Comments on: get your poem on #16 http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/ Mon, 03 May 2010 01:01:02 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=abc hourly 1 By: dale http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/comment-page-1/#comment-835 dale Fri, 07 Mar 2008 14:58:13 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/#comment-835 This one was the intersection of a totally optional prompt (write in a different voice) and the repetition prompt, here: http://koshtra.blogspot.com/2008_03_01_archive.html#5394002876875880347 This one was the intersection of a totally optional prompt (write in a different voice) and the repetition prompt, here:

http://koshtra.blogspot.com/2008_03_01_archive.html#5394002876875880347

]]> By: Betherann http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/comment-page-1/#comment-833 Betherann Thu, 06 Mar 2008 22:09:29 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/#comment-833 A pantoum! http://codyisamazing.blogspot.com/2008/03/persona.html A pantoum!

http://codyisamazing.blogspot.com/2008/03/persona.html

]]> By: Lirone http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/comment-page-1/#comment-834 Lirone Thu, 06 Mar 2008 15:39:05 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/#comment-834 Ah - just realised I left my previous comment in the wrong place. Here's my first pantoum... <a href="http://wordsthatsing.wordpress.com/2008/03/06/a-wanderer-returns-pantoum-poem/" rel="nofollow">A wanderer returns</a> though I think I should have read the description a bit more carefully as I’ve done it backwards - lines 1&3 becoming 2&4… oops! Ah – just realised I left my previous comment in the wrong place. Here’s my first pantoum…

A wanderer returns

though I think I should have read the description a bit more carefully as I’ve done it backwards – lines 1&3 becoming 2&4… oops!

]]> By: Blythe http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/comment-page-1/#comment-814 Blythe Thu, 06 Mar 2008 06:53:50 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/#comment-814 Tom: Thanks for the great info on pantoums. I was completely unaware. I tried to write one, ended up pulling out my hair... ;) <a href="http://thisisonlytemporary.wordpress.com/2008/03/06/if-at-first-you-dont-succeed-2/" rel="nofollow">Check it out! Check it out!</a> Tom: Thanks for the great info on pantoums. I was completely unaware. I tried to write one, ended up pulling out my hair… ;)

Check it out! Check it out!

]]> By: Rob Kistner http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/comment-page-1/#comment-830 Rob Kistner Wed, 05 Mar 2008 19:43:09 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/#comment-830 <a HREF="http://imageverse2.wordpress.com/2008/03/05/hope/" rel="nofollow">Hope</A> Hope

]]> By: ...deb http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/comment-page-1/#comment-831 ...deb Wed, 05 Mar 2008 03:45:17 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/#comment-831 I gave a rhyming pantoum a try. Here is my rough draft: <a href="http://stoneymoss.blogspot.com/2008/03/debs-pantoum-for-read-write-poem.html" rel="nofollow"> Pantoum for Laundry Day Dreams</a>. This was fun to do, Tom. Thanks for inspiring me to write to a form I've never tried. I gave a rhyming pantoum a try. Here is my rough draft: Pantoum for Laundry Day Dreams.

This was fun to do, Tom. Thanks for inspiring me to write to a form I’ve never tried.

]]> By: Dave http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/comment-page-1/#comment-832 Dave Tue, 04 Mar 2008 23:50:37 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/#comment-832 <a href="http://www.vianegativa.us/2008/03/04/supposition/" rel="nofollow">Supposition</a> Supposition

]]> By: renkat http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/comment-page-1/#comment-815 renkat Tue, 04 Mar 2008 08:21:39 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/#comment-815 http://renpowellsmimes.blogspot.com/2008/03/nonce-form.html Not a pantoum, but a nonce form certainly related. I hope y'all will take a look . . . ren http://renpowellsmimes.blogspot.com/2008/03/nonce-form.html

Not a pantoum, but a nonce form certainly related.

I hope y’all will take a look . . .

ren

]]> By: Poetman http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/comment-page-1/#comment-824 Poetman Tue, 04 Mar 2008 06:29:41 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/#comment-824 Hello, I often use repetition in my poems - here is my latest one... <a href="http://1poet4man.wordpress.com/2008/03/03/its-a-shame-we-are-not-as-empowered-as-children/" rel="nofollow"> Its a shame we are not as empowered as children</a> Poetman Hello, I often use repetition in my poems – here is my latest one…

Its a shame we are not as empowered as children

Poetman

]]> By: Linda Jacobs http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/comment-page-1/#comment-829 Linda Jacobs Mon, 03 Mar 2008 20:33:45 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/#comment-829 For Journal Writing I gave my students the prompt: behind lace curtains, and I wrote a pantoum for it. Mine's a bit different, though, because I went back to the first stanza and took two lines from it for my last stanza. Also, I wasn't very good about copying the lines exactly; I kind of tweaked them to make them fit the poem better. <a href="http://lindaspoetry.blogspot.com/2008/03/pantoum.html" rel="nofollow">Pantoum</a> For Journal Writing I gave my students the prompt: behind lace curtains, and I wrote a pantoum for it. Mine’s a bit different, though, because I went back to the first stanza and took two lines from it for my last stanza. Also, I wasn’t very good about copying the lines exactly; I kind of tweaked them to make them fit the poem better.

Pantoum

]]> By: pepektheassassin http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/comment-page-1/#comment-826 pepektheassassin Mon, 03 Mar 2008 19:38:46 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/#comment-826 O well. I tried. (I forgot about the deja vu part). ICE http://myunclepepeksjournal.blogspot.com/2008/03/these-pictures-of-ice-on-car.html O well. I tried. (I forgot about the deja vu part). ICE

http://myunclepepeksjournal.blogspot.com/2008/03/these-pictures-of-ice-on-car.html

]]> By: Christine http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/comment-page-1/#comment-827 Christine Mon, 03 Mar 2008 15:58:26 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/#comment-827 Pantoums are fun–thanks Tom! <a href="http://mariacristina.wordpress.com/2008/03/03/dream-book-pantoum/" rel="nofollow">dream book pantoum</a> Pantoums are fun–thanks Tom!

dream book pantoum

]]> By: The Phantom http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/comment-page-1/#comment-828 The Phantom Mon, 03 Mar 2008 15:50:07 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/#comment-828 Now that I understand how this works, here is my post on the correct day :-) I chose a poem I’d written recently that repeated a single word. I’ll admit it’s a tad cheesy but I like the sentiment: <a href="http://isabelletry.blogspot.com/2008/02/just-8-dec-2007.html" rel="nofollow">Just</a> Now that I understand how this works, here is my post on the correct day :-) I chose a poem I’d written recently that repeated a single word. I’ll admit it’s a tad cheesy but I like the sentiment: Just

]]> By: AnthonyNorth http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/comment-page-1/#comment-813 AnthonyNorth Mon, 03 Mar 2008 09:27:46 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/#comment-813 I think I got into the spirit of this prompt. Here it is, I hope you enjoy. Hopefully it is an interesting piece. Here it is, I hope you enjoy :-) http://beyondtheblog.wordpress.com/2008/03/03/here-before-here-again I think I got into the spirit of this prompt.
Here it is, I hope you enjoy.
Hopefully it is an interesting piece.
Here it is, I hope you enjoy :-)

http://beyondtheblog.wordpress.com/2008/03/03/here-before-here-again

]]> By: Rethabile http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/comment-page-1/#comment-816 Rethabile Mon, 03 Mar 2008 06:20:43 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/#comment-816 Mary Evans' <a href="http://poefrika.blogspot.com/2008/03/poem-of-week-where-have-you-gone.html" rel="nofollow">poem</a>. And a good day to all. Mary Evans’ poem. And a good day to all.

]]> By: chicklegirl http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/comment-page-1/#comment-817 chicklegirl Mon, 03 Mar 2008 06:05:39 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/#comment-817 It wasn't that I chickened out over the challenge of writing in a structured form; rather, the idea of repetition hooked me in, took me in a completely different direction: to San Francisco. <a href="http://chicklegirl.blogspot.com/2008/03/san-francisco-thrice.html" rel="nofollow">San Francisco Thrice</a> It wasn’t that I chickened out over the challenge of writing in a structured form; rather, the idea of repetition hooked me in, took me in a completely different direction: to San Francisco.

San Francisco Thrice

]]> By: Leigh Lear http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/comment-page-1/#comment-818 Leigh Lear Mon, 03 Mar 2008 05:54:57 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/#comment-818 i didn't take on the form challenge, yet, but here is one with repeated lines. not sure its complete http://wordsfromanauthor.blogspot.com/2008/03/read-write-poem-prompt.html i didn’t take on the form challenge, yet, but here is one with repeated lines. not sure its complete

http://wordsfromanauthor.blogspot.com/2008/03/read-write-poem-prompt.html

]]> By: Tiel Aisha Ansari http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/comment-page-1/#comment-819 Tiel Aisha Ansari Mon, 03 Mar 2008 05:33:32 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/#comment-819 Here's mine: it's almost seasonal. <a href="http://knockingfrominside.blogspot.com/2008/02/leavened-bread.html" rel="nofollow">Leavened Bread</a> Here’s mine: it’s almost seasonal.

Leavened Bread

]]> By: sister AE http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/comment-page-1/#comment-821 sister AE Mon, 03 Mar 2008 04:44:02 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/#comment-821 I chose to repeat myself here: http://havingwrit.blogspot.com/2008/03/vacation-repeats.html I chose to repeat myself here:

http://havingwrit.blogspot.com/2008/03/vacation-repeats.html

]]> By: Noah http://readwritepoem.org/blog/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/comment-page-1/#comment-820 Noah Mon, 03 Mar 2008 04:38:08 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/#comment-820 <a href="http://noahthegreat.wordpress.com/2008/02/27/introversion/" rel="nofollow">Introversion</a> Introversion

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