read write prompt #44: rememberances and elegies

Poetry is about the grief. Politics is about the grievance.
–Robert Frost

Each culture has within its collective memory those moments which call for heightened awareness. Sometimes we remember historic events with great joy, but all too often the events trigger grief and mourning.

Poets often write ballads, songs, odes, epitaphs, elegies and elegiac verse to commemorate significant historic events, as they themselves view them, on a personal level. For an overview of occasional verse, you can refer to ‘get the lead out: mark your calendars!’, my article from a few weeks ago.

Poets (website for the American Academy of Poets) details the specifics of the elegy, a type of formal verse we inherited from the ancient Greeks that originally was a sad song or verse written in response to the death of a person or group. The Poetry Archive also has a simple explanation of the modern elegy you might like to read, with sample poems.

Over time, in English, the elegy has evolved into what we now call elegiac verse. Poets have disregarded the more formal elements that traditionally were expected, and have instead chosen to write poems about loss, grief and lament, both for specific people, groups — and even the environment — in a wide variety of forms. (For more information on this topic, as well as a list of example poems, you can read about elegiac verse at Poets.)

The prompt this week is to write an elegiac poem for a person, a group, an event, a pet or even for having the blues - anything you choose. The poem can be a tribute, a lament, a farewell song or a remembrance of a past event.

If you’d like to collaborate, you can try one of these suggestions:

  • With a partner, choose an event you both want to remember or mourn, and alternate verses.
  • Write eight lines about a specific person or event. Your partner also writes eight lines about the same subject. Mix the lines together randomly, then revise to make an integral poem.
  • Write a song. One poet can write the verse, the other the refrain.
  • Choose a painting about an historic event with another poet, and alternate your lines, writing to the painting.

~Christine.

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This week we will give you a little more time to compose your thoughts, to collaborate with a writing partner, to write your rememberences. Come back next Thursday, Sept. 18.

We are making a schedule change during this time, and if you can’t remember the specifics, don’t worry, we’ll leave a note in the sidebar for easy reference.

1. was silence « empty garden - September 10, 2008

[...] well into the shock, the numbness, the void was silence This weeks writing assignment: read write prompt #44: rememberances and elegies [...]

2. jorc - September 10, 2008

This was in the works, ready to post.

http://gameover709.wordpress.com/2008/09/10/was-silence/

jorc
empty garden

3. Read Write Poem - September 10, 2008

Be sure to come back, jorc, and post your comment w/ your link in the 9/18 GYPO.

4. explore the elegy : mygorgeoussomewhere.org - September 10, 2008

[...] 10, 2008 Over time, in English, the elegy has evolved into what we now call elegiac verse. Poets have disrega… addthis_url = ‘http%3A%2F%2Fmygorgeoussomewhere.org%2F2008%2F09%2F10%2Fexplore-the-elegy%2F’; [...]

5. Tiel Aisha Ansari - September 11, 2008

I’ll (probably) post something else for Monday. But this has to be posted today.

6. Lela - September 11, 2008

Well I might have some resolve from that really tough prompt. I got one together. I am really liking everyone writing out here.

7. A~Lotus - September 12, 2008

Tiel, thanks for posting the link to that poem. I’m going to save that! There are a few lines I really like.

8. Trinath - September 13, 2008

I have written this in last October but I think it would fit here.
http://musingsbytrinath.blogspot.com/2007/10/silent-witness.html

9. read write collaborate: our renku at Read Write Poem - September 14, 2008

[...] publication resources « read write prompt #44: rememberances and elegies [...]

10. Superstar « Raven’s Wing Poetry - September 14, 2008

[...] was written for Read Write Poem prompt #44: Elegies and Rememberances. [...]

11. ingiltere dil okulu - September 15, 2008

I am not surpr?s?ng to anything. But thanks..

12. totomai - September 15, 2008

http://filteredprecipitates.blogspot.com/2008/09/paper-planes.html

a friend who died so young

13. Brian - September 15, 2008

http://hummingbunny.wordpress.com/2008/09/13/when-at-last-we-rest/

“Fortune Lies”

14. Annamari - September 15, 2008

I started to write this after reading Gautami’s post about terrorism and their innocent victims. I open the newspaper today in my way to work and amid the Wall Street crisis and election blah, blah I am reading about another attack in the Delhi area.

This is about Israel, but it is meant for all the victims:
http://amidweststory.blogspot.com/2008/09/innocent-readwritepoem44.html

15. gautami tripathy - September 15, 2008

I know we are supposed to come back here on thursday. But I am stil posting it here:

http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2008/09/undead-for-eternity.html

I might write another one for Thursday.

16. Katherine - September 17, 2008

Sorry I haven’t really participated in a long time. The internet is broken at the school, and we think somebody’s waiting to see if we’ll bribe them to fix it more quickly. I’m buying time at a local youth center right now to check in with RWP and see how everyone’s doing (and let my dad know that I’m not dead and he doesn’t need to call the embassy to recover my body …), and I hope I’ll be able to get back in the swing of things soon!

Good luck with all your poeming, until then.

17. An act of remembrance | Stoney Moss - September 19, 2008

[...] gave the RWP community a prompt about elegies and remembrances a couple of weeks [...]

18. Read Write Poem - September 19, 2008

Hi Katherine,

Good to read you. It must be so frustrating to not have reliable connections. We’re glad you stopped by, though probably not as glad as your dad!!


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