Comments on: read write prompt #71: it’s all about the first line http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/03/20/read-write-prompt-72-its-all-about-the-first-line/ Mon, 03 May 2010 01:01:02 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=abc hourly 1 By: writing a poem to write a poem shouldn’t be allowed but it is | Stoney Moss http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/03/20/read-write-prompt-72-its-all-about-the-first-line/comment-page-1/#comment-4298 writing a poem to write a poem shouldn’t be allowed but it is | Stoney Moss Mon, 30 Mar 2009 15:53:32 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=2280#comment-4298 [...] I don’t know. I started one place, from the first line of course, the poetry prompt from Christine’s first line prompt at RWP a number of days ago. And I added an image to the mix. One from the artist Christine used for the [...] [...] I don’t know. I started one place, from the first line of course, the poetry prompt from Christine’s first line prompt at RWP a number of days ago. And I added an image to the mix. One from the artist Christine used for the [...]

]]> By: Dreams, Like Dew in the Early Morning | Coyote Mercury http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/03/20/read-write-prompt-72-its-all-about-the-first-line/comment-page-1/#comment-4297 Dreams, Like Dew in the Early Morning | Coyote Mercury Thu, 26 Mar 2009 12:08:34 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=2280#comment-4297 [...] is for Read Write Poem: It’s all about the First Line. The idea was that participants would contribute a line of poetry and then choose someone [...] [...] is for Read Write Poem: It’s all about the First Line. The idea was that participants would contribute a line of poetry and then choose someone [...]

]]> By: Holly Mac http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/03/20/read-write-prompt-72-its-all-about-the-first-line/comment-page-1/#comment-4296 Holly Mac Wed, 25 Mar 2009 16:31:00 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=2280#comment-4296 The cavity of the beast whispers of moonfish, thick-skinned and arrogant The cavity of the beast whispers of moonfish, thick-skinned and arrogant

]]> By: Jeeves http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/03/20/read-write-prompt-72-its-all-about-the-first-line/comment-page-1/#comment-4291 Jeeves Wed, 25 Mar 2009 04:55:31 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=2280#comment-4291 If amnesia were a disease, I would excuse myself If amnesia were a disease, I would excuse myself

]]> By: one more believer http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/03/20/read-write-prompt-72-its-all-about-the-first-line/comment-page-1/#comment-4295 one more believer Tue, 24 Mar 2009 23:07:55 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=2280#comment-4295 less than complete he walked away less than complete he walked away

]]> By: Christy http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/03/20/read-write-prompt-72-its-all-about-the-first-line/comment-page-1/#comment-4286 Christy Tue, 24 Mar 2009 19:46:01 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=2280#comment-4286 drowning in a sea of blood drowning in a sea of blood

]]> By: Linda Jacobs http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/03/20/read-write-prompt-72-its-all-about-the-first-line/comment-page-1/#comment-4292 Linda Jacobs Tue, 24 Mar 2009 19:21:43 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=2280#comment-4292 Blood drips from my eyes Blood drips from my eyes

]]> By: When Godzilla Flattens Your Car on Monday Morning « Raven’s Wing Poetry http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/03/20/read-write-prompt-72-its-all-about-the-first-line/comment-page-1/#comment-4294 When Godzilla Flattens Your Car on Monday Morning « Raven’s Wing Poetry Tue, 24 Mar 2009 18:54:24 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=2280#comment-4294 [...] week’s Read Write Poem Prompt was “It’s All About the First Line.” We participants all donated a first line for other poets to use as a first line to write their poem [...] [...] week’s Read Write Poem Prompt was “It’s All About the First Line.” We participants all donated a first line for other poets to use as a first line to write their poem [...]

]]> By: gautami tripathy http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/03/20/read-write-prompt-72-its-all-about-the-first-line/comment-page-1/#comment-4293 gautami tripathy Tue, 24 Mar 2009 13:16:01 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=2280#comment-4293 that word you lost I found it under a rock that word you lost I found it under a rock

]]> By: Donald Harbour http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/03/20/read-write-prompt-72-its-all-about-the-first-line/comment-page-1/#comment-4288 Donald Harbour Tue, 24 Mar 2009 02:12:27 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=2280#comment-4288 I know that life has loved me. I know that life has loved me.

]]> By: Ploughing | The Poetry Blog http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/03/20/read-write-prompt-72-its-all-about-the-first-line/comment-page-1/#comment-4289 Ploughing | The Poetry Blog Mon, 23 Mar 2009 22:08:34 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=2280#comment-4289 [...] The first line was donated by throws his words, a fellow Portlander, via the first-line prompt at Read Write Poem. [...] [...] The first line was donated by throws his words, a fellow Portlander, via the first-line prompt at Read Write Poem. [...]

]]> By: Lori http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/03/20/read-write-prompt-72-its-all-about-the-first-line/comment-page-1/#comment-4290 Lori Mon, 23 Mar 2009 15:12:30 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=2280#comment-4290 OH! Some really great lines here. Here's mine: I took a stroll through my soul. OH! Some really great lines here.

Here’s mine:

I took a stroll through my soul.

]]> By: Sam http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/03/20/read-write-prompt-72-its-all-about-the-first-line/comment-page-1/#comment-4287 Sam Mon, 23 Mar 2009 03:14:43 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=2280#comment-4287 We'll love beyond the brazen fields above the starry fold (from <a href="http://thinkingcities.blogspot.com/2009/03/lost-beyond-fold.html" rel="nofollow">my latest poem</a>) We’ll love beyond the brazen fields above the starry fold

(from my latest poem)

]]> By: angie http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/03/20/read-write-prompt-72-its-all-about-the-first-line/comment-page-1/#comment-4285 angie Sun, 22 Mar 2009 20:56:17 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=2280#comment-4285 don't get caught leaving the trailer park at 4 a.m. don’t get caught leaving the trailer park at 4 a.m.

]]> By: James http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/03/20/read-write-prompt-72-its-all-about-the-first-line/comment-page-1/#comment-4284 James Sun, 22 Mar 2009 19:05:45 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=2280#comment-4284 The water presses blue and deep against this dam The water presses blue and deep against this dam

]]> By: Wayne http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/03/20/read-write-prompt-72-its-all-about-the-first-line/comment-page-1/#comment-4283 Wayne Sun, 22 Mar 2009 18:49:32 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=2280#comment-4283 will do will do

]]> By: Read Write Poem http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/03/20/read-write-prompt-72-its-all-about-the-first-line/comment-page-1/#comment-4282 Read Write Poem Sun, 22 Mar 2009 15:39:32 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=2280#comment-4282 Hey Wayne, Slow down and smell the poetry. Come back Thursday to share your writing! Hey Wayne, Slow down and smell the poetry. Come back Thursday to share your writing!

]]> By: Wayne http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/03/20/read-write-prompt-72-its-all-about-the-first-line/comment-page-1/#comment-4280 Wayne Sun, 22 Mar 2009 03:57:14 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=2280#comment-4280 Here is my poem I used "every old lady lives in a shoe" for first line by carolee Here is my poem

I used “every old lady lives in a shoe”
for first line
by carolee

]]> By: Derek http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/03/20/read-write-prompt-72-its-all-about-the-first-line/comment-page-1/#comment-4281 Derek Sun, 22 Mar 2009 00:52:33 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=2280#comment-4281 I'm very certain she shined like lapis lazuli I’m very certain she shined like lapis lazuli

]]> By: Erin Davis http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2009/03/20/read-write-prompt-72-its-all-about-the-first-line/comment-page-1/#comment-4278 Erin Davis Sat, 21 Mar 2009 19:49:47 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=2280#comment-4278 She cradled the frozen bulb in her mouth She cradled the frozen bulb in her mouth

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