Comments on: read write prompt #30: rosie http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/06/04/read-write-prompt/ Mon, 03 May 2010 01:01:02 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=abc hourly 1 By: Lynn http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/06/04/read-write-prompt/comment-page-1/#comment-1711 Lynn Sun, 15 Jun 2008 02:58:40 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=152#comment-1711 Here's my poem...thanks for the prompt (It's my first reply) http://lfisher-writewhereiam.typepad.com/write_where_i_am/2008/06/and-more-about-the-garden.html Here’s my poem…thanks for the prompt (It’s my first reply)
http://lfisher-writewhereiam.typepad.com/write_where_i_am/2008/06/and-more-about-the-garden.html

]]> By: When I watch you - terza rima « Words that sing http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/06/04/read-write-prompt/comment-page-1/#comment-1710 When I watch you - terza rima « Words that sing Thu, 12 Jun 2008 16:00:25 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=152#comment-1710 [...] is inspired by a prompt at readwritepoem - to write a poem based around the line “when I watch [...] [...] is inspired by a prompt at readwritepoem – to write a poem based around the line “when I watch [...]

]]> By: nibblepoems http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/06/04/read-write-prompt/comment-page-1/#comment-1709 nibblepoems Tue, 10 Jun 2008 19:17:01 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=152#comment-1709 My first "prompt" attempt, not my last: http://nibblepoems.wordpress.com/poems/ My first “prompt” attempt, not my last:

http://nibblepoems.wordpress.com/poems/

]]> By: Bean http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/06/04/read-write-prompt/comment-page-1/#comment-1708 Bean Tue, 10 Jun 2008 13:33:39 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=152#comment-1708 Here's my take: http://beansthought.blogspot.com/2008/06/prompt-when-i-watch-you.html Here’s my take:

http://beansthought.blogspot.com/2008/06/prompt-when-i-watch-you.html

]]> By: mary http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/06/04/read-write-prompt/comment-page-1/#comment-1707 mary Tue, 10 Jun 2008 03:38:43 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=152#comment-1707 Wow, I actually tried the prompt! Just wanted to add that I had the honor of having a poem workshopped with Lucille Clifton once, years ago. It was the prize, along with $50, for a competition through the Poetry Society of London. She is such a talented poet. Okay, here's the link to my rough attempt this week: <a href="http://bluehairedmary.tripod.com/blog/index.blog/1819578/the-things-gone-wrong/" rel="nofollow">The Thing's Gone Wrong</a> Wow, I actually tried the prompt! Just wanted to add that I had the honor of having a poem workshopped with Lucille Clifton once, years ago. It was the prize, along with $50, for a competition through the Poetry Society of London. She is such a talented poet.

Okay, here’s the link to my rough attempt this week:
The Thing’s Gone Wrong

]]> By: get your poem on #30 at Read Write Poem http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/06/04/read-write-prompt/comment-page-1/#comment-1706 get your poem on #30 at Read Write Poem Mon, 09 Jun 2008 05:02:55 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=152#comment-1706 [...] will be open, so you can leave a permalink to your blog post for this week’s contribution…when I watch you. * * [...] [...] will be open, so you can leave a permalink to your blog post for this week’s contribution…when I watch you. * * [...]

]]> By: art predator http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/06/04/read-write-prompt/comment-page-1/#comment-1705 art predator Mon, 09 Jun 2008 00:32:35 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=152#comment-1705 I love Lucille Clifton--her work and the woman herself! I studied with her at UC Santa Cruz. If you ever get a chance to hear her read, go for it! Thanks for bringing this moving poem to our attention! And thanks for the excuse to post the poem I chose to put up! I love Lucille Clifton–her work and the woman herself! I studied with her at UC Santa Cruz. If you ever get a chance to hear her read, go for it!

Thanks for bringing this moving poem to our attention!

And thanks for the excuse to post the poem I chose to put up!

]]> By: Christine http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/06/04/read-write-prompt/comment-page-1/#comment-1704 Christine Sun, 08 Jun 2008 15:45:16 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=152#comment-1704 jill, we're all getting a similar vibe. We're in tune with each other! Really, I don't know, but I'll call it serendipity. I hope you link your poem about your son. jill, we’re all getting a similar vibe. We’re in tune with each other! Really, I don’t know, but I’ll call it serendipity. I hope you link your poem about your son.

]]> By: jillypoet http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/06/04/read-write-prompt/comment-page-1/#comment-1703 jillypoet Sun, 08 Jun 2008 14:19:03 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=152#comment-1703 I just wrote a poem about watching (or not watching) my son--then I stopped by to see what the prompt was this week. I love the irony! Coincidence? Or is it... I just wrote a poem about watching (or not watching) my son–then I stopped by to see what the prompt was this week. I love the irony! Coincidence? Or is it…

]]> By: Read Write Poem http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/06/04/read-write-prompt/comment-page-1/#comment-1701 Read Write Poem Sat, 07 Jun 2008 16:26:19 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=152#comment-1701 eatsbugs & Tina, Be sure to come back on Monday and post your link to the <strong>get your poem on #30</strong> post. This is just for the prompt (but folks are clearly excited - woot - about this week's prompt). eatsbugs & Tina,

Be sure to come back on Monday and post your link to the get your poem on #30 post. This is just for the prompt (but folks are clearly excited – woot – about this week’s prompt).

]]> By: Tina Trivett http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/06/04/read-write-prompt/comment-page-1/#comment-1702 Tina Trivett Sat, 07 Jun 2008 13:06:58 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=152#comment-1702 I posted a poem called Free that I wrote & now it's not here...? http://tinatrivett.blogspot.com/2008/06/free.html I posted a poem called Free that I wrote & now it’s not here…?

http://tinatrivett.blogspot.com/2008/06/free.html

]]> By: Sleepless In Bayside (Limerick, Haiku, & Senryu Prompt) » MAD KANE'S HUMOR BLOG http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/06/04/read-write-prompt/comment-page-1/#comment-1700 Sleepless In Bayside (Limerick, Haiku, & Senryu Prompt) » MAD KANE'S HUMOR BLOG Sat, 07 Jun 2008 00:28:17 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=152#comment-1700 [...] My poems were inspired by these three prompts: “catnap, “my nights” and “when I watch you.”) Technorati Tags: Sleep Poetry, Insomnia Verse, Husband Humor, Writing Prompts Home      [...] [...] My poems were inspired by these three prompts: “catnap, “my nights” and “when I watch you.”) Technorati Tags: Sleep Poetry, Insomnia Verse, Husband Humor, Writing Prompts Home      [...]

]]> By: Jo http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/06/04/read-write-prompt/comment-page-1/#comment-1699 Jo Fri, 06 Jun 2008 06:20:41 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=152#comment-1699 That poem......oh my, that poem. That poem……oh my, that poem.

]]> By: when you look at me, what do you see? « flyturtlefly. http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/06/04/read-write-prompt/comment-page-1/#comment-1697 when you look at me, what do you see? « flyturtlefly. Fri, 06 Jun 2008 00:16:20 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=152#comment-1697 [...] read write poem prompt: start a poem with the lines when I watch you [...] [...] read write poem prompt: start a poem with the lines when I watch you [...]

]]> By: eatsbugs http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/06/04/read-write-prompt/comment-page-1/#comment-1698 eatsbugs Thu, 05 Jun 2008 06:12:08 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=152#comment-1698 http://eatsbugs.wordpress.com/2008/06/05/beat-dream-6508/ Hope you like it. http://eatsbugs.wordpress.com/2008/06/05/beat-dream-6508/

Hope you like it.

]]> By: One More Believer http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/06/04/read-write-prompt/comment-page-1/#comment-1696 One More Believer Wed, 04 Jun 2008 19:44:47 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=152#comment-1696 always playing catchup on this prompt... but i love what you offer... hopefully i can catch up... lucille is another great poet, thank you for the link... always playing catchup on this prompt… but i love what you offer… hopefully i can catch up… lucille is another great poet, thank you for the link…

]]> By: Christine http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/06/04/read-write-prompt/comment-page-1/#comment-1695 Christine Wed, 04 Jun 2008 17:02:51 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=152#comment-1695 Donald and Nicole, how wonderful, you've already written your poem for this prompt! Would you mind coming back on Monday and linking to the post entitled, "Get your poem on?" Thanks. That way everyone will be able to read what you've written. This post is to anounce the prompt and to comment or offer feedback on it. Linda, that is very serendipitous, to use Donald's word. I'd love to read what your students come up with. I wanted to add here as an aside to everyone, too, that even if you start with this prompt as the opening line of your poem, you can always not use the line, just the images it conjurs. Donald and Nicole, how wonderful, you’ve already written your poem for this prompt! Would you mind coming back on Monday and linking to the post entitled, “Get your poem on?” Thanks. That way everyone will be able to read what you’ve written. This post is to anounce the prompt and to comment or offer feedback on it.

Linda, that is very serendipitous, to use Donald’s word. I’d love to read what your students come up with.

I wanted to add here as an aside to everyone, too, that even if you start with this prompt as the opening line of your poem, you can always not use the line, just the images it conjurs.

]]> By: Nicole Nicholson http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/06/04/read-write-prompt/comment-page-1/#comment-1694 Nicole Nicholson Wed, 04 Jun 2008 17:00:20 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=152#comment-1694 Oh. No problem. I'll make sure I repost my link Monday. -Nicole Oh. No problem. I’ll make sure I repost my link Monday.

-Nicole

]]> By: Read Write Poem http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/06/04/read-write-prompt/comment-page-1/#comment-1693 Read Write Poem Wed, 04 Jun 2008 16:55:45 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=152#comment-1693 Hi Donald and Nicole. Be sure to come back next Monday when <strong>get your poem on #30</strong> is posted. That's where you comment and give us your link. (People will miss it here...this is the prompt part of the exercise.) Hi Donald and Nicole.

Be sure to come back next Monday when get your poem on #30 is posted. That’s where you comment and give us your link. (People will miss it here…this is the prompt part of the exercise.)

]]> By: Nicole Nicholson http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/06/04/read-write-prompt/comment-page-1/#comment-1692 Nicole Nicholson Wed, 04 Jun 2008 15:39:42 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=152#comment-1692 I like the prompt! Here's my poem, called "When I Watch You": http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/06/04/when-i-watch-you/ When I shut my eyes...I ended up in the head of Graham Dalton from "Sex, Lies, and Videotape". Weird, I know, but here it is. -Nicole I like the prompt! Here’s my poem, called “When I Watch You”:

http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/06/04/when-i-watch-you/

When I shut my eyes…I ended up in the head of Graham Dalton from “Sex, Lies, and Videotape”. Weird, I know, but here it is.

-Nicole

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