poll dance: we’re friends, right? you’ll tell me where you find all your good poems, right?

by Carolee Sherwood

The idea for my most recent poem came from a dream I had about being tempted to sit in a tiny, fragile chair. I knew it was too small for me. In the dream, someone even told me so. A high school boy. In a “that-chair-is-really-old” and “your-backside-is-very-large” sort of way, gently suggestive of the fact that I may want to find another chair. It’s a miserable dream.

Even worse, it probably relates to recent failed attempts at weight loss, and not to my belief that I just don’t fit (think Goldilocks and the three bears) in my own life. But I wrote it down in my journal, and when I decided to make a poem out of it, I indulged my need to find something “just right” for me.

It’s the most recent poem I have, and it came from a journal entry about a dream.

It’s fascinating, really, how ideas come to us. I don’t know if we take a lot of time to think about it, but it’s fun to attach images to the quest for inspiration and information.

I imagine people digging. Archaeologists. Paleontologists, Anthropologists. They sift soil through fine screens to capture fragments of other lives, cultures, creatures. When they discover something large, they carefully scoop away the dirt and brush away the dust until it’s revealed, little by little. The last thing they do is yank it out before it’s ready.

I imagine a corporate board room. Twelve suits around the table. Chinese take-out spilling on file folders. Nobody leaves until they figure a way to fix whatever it is that’s wrong.

I imagine a woman in an unsatisfying relationship. She also has a crappy job. Her apartment rattles when trains go by. She decides to start over in some other place. She makes lists — pro’s and con’s — to decide between New Mexico and Wyoming.

I imagine a scientist squinting into the eye piece of a microscope. She develops helpful, reproducible ways to influence how things work. She may try 100 theories. None of them may pan out. She’ll return to the lab every day for the rest of her life. She thinks about slides and samples even in the shower. Especially in the shower.

I imagine some lucky soul waltzing along the sidewalk with a light bulb glowing over his head. He’s happy. He’s contented. Mostly. Except that he’s jealous of the poet on the other side of the street onto whom a piano just fell.

Tell me a story. Where did you find your most recent poem? Answer the survey and then come by and chat about how it happened. Pure inspiration? Your journal? Current events? A prompt site? Read Write Poem? A photograph or image? Another poet’s words? A book prompt? Is the source of your most recent poem a reliable one for you? Do you typically work from the same place of inspiration or do you get messages from numerous methods?

I’m a “let’s-talk-about-our-process” junkie. Whether you are or not, indulge me. Help me get my fix. Stop by the comments and tell me how your last poem happened.

Here’s how the poll dance works: We post a poll and let it ride for a week and a half, and then I’ll talk a little bit about the topic and the results. The poll will stand for a few days after that to allow additional participation. The rotation gives each poll two weeks in the white-hot spotlight.

get your poem on #27

by Jill Crammond Wickham

Did you come up with similes, metaphors or anything else this week? We want to know.

From now until midnight one week from today, comments on this post will be open, so you can leave a permalink (one per comment, please!) to your blog post for this week’s contribution.

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get the lead out: it’s noting, really: writing groups

by Christine Swint

If you are aware that you need to be brave, you are probably on the threshold of writing something that matters.

Pat Schneider, Writing Alone and With Others (2003, pg. 172)

During the last week in April I attended an AWA writing-group leadership training with poet Patricia Lee Lewis at The Crossings in Austin, Texas. Patricia, along with writers Celia Jeffries and Charles MacInerney, coached twelve of us in the art of leading a group in the Amherst Writers and Artists method of writing. Patricia and Celia both worked for many years with Pat Schneider, founder of AWA, writing in Pat’s weekly group held in her home in Amherst, Massachusetts.

Pat Schneider developed the AWA method after finishing her MFA. She and her colleagues gathered ideas from the writing process movement, which she traces to Dorothea Brande’s work, Becoming a Writer, Peter Elbow’s Everyone Can Write, Natalie Goldberg’s, Writing Down the Bones and Julia Cameron’s The Artist’s Way (2003, pg.  144).

Besides learning the nuts and bolts of starting a writing group or workshop, we wrote together. That’s what the AWA process is about. A typical writing session starts with a brief meditation to center the mind and relax, and then is followed by a simple prompt. The writing is timed. We wrote for shorter lengths of time because we were learning the art of managing a group, for eight to twenty minutes per prompt.

The writing that came out of us was amazing. We wrote outdoors, immersed in the fresh breeze of the Texas hill country and the scent of wildflowers. We wrote about whatever came to our minds, and then afterwards read our work aloud to the other members. Since this was fresh writing, newly born, the members responded only to what was strong in the piece. AWA encourages holding critical responses for when the writer has prepared a typed manuscript.

Another important guideline of the AWA process is to keep all writing confidential. As one of our writers suggested, “what happens in the circle stays in the circle.” Also, we treat all writing as fiction, unless the author wants the members to treat it as autobiography.

When responding to a writer’s work, we talk about the narrator, or the character, never attributing the events of the piece to the writer. Patricia compared it to reading a Stephen King novel. Do we think that Stephen King actually experienced all the grisly tales of his stories? Even if the writer uses the first person, we don’t assume the author actually experienced the events.

This is the one aspect of the group writing process that gives writers the most difficulty, but it’s one of the most important parts. Otherwise the writing group enters the murky territory of group therapy, without a therapist! AWA sticks to treating the work as fiction to keep the writers safe.

How will I include this training in my writing life? I’d like to begin a small group in my home, and maybe offer workshops a few times a year in my city.

Pat Schneider brought her method to women living in a housing project near her town. Out of that work grew The Chicopee Workshop for Low-Income Women, as well as a DVD and book of their work with Pat. Many of the original members of this group have gone on to earn college degrees, and even MFAs.

One of the writers in the Austin training, Ellen Reich, says, “I plan to approach a local organization, the Charlotte Coalition for Social Justice, to explore possibilities of offering this writing workshop to teens. The CCSJ’s mission is to bridge differences and foster understanding among different populations. I also hope to offer a group to our local Room at the Inn – a residence for unwed, pregnant women who have little to no outside support.”

What experiences have you had in group writing? Do you belong to a critique group, and if so, do you write together, or only respond to typed manuscripts? What do you think about bringing writing and poetry to underserved populations?

Schneider, Pat (2003). Writing Alone and With Others. New York: Oxford University Press.

read write prompt #27: gulls like white handkerchiefs

by Jill Crammond Wickham

“Gulls like white handkerchiefs.” How I wish I’d written that line. It is a gorgeous simile. Alas. It is not mine. It is a line from Isabel Allende’s new memoir, The Sum of Our Days.

This week, your prompt is fairly simple. Make comparisons. Notice the world around you. Turn your observations into similes (and metaphors).

As Webster explains simile: Likeness, comparison, a figure of speech in which two dissimilar things are compared by the use of like or as (as in “cheeks like roses”).

Metaphor: a figure of speech in which a word for one idea or thing is used in place of another to suggest a likeness between them (as in “the ship plows the sea”).

Write long lists of comparisons. Long, trailing lists. Try to avoid clichés at all costs. (99 Cents; $1.39; $3.56; spare no expense!)

After you’ve spent a few days collecting, choose your favorite(s) and use them in a poem. Use a simile to begin a poem. Use a simile to inspire an entire poem. Use a simile as a poem title. The words are your oyster.

There. Easy as pie. Easy as wind in your hair. Easy like Sunday morning!

Come back starting next Monday after midnight Central Standard Time to share your poetic similes or metaphors or anything at all.

get your poem on #26

by Blythe

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