Comments on: get your poem on #24 http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/04/28/get-your-poem-on-24-2/ Mon, 03 May 2010 01:01:02 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=abc hourly 1 By: jan http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/04/28/get-your-poem-on-24-2/comment-page-1/#comment-1406 jan Sun, 04 May 2008 20:21:22 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=137#comment-1406 Here's mine: http://moodsandmetaphors.blogspot.com/2008/05/psychology.html Here’s mine:

http://moodsandmetaphors.blogspot.com/2008/05/psychology.html

]]> By: Just someone http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/04/28/get-your-poem-on-24-2/comment-page-1/#comment-1405 Just someone Sat, 03 May 2008 20:25:40 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=137#comment-1405 Mine too... based on this (couldn't leave the comment earlier) Mine too… based on this (couldn’t leave the comment earlier)

]]> By: Beloved Dreamer-Melanie http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/04/28/get-your-poem-on-24-2/comment-page-1/#comment-1404 Beloved Dreamer-Melanie Fri, 02 May 2008 19:21:17 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=137#comment-1404 Afraid my mind is dead......... <a href="http://www.beloveddreamer.com/2008/05/spindried.html" rel="nofollow">my poem</a> love-bd Afraid my mind is dead………

my poem

love-bd

]]> By: cocoloco http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/04/28/get-your-poem-on-24-2/comment-page-1/#comment-1402 cocoloco Fri, 02 May 2008 03:30:43 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=137#comment-1402 Oh well, no comments. No comments, It’s okay, I'll take my pen and will write poems for those who can't hear, who can't read, who can't feel but who would understand how trapped souls feel beneath their epidermis. Inner feelings crafted for those with scholar ears is irrelevant for those who can express them with soil in their fingernails. Poetry is a way to express what the soul feels beneath the layers of skin. Intellect is beyond that. Words will conglomerate and collide against each other as the 'poem' evolves. After all, what we do, say and write will remain as a vestige of our humanity, as a human being. Human enough to be able to use our brain and strike the keys on the keyboard aided by a Microsoft program. Thank God for Bill Gates! AHAM BRAHMASMI. Raul, you know who Sanchez Good Luck! Life is so, very short! I will read you on the other side. Chalo! Oh well, no comments.
No comments,
It’s okay, I’ll take my pen and will write poems for those who can’t hear, who can’t read, who can’t feel but who would understand how trapped souls feel beneath their epidermis. Inner feelings crafted for those with scholar ears is irrelevant for those who can express them with soil in their fingernails.
Poetry is a way to express what the soul feels beneath the layers of skin.
Intellect is beyond that. Words will conglomerate and collide against each other as the ‘poem’ evolves. After all, what we do, say and write will remain as a vestige of our humanity, as a human being. Human enough to be able to use our brain and strike the keys on the keyboard aided by a Microsoft program.
Thank God for Bill Gates!

AHAM BRAHMASMI.

Raul, you know who Sanchez

Good Luck!

Life is so, very short!

I will read you on the other side.
Chalo!

]]> By: Christina http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/04/28/get-your-poem-on-24-2/comment-page-1/#comment-1401 Christina Fri, 02 May 2008 01:28:23 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=137#comment-1401 New here.... my first try! http://theoriginalcoffeecompanyonline.blogspot.com/2008/05/jargon-poetry.html New here….

my first try!

http://theoriginalcoffeecompanyonline.blogspot.com/2008/05/jargon-poetry.html

]]> By: rel http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/04/28/get-your-poem-on-24-2/comment-page-1/#comment-1403 rel Thu, 01 May 2008 14:30:55 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=137#comment-1403 Come to my operating room for a moment. ;) http://pciyrtpy.blogspot.com/2008/05/anesthesia-jargon-laying-on-gurney.html Thanks, rel Come to my operating room for a moment. ;)

http://pciyrtpy.blogspot.com/2008/05/anesthesia-jargon-laying-on-gurney.html

Thanks,
rel

]]> By: jimmmaaa http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/04/28/get-your-poem-on-24-2/comment-page-1/#comment-1400 jimmmaaa Wed, 30 Apr 2008 22:55:14 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=137#comment-1400 Here is my poem for # 24: We Are Down: http://brokeness.blogspot.com/2008/04/napowrimo-18-make-up-for-day-18.html Here is my poem for # 24:

We Are Down:

http://brokeness.blogspot.com/2008/04/napowrimo-18-make-up-for-day-18.html

]]> By: cocoloco http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/04/28/get-your-poem-on-24-2/comment-page-1/#comment-1398 cocoloco Wed, 30 Apr 2008 15:30:24 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=137#comment-1398 I'm glad it is over! My ship sails away.... Check my JARGON POEM from yesterday. An INDUSTRIAL LOVE POEM C'ya later, alligator, after a while Crocodile. It was a pleasure and a great way to squeeze the brain by extruding words, syllables and rhymes. GOOD WORK Y'ALL! http://rscocoloco.blogspot.com I’m glad it is over!
My ship sails away….
Check my JARGON POEM from yesterday. An INDUSTRIAL LOVE POEM
C’ya later, alligator, after a while Crocodile.
It was a pleasure and a great way to squeeze the brain by extruding words, syllables and rhymes. GOOD WORK Y’ALL!

http://rscocoloco.blogspot.com

]]> By: Linda - Nickers and Ink http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/04/28/get-your-poem-on-24-2/comment-page-1/#comment-1399 Linda - Nickers and Ink Wed, 30 Apr 2008 13:00:21 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=137#comment-1399 This one is ABOUT jargon . . . . the kind I most want to avoid, but occasionally find my self using, when the darker side arises. <a href="http://nickersandinkblog.blogspot.com/2008/04/my-misspeak.html" rel="nofollow">MY MISSPEAK, at Nickers and Ink</a> Blessings all, Linda Nickers and Ink This one is ABOUT jargon . . . . the kind I most want to avoid, but occasionally find my self using, when the darker side arises.

MY MISSPEAK, at Nickers and Ink

Blessings all,
Linda
Nickers and Ink

]]> By: gkgirl http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/04/28/get-your-poem-on-24-2/comment-page-1/#comment-1397 gkgirl Wed, 30 Apr 2008 01:24:03 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=137#comment-1397 i work in plumbing and heating... http://itsacanadiangeek.blogspot.com/2008/04/post-poem-april-sixteen.html i work in plumbing and heating…

http://itsacanadiangeek.blogspot.com/2008/04/post-poem-april-sixteen.html

]]> By: Lirone http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/04/28/get-your-poem-on-24-2/comment-page-1/#comment-1396 Lirone Wed, 30 Apr 2008 01:08:33 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=137#comment-1396 I wrote a bout-rime sonnet using the rhyming set of words - it's called <a href="http://wordsthatsing.wordpress.com/2008/04/27/creativity_bout_rime/" rel="nofollow"> Creativity</a> I wrote a bout-rime sonnet using the rhyming set of words – it’s called

Creativity

]]> By: Rob Kistner http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/04/28/get-your-poem-on-24-2/comment-page-1/#comment-1395 Rob Kistner Tue, 29 Apr 2008 19:37:01 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=137#comment-1395 <a href="http://www.image-verse.com/outrageous" rel="nofollow"><i>We has met the enemy and he is us</i> - Pogo</a> We has met the enemy and he is us – Pogo

]]> By: gautami tripathy http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/04/28/get-your-poem-on-24-2/comment-page-1/#comment-1392 gautami tripathy Tue, 29 Apr 2008 14:06:49 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=137#comment-1392 <a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2008/04/ctrlaltdel-read-write-poemmonday-poetry.html" rel="nofollow">ctrl/alt/del</a> ctrl/alt/del

]]> By: cocoloco http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/04/28/get-your-poem-on-24-2/comment-page-1/#comment-1394 cocoloco Tue, 29 Apr 2008 12:58:24 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=137#comment-1394 Looks like there is a spiritual jargon going on. So, I went deep too. http://rscocoloco.blogspot.com Looks like there is a spiritual jargon going on.
So, I went deep too.
http://rscocoloco.blogspot.com

]]> By: Katherine http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/04/28/get-your-poem-on-24-2/comment-page-1/#comment-1393 Katherine Tue, 29 Apr 2008 11:33:47 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=137#comment-1393 <a href="http://lunaesia.livejournal.com/254880.html?mode=reply" rel="nofollow">On Baha'i Administration: A Sonnet of the Tongue-in-Cheek Variety</a> On Baha’i Administration: A Sonnet of the Tongue-in-Cheek Variety

]]> By: UL http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/04/28/get-your-poem-on-24-2/comment-page-1/#comment-1391 UL Tue, 29 Apr 2008 05:59:27 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=137#comment-1391 mine is here @ http://ul-typingaway.blogspot.com/2008/04/life.html mine is here @
http://ul-typingaway.blogspot.com/2008/04/life.html

]]> By: Christine http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/04/28/get-your-poem-on-24-2/comment-page-1/#comment-1382 Christine Tue, 29 Apr 2008 03:37:40 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=137#comment-1382 I wrote a bouts-rimés sonnet using the non-rhyming words listed in the post on sonnets, below. I also used jargon from sculpting, although I'm not a sculptor. Maybe now I'll become one since I read up on sculpy words. Thanks, Tom! <a href="http://mariacristina.wordpress.com/2008/04/28/sand-sculpting–-napowrimo-29/" rel="nofollow">sand sculpting</a> I wrote a bouts-rimés sonnet using the non-rhyming words listed in the post on sonnets, below. I also used jargon from sculpting, although I’m not a sculptor. Maybe now I’ll become one since I read up on sculpy words. Thanks, Tom!

sand sculpting

]]> By: art predator http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/04/28/get-your-poem-on-24-2/comment-page-1/#comment-1387 art predator Tue, 29 Apr 2008 01:40:44 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=137#comment-1387 here's a (short!) poem filled with local place names and creatures--certainly jargon to the uninitiated! "celebrate" http://artpredator.wordpress.com i have another one about where i'm from also filled with local place names that i will put up tomorrow here’s a (short!) poem filled with local place names and creatures–certainly jargon to the uninitiated!

“celebrate”

http://artpredator.wordpress.com

i have another one about where i’m from also filled with local place names that i will put up tomorrow

]]> By: Kate http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/04/28/get-your-poem-on-24-2/comment-page-1/#comment-1386 Kate Mon, 28 Apr 2008 23:34:38 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=137#comment-1386 Great idea! And a dangerous one for me. I love unusual words. Loving words is the definition of poet, I know, but it's a challenge to use oddball ones in ways that enhance and don't just confuse, you're absolutely right. I learned that in college, when I happily assumed a whole workshop would know what silage is. If you haven't happened to grow up around dairy cows, chopped corn in a silo isn't an every day sort of idea. :-) I'm hoping this one makes more sense. <a href="http://springfarmalmanac.wordpress.com/2008/04/28/flesh-and-spirit/" rel="nofollow">Here's</a>. some fun turning scientific classifications upside down. I made these up, but I tried to follow the Linnaean system. Following the other theme of the week, it's a sonnet. Great idea! And a dangerous one for me. I love unusual words. Loving words is the definition of poet, I know, but it’s a challenge to use oddball ones in ways that enhance and don’t just confuse, you’re absolutely right. I learned that in college, when I happily assumed a whole workshop would know what silage is. If you haven’t happened to grow up around dairy cows, chopped corn in a silo isn’t an every day sort of idea. :-) I’m hoping this one makes more sense.

Here’s. some fun turning scientific classifications upside down. I made these up, but I tried to follow the Linnaean system.

Following the other theme of the week, it’s a sonnet.

]]> By: T http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/04/28/get-your-poem-on-24-2/comment-page-1/#comment-1385 T Mon, 28 Apr 2008 18:43:55 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/?p=137#comment-1385 Here is one about tree structures... with both real and made up jargon: <a href="http://poetrydaily.wordpress.com/2008/04/18/excerpt-from-the-foliations-of-the-hortolobe/" rel="nofollow">Excerpt from the foliations of the hortolobe</a> Here is one about tree structures… with both real and made up jargon:
Excerpt from the foliations of the hortolobe

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