by Jessica Fox-Wilson
There are times in my life when I don’t crack open my journal. When I don’t read poetry. When I don’t even think about poetry. I wish I could say that those times were few and far between, but to be honest, they happen frequently. I can go for weeks without writing anything. During these times, I’m not particularly happy or pleasant to be around. My thoughts are soft and gray, like I’m a television set that’s stuck on a static-y channel.
Of course, everyone experiences writer’s block, but for me, I seem to have extended visitations. Because of this, I’ve developed an addiction to writing books. You know the kind, the books that promise that just by doing the prescribed exercises, you’ll never feel blocked again. You’ll write all day every day, and you’ll crank out full manuscripts. I love the promise that a new writing book brings, but there are only a few that I’ve used more than once, and here they are:
Inspiration Sandwich, by SARK
For those of you who have never read SARK, her books are different. Her books are set in her own scrawled handwriting, interspersed with water colored pages. Inspiration Sandwich is arranged in 2- to 3-page chapters, all of which explore the necessary tools to be a writer in the context of the author’s experiences. Reading SARK gave me my first push into writing. I learned that it was not only OK, but essential, for writers to draw from their personal experience.
The Practice of Poetry, edited by Robin Behn and Chase Twitchell
Sometimes, blocked writers just need to trick themselves into writing. If you find that you have absolutely nothing to write about, I would strongly recommend The Practice of Poetry. Editors Robin Behn and Chase Twitchell gathered tried and true writing exercise from working/teaching poets. Whenever I’m seriously blocked, I open this book to a random page and force myself through an exercise. The beauty of this book is the diversity of poets and exercises. Poets like Rita Dove, Anne Waldman and Dana Gioia, among others, recommend exercises to kill writer’s block, aid revision, manipulate structure and refine language.
Language reference books
When I’m blocked, I often forget that poems are made up of just words. I build them into something bigger (which they also are) which makes them more intimidating. When wallowing in the self-despair and sloth that is writer’s block, I forget that words are fun. I forget they sound cool, they have multiple meanings and there are lots to choose from.
I have three books that I refer to constantly, just to remind myself that I love language: Roget’s Thesaurus (not the dictionary-style thesauruses, but one of many of the versions of Roget’s), Merriam-Webster’s Rhyming Dictionary and any good, hefty dictionary. With the dictionary, I strongly encourage you to try the S+7 exercise. It’s a fun way to play with language and feel like you’re really writing.
Poemcrazy: Freeing your life with words, by Susan Goldsmith Wooldridge
In some ways, Wooldridge’s Poemcrazy is the academic sister to Inspiration Sandwich. Both books share a similar structure (short chapters) and use the author’s personal experience to explain writing techniques. But where SARK’s book is loopy and free flowing, Poemcrazy is concrete and prescriptive. The chapters are separated into larger sections and each section demonstrates a specific lesson, complete with recommended writing exercises. While best read in order, this book is definitely one you can flip through and pull ideas from easily.
I can list many more books that have pulled me through the sludge of writer’s block. But I think these four books contrast the writer’s block experience. They focus on the joy, creativity and variety of a writing practice.
Now it’s your turn: What books do you turn to when stuck?
by Ren Powell
Oh, the mysterious, mystic Sufis! They’re sometimes called Dervishes. (I always thought of them dancing. Or whirling, really. But not all do.) While the devout Muslim shows his or her devotion to Allah by praying five times a day and leading a pure life, Sufi mystics (a branch of Shia) attempt to live their lives in a continual state of prayer. Similarly to Catholic monk orders, each Sufi order follows its own specific practices. Some take vows of celibacy and poverty, some have men and women pray side by side in the mosques, some dance and others meditate while seated and still. But, as with all Muslims, the drinking of alcohol is strictly forbidden. Poetry, on the other hand …
Many of us have read the Afghan poet Rumi’s poetry, or run across the work of the Persian, Sufi poet Hafiz. If you haven’t yet, I recommend them both. Often humorous and unexpectedly sensual, Hafiz’s poem “Buttering the Sky”* has a spiritual kinship with haiku.
I have been reading a collection of Umar Ibn al-Farid’s poems (d.1235 c.e.), which includes “Poem of the Sufi Path.” Because words in Arabic carry several meanings, the poem can also be translated into “Stringing the Strings of Poetry’s Pearls.” This long poem is something of an instruction manual for Sufi. Creating poems is a form of worship.
Even though there are only 15 authentic (extant) poems and some riddles, Umar Ibn al-Farid is considered the most accomplished of the mystic poets. It is said that he composed his poems in a state of ecstasy, writing them down immediately after. There are also stories of him tearing his clothes and running madly through the streets after hearing poems recited. Like many of the early Islamic poets, and like Sufis in general throughout history (even today), he was sometimes persecuted by the ruling elite. In part, because he wrote of Allah using a feminine pronoun. (It is interesting that his father was a lawyer representing women’s causes.)
With my limited knowledge of Sufi poetry, I was surprised when I read the first poem in the book: “The Wine Ode.” Huh? Wine? This poem appears to praise the virtues of drunkenness.
But the excerpt I linked to above (the second stanza of which is often quoted) must be put in context of the whole poem. For example, another stanza is:
In memory of the beloved
we drank a wine;
we were drunk with it
before creation of the vine*
Clearly, the wine that existed before grapes is not wine as most of us know it. Wine is the Divine Itself/Himself/Herself, as you would have it.
My challenge to myself and to you is to take an example from the Sufi poets and write about the Divine through an image we don’t usually use. I don’t mean write to worship a toaster god. Nor am I promoting polytheism. But take a look at Sufi poems on the net. Draw on your memories of places and moments you feel were sacred.
Another option for those of you who mediate or pray: meditate on your poem, pay attention to the prayer you can share with others. Write it down immediately (but don’t go running through the streets half-naked).
(And, well, if you are an atheist, you can always write a poem to support the rights of all people to worship – or not — in the way they wish.)
* Translations abound on the net (of varying quality), but I don’t want to endorse possible copyright infringements upon translators by linking to any specific poem. The stanza I quoted above is from Umar Ibn al-Farid, Sufi Verse, Saintly Life. trans. Th. Emil Homerin. Paulist Press; New York, 2001. “Buttering the Sky” can be found in Hafiz’s The Gift. trans. Daniel Ladinsky.
by Christine Swint
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by Tom Adam
Not too long ago I spent some time talking about rhythm and meter in poetry, but I haven’t yet said much about rhyme, which is the other big thing in formal poetry. And not only is rhyme interesting, it is generally an easier topic to address.
Why rhyme?
In terms of poetry, what does rhyme bring to the table aside from another reference book (the rhyming dictionary)? Harkening back to the days when poetry was still a memorized and spoken art form, it served a couple of purposes. It made for much easier memorization: The repetition of sounds provided a built-in cue for what came next. Also, the highly rhythmic style of accentual poetry emphasized important parts of the lines (especially kennings).
Contemporary rhyme
Now that we tend to “see” poetry more often than hear it, the use of rhyme as memorization tool is a lot less useful (at least in terms of literary poetry, though performance poetry and song lyrics still often include it). For centuries, though, rhyme was an important – no, necessary - element of poetry in most European forms.
In some cases, such as the original villanelle, it was used by troubadours as a sign of their linguistic creativity. More fixed forms such as sonnets use it in conjunction with stanza length to form relationships between ideas.
(A short digression: Anymore, most prosodic devices are used “just because.” While there isn’t anything wrong with that line of reasoning, it being one I myself frequently use, it does make the sweeping pronouncements I favor somewhat less accurate. So, in order to save myself a huge amount of qualifications throughout the rest of this article, let me just say that rhyme used as a prosodic device usually follows what I say, but rhyme is used much, much more loosely as well.)
Rhyme creates connections. The repetition of the sound is a referent to the other items using the same sounds in a way that says, “Hey! You! Remember that other line, two up? Yeah: we’re related in some way.” It’s a delicate act to use the device effectively, yet not distract the reader by too constant rhyming.
End-rhyme and internal rhyme
Rhyme tends to occur in two places in a poem (and I’m not sure if there are any others): at the ends of lines or within lines. End-rhyme is literally that, rhyming at the end of a line. Formal poetry uses this as an element. Internal rhyme, rhyming within a line or stanza, tends to be a less formal effect, used more like alliteration. It still connects elements of the poem, in what can be a subtler way than end-rhyme.
This verse from Coleridge’s “The Rime of the Ancient Mariner” shows both types of rhyme. Lines two and four are linked by end-rhyme while line three has an internal rhyme between bright and right.
The Sun came up upon the left,
Out of the sea came he!
And he shone bright, and on the right
Went down into the sea.
Types of rhymes
Rhyme has a pretty diverse set of specific types related to which parts of the word or words have similar sounds. Most types are interesting from a view of linguistics, but within most poetry the important types of rhyme are masculine, feminine and slant.
Masculine and feminine rhymes are based on the last stressed syllable of the word sharing the same sound. In a masculine rhyme the stressed syllable is the final syllable of the word. Feminine rhyme has the stress on the second to last syllable though the final, unstressed syllable must also have the same sound.
From Coleridge’s example above, all of his rhymes are masculine: he/sea, bright/right. Feminine rhymes are common in English with verbs: trying/vying, writing/kiting, plunder/sunder; but can be found within nouns as well: cavern/tavern.
Slant rhyme occurs when the sounds being rhymed are not exact matches in sound, but are close: time/fine, meager/seeker, under/candor.
Rhyming on the phrase
In song lyrics, especially in hip hop, but also within performance poetry, there is the idea of rhyming a phrase, often with slant or imperfect rhymes, often using internal rhyme, to rhyme entire phrases. It can be very tricky to pull off well, but the Barenaked Ladies used the technique in their song “One Week:”
Gonna make a break and take a fake
I’d like a stinkin achin shake
“Make a break” and “take a fake” could be a series of four internal rhymes, but the identical structure, later followed by “achin shake” shows that the extended rhyme of the phrase is what they sought.
Fun with rhyme
I don’t think it’s any accident that most people’s first experiences with language tends to come from nursery rhymes. Rhymes have been used in some of the “great literature of the ages,” but they can just be fun. As with anything from Mother Goose, to Jabberwocky, to rhyming slang, it’s OK to play with words just because it sounds cool. So next time you want to rhyme, remember to have fun with it!
Check out Wikipedia’s rhyme article for more information on types of rhymes as well as views on how different languages have treated it.
by Christine Swint
Read five poems by the same author, or five poems from five different poets. From each poem, choose a word you like, a word that jumps out at you. Write words cards (with one word noted on a card or paper slip), and place them in a box or an envelope. I use an old coffee can for this kind of writing exercise.
After you sit down to write your poem, draw one word, and let that word be a part of the first sentence or line you write. Continue writing your poem, drawing another word each time you come to a pause. Try to write eleven lines.
Collaboration suggestion
Write with the same five words as your partner, each of you writing five lines. Combine the five lines any way you like. The last line can be a combination of words from both of you. You might try alternating words until a sentence or line emerges.
Come back next Thursday, Sept. 24, and share what you wrote.
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