking the spring-wakening fertile earth
    painting a colorful picture with words
    as black as a bird flying out the window
    its wings flapping toward freedom
    blue skies more than a memory
    in the branches of a blighted elm tree
    clouds dare not approach
    Calypso coral sky, unexpected arrangement
    of blank slate and overworked canvas
    I take a deep breath and blow the feathers
    ruffling overused terms of endearment,
    loving inhibitions caress the clouds
    blowing out a lifetime of broken dreams and forgotten promises.
    Slow rhythm pounding in my ears,
    tears dotting my lashes and trembling in anticipation for the grand finale.

  • oops…. i meant *grand finale

  • sounding like dylan singing in some distant gravel pit

  • (Thanks, cookie-chan, for grabbing Cassie’s line and inserting it! Good job!)

    * * *

    A handful of feathers
    carries leftover conversations
    between the birds and the trees
    Nestling secrets is a community of nocturnal riot
    laid bare in trembling anticipation
    I clutched at my vacuumed belly
    the bird on the lampshade turns away from me
    the path of the rainbow
    bleeds out under my feet
    soft like tiny feet
    the raindrops rustle the leaves
    soaking the spring-wakening fertile earth
    painting a colorful picture with words
    as black as a bird flying out the window
    its wings flapping toward freedom
    blue skies more than a memory
    in the branches of a blighted elm tree
    clouds dare not approach
    Calypso coral sky, unexpected arrangement
    of blank slate and overworked canvas
    I take a deep breath and blow the feathers
    ruffling overused terms of endearment,
    loving inhibitions caress the clouds
    blowing out a lifetime of broken dreams and forgotten promises.
    Slow rhythm pounding in my ears,
    tears dotting my lashes and trembling in anticipation for the grand finale.
    sounding like dylan singing in some distant gravel pit

  • A handful of feathers
    carries leftover conversations
    between the birds and the trees
    Nestling secrets is a community of nocturnal riot
    laid bare in trembling anticipation
    I clutched at my vacuumed belly
    the bird on the lampshade turns away from me
    the path of the rainbow
    bleeds out under my feet
    soft like tiny feet
    the raindrops rustle the leaves
    soaking the spring-wakening fertile earth
    painting a colorful picture with words
    as black as a bird flying out the window
    its wings flapping toward freedom
    blue skies more than a memory
    in the branches of a blighted elm tree
    clouds dare not approach
    Calypso coral sky, unexpected arrangement
    of blank slate and overworked canvas
    I take a deep breath and blow the feathers
    ruffling overused terms of endearment,
    loving inhibitions caress the clouds
    blowing out a lifetime of broken dreams and forgotten promises.
    Slow rhythm pounding in my ears,
    tears dotting my lashes and trembling in anticipation for the grand finale.
    sounding like dylan singing in some distant gravel pit
    still lingering, echoing

  • [...] NaPoWriMo Read Write Poem Prompt #30 [...]

  • A handful of feathers
    carries leftover conversations
    between the birds and the trees
    Nestling secrets is a community of nocturnal riot
    laid bare in trembling anticipation
    I clutched at my vacuumed belly
    the bird on the lampshade turns away from me
    the path of the rainbow
    bleeds out under my feet
    soft like tiny feet
    the raindrops rustle the leaves
    soaking the spring-wakening fertile earth
    painting a colorful picture with words
    as black as a bird flying out the window
    its wings flapping toward freedom
    blue skies more than a memory
    in the branches of a blighted elm tree
    clouds dare not approach
    Calypso coral sky, unexpected arrangement
    of blank slate and overworked canvas
    I take a deep breath and blow the feathers
    ruffling overused terms of endearment,
    loving inhibitions caress the clouds
    blowing out a lifetime of broken dreams and forgotten promises.
    Slow rhythm pounding in my ears,
    tears dotting my lashes and trembling in anticipation for the grand finale.
    sounding like dylan singing in some distant gravel pit
    still lingering, echoing
    stones roll, times change

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