by Christine Swint
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Wow! It feels good to be the first one!
Here is mine:
rot
I wrote this one “I Want to be That Man” a while back after observing someone on the phone in an airport; poet/composer Swedish Emil Brikha produced an mp3 with original music which is on my site too:
http://artpredator.wordpress.com
Mine is called “Storm’s Eye.” It’s at http://disorder1313.wordpress.com/2008/06/04/storms-eye
You’ll find mine in this post:
Tony On Rubbish, Voyeur, Dictators
Enjoy.
here’s mine…
http://filteredprecipitates.blogspot.com/2008/06/still.html
Here’s mine. Round to read later. Great prompt, Christine.
http://florescence.wordpress.com/2008/06/06/untitled-2/
Here’s what I came up with for this week: “Afterward” at
http://durablepigments.wordpress.com/2008/06/07/30-afterward/
I hope that everyone had a serendipitous weekend!
http://woodennickel.wordpress.com/2008/06/04/serendipity/
Hi everyone! Here’s mine:
http://9to5poet.com/2008/06/09/lilacs-never-last-long-enough/
Greetings from Georgia, USA.
Love song to the moon
Thanks for the inspiration. My latest verse Sleepless In Bayside was inspired in part by your prompt.
great prompt. here’s mine: http://flyturtlefly.com/2008/06/05/when-you-look-at-me-what-do-you-see/
[...] You can catch other poetic glimpses here. [...]
I’ve been “watching” my once-young parents in old photos lately – here’s one glimpse.
http://www.magpiedays.com/2008/06/when-i-watch-you/
Reposted from my comment on the original prompt:
“I like the prompt! Here’s my poem, called “When I Watch You”:
http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/06/04/when-i-watch-you/
When I shut my eyes…I ended up in the head of Graham Dalton from “Sex, Lies, and Videotape”. Weird, I know, but here it is.”
-Nicole
When I Watch You
.. definitely enjoyed the discovery of lucille clifton’s miss rosie and the link to her “my hips…” buoyancy
Good prompt…very fun
Here’s mine…
Free
http://tinatrivett.blogspot.com/2008/06/free.html
Therapist
Sorta inspired by the prompt, which I just read today:
Ashes to Ashes
Morning Gold
yowza i’ve missed two weeks! wow, time goes by fast…
here’s my stuff this week
i also went ahead and wrote one for last week, so that’s up just pre-this-one at my blog just in case you were interested.
I Touched Him
A poem about looking, or not looking, at my son. Does anyone else ever write a poem, then happen to check in for the prompt and find they match? I love coincidence!
Here’s mine, a watching from several years ago, on an early morning downtown street.
My first, and not last, get your poem on:
http://nibblepoems.wordpress.com/poems/
it’s been excruciating to watch — #19
psalm:
http://slowreads.com/versePsalm.html
Once again, I haven’t managed to finish a draft using the readwritepoem prompt, but I’ve posted another poem in my series of Torah poems:
Shine
http://velveteenrabbi.blogs.com/blog/2008/06/this-weeks-poem-shine-bha-alotkha.html
Here’s mine. I was originally reluctant to tackle this prompt because I thought I would just end up brooding about my ex, but in fact it’s about someone completely different:
When I watch you (terza rima)
Here’s mine…this was a fun one!
http://lfisher-writewhereiam.typepad.com/write_where_i_am/2008/06/and-more-about-the-garden.html