Comments on: (collaborative) read write prompt #53: birthday collaboration! http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/11/14/read-write-prompt-53/ Mon, 03 May 2010 01:01:02 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=abc hourly 1 By: Childhood in Six American Sentences « Raven’s Wing Poetry http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/11/14/read-write-prompt-53/comment-page-1/#comment-3176 Childhood in Six American Sentences « Raven’s Wing Poetry Wed, 19 Nov 2008 14:05:52 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=1202#comment-3176 [...] poem was written for two prompts: Read Write Poem #53 and One Single Impression #39: Childhood [...] [...] poem was written for two prompts: Read Write Poem #53 and One Single Impression #39: Childhood [...]

]]> By: Nicole Nicholson http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/11/14/read-write-prompt-53/comment-page-1/#comment-3158 Nicole Nicholson Tue, 18 Nov 2008 19:16:54 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=1202#comment-3158 We fall asleep to the discordant lullaby of his long ass speech. We fall asleep to the discordant lullaby of his long ass speech.

]]> By: Donald Harbour http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/11/14/read-write-prompt-53/comment-page-1/#comment-3175 Donald Harbour Tue, 18 Nov 2008 13:05:42 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=1202#comment-3175 His obese mind is an obtuse instrument of wit, a pointless pin. His obese mind is an obtuse instrument of wit, a pointless pin.

]]> By: rob kistner http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/11/14/read-write-prompt-53/comment-page-1/#comment-3174 rob kistner Tue, 18 Nov 2008 10:56:38 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=1202#comment-3174 <i><b>Ooops - Ooops!!</b> I actually meant to write:</i> our identity emerges with the choice made at life’s first crossroad Ooops – Ooops!! I actually meant to write:

our identity emerges with the choice made at life’s first crossroad

]]> By: rob kistner http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/11/14/read-write-prompt-53/comment-page-1/#comment-3173 rob kistner Tue, 18 Nov 2008 10:53:21 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=1202#comment-3173 <i><b>Ooops!!</b> I meant to write:</i> our identity emerges with the choice made a life's first crossroad Ooops!! I meant to write:

our identity emerges with the choice made a life’s first crossroad

]]> By: rob kistner http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/11/14/read-write-prompt-53/comment-page-1/#comment-3168 rob kistner Tue, 18 Nov 2008 10:50:04 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=1202#comment-3168 our identity emerges with the choice at life's first crossroad our identity emerges with the choice at life’s first crossroad

]]> By: rob kistner http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/11/14/read-write-prompt-53/comment-page-1/#comment-3166 rob kistner Tue, 18 Nov 2008 10:34:04 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=1202#comment-3166 my rhythmed breath beckons me inward to the bright center of my joy my rhythmed breath beckons me inward to the bright center of my joy

]]> By: rob kistner http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/11/14/read-write-prompt-53/comment-page-1/#comment-3159 rob kistner Tue, 18 Nov 2008 10:27:47 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=1202#comment-3159 i see your lips sculpting words but I've fallen into your deep green eyes i see your lips sculpting words but I’ve fallen into your deep green eyes

]]> By: Nicole Nicholson http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/11/14/read-write-prompt-53/comment-page-1/#comment-3167 Nicole Nicholson Mon, 17 Nov 2008 15:00:18 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=1202#comment-3167 He turns to throw verbal knives and a sullen look in my direction. He turns to throw verbal knives and a sullen look in my direction.

]]> By: Annette http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/11/14/read-write-prompt-53/comment-page-1/#comment-3161 Annette Mon, 17 Nov 2008 09:46:10 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=1202#comment-3161 I watched his back as he stepped briskly into my past and his future. I watched his back as he stepped briskly into my past and his future.

]]> By: rob kistner http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/11/14/read-write-prompt-53/comment-page-1/#comment-3169 rob kistner Mon, 17 Nov 2008 09:10:15 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=1202#comment-3169 seven years of libertine wanderings captured on a hand-made scroll seven years of libertine wanderings captured on a hand-made scroll

]]> By: odessa http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/11/14/read-write-prompt-53/comment-page-1/#comment-3172 odessa Mon, 17 Nov 2008 06:48:16 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=1202#comment-3172 While they dance, her hair falls from its ponytail, light as the summer rain. While they dance, her hair falls from its ponytail, light as the summer rain.

]]> By: turtledoves and tofu http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/11/14/read-write-prompt-53/comment-page-1/#comment-3171 turtledoves and tofu Mon, 17 Nov 2008 01:18:15 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=1202#comment-3171 Reptilian fishnet shed on the way to a hot date with a mouse. Reptilian fishnet shed on the way to a hot date with a mouse.

]]> By: Roberta Rahmer http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/11/14/read-write-prompt-53/comment-page-1/#comment-3170 Roberta Rahmer Sun, 16 Nov 2008 23:37:18 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=1202#comment-3170 found fall object: dried snakeskin stuck to a log in the damp wood pile found fall object: dried snakeskin stuck to a log in the damp wood pile

]]> By: Clare http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/11/14/read-write-prompt-53/comment-page-1/#comment-3163 Clare Sun, 16 Nov 2008 22:33:16 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=1202#comment-3163 Drunk in the power of her memory, I await the morning light. Drunk in the power of her memory, I await the morning light.

]]> By: Sweet Talking Guy.. http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/11/14/read-write-prompt-53/comment-page-1/#comment-3162 Sweet Talking Guy.. Sat, 15 Nov 2008 19:39:30 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=1202#comment-3162 And the cold young man looks old, as he takes another brown paper sip. And the cold young man looks old, as he takes another brown paper sip.

]]> By: gautami tripathy http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/11/14/read-write-prompt-53/comment-page-1/#comment-3165 gautami tripathy Sat, 15 Nov 2008 14:33:44 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=1202#comment-3165 illusion shatters the glass of courage, breaking the foundation of wonder illusion shatters the glass of courage, breaking the foundation of wonder

]]> By: gautami tripathy http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/11/14/read-write-prompt-53/comment-page-1/#comment-3164 gautami tripathy Sat, 15 Nov 2008 14:31:11 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=1202#comment-3164 tall bamboo shoots sway directionless, taking my dreams too far away from you tall bamboo shoots sway directionless, taking my dreams too far away from you

]]> By: Nathan http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/11/14/read-write-prompt-53/comment-page-1/#comment-3160 Nathan Sat, 15 Nov 2008 12:20:18 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=1202#comment-3160 On a tired morning the day stretches like a thousand-foot ladder. On a tired morning the day stretches like a thousand-foot ladder.

]]> By: deb http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/11/14/read-write-prompt-53/comment-page-1/#comment-3157 deb Sat, 15 Nov 2008 04:01:24 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=1202#comment-3157 Chasing my tail until dizzy, I lunge, bite, howl: I've been here before. Chasing my tail until dizzy, I lunge, bite, howl: I’ve been here before.

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