read write prompt #32: reuse, recycle and revise!

I love recycling and was fascinated by January’s recent article about revising poetry, so here’s a quick recycling prompt: Take an old poem and revise it, either polish it or totally rework it — then share both versions with us! If you want, share your thoughts about the process, in your blog post (or here)!

Idea for collaboration
~ Swap poems with a fellow participant and rework each other’s poems!

Come back after the early morning hours next Monday and post a link to your recycled poem, or anything else you want to share, at the Get Your Poem On post that will be waiting for you!

~Juliet.

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Want to collaborate? Leave a note here and see if anyone else wants to hook up. Or contact one of the participants on their blog and see if they’re game.

Posted by Juliet on 06.18.2008 at 12:01 am
Posted Under: Juliet, Read Write Prompt

1. Rob Kistner - June 18, 2008

I think this prompt is one of great benefit to those who participate. Bravo!

I constantly revise, restructure, and ‘meld’ my poetry. Revise (edit) to continually improve the piece (hopefully), making it tighter and of greater impact — and restructure to create a different perspective on the subject matter, thus drawing two poems from the original single effort.

When I ‘meld’ I take parts of two different pieces I’ve written, each usually focusing on different subject matter, but each having a thread that can be consolidated to create a uniquely different poem.

These practices, for me, are great fodder for new work, and solid writing and conceptualizing exercise — especially in moments when your muse just isn’t offering up fresh inspiration.

2. nibblepoems - June 18, 2008

Love the idea of melding, Rob!

I’m going to try it with two pieces I am working on now, both of which mention the moon.

3. blythe - June 18, 2008

Excellent!

I’m tired of trying to revise my own work; anyone want to swap?

Leave a comment or email me at blytheblogger AT gmail DOT com.

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