First words this morning. I was going to write about the politic, thank you for a more pleasing challenge: Serendipity.

My tenth-grade students studied this poem a couple weeks ago and they loved it! Next year I’ll have them write their own beginning with the first line like you suggest here. What a great idea! Thanks!

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I like the prompt! Here’s my poem, called “When I Watch You”:

http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2008/06/04/when-i-watch-you/

When I shut my eyes…I ended up in the head of Graham Dalton from “Sex, Lies, and Videotape”. Weird, I know, but here it is.

-Nicole

Hi Donald and Nicole.

Be sure to come back next Monday when get your poem on #30 is posted. That’s where you comment and give us your link. (People will miss it here…this is the prompt part of the exercise.)

Oh. No problem. I’ll make sure I repost my link Monday.

-Nicole

Donald and Nicole, how wonderful, you’ve already written your poem for this prompt! Would you mind coming back on Monday and linking to the post entitled, “Get your poem on?” Thanks. That way everyone will be able to read what you’ve written. This post is to anounce the prompt and to comment or offer feedback on it.

Linda, that is very serendipitous, to use Donald’s word. I’d love to read what your students come up with.

I wanted to add here as an aside to everyone, too, that even if you start with this prompt as the opening line of your poem, you can always not use the line, just the images it conjurs.

always playing catchup on this prompt… but i love what you offer… hopefully i can catch up… lucille is another great poet, thank you for the link…

http://eatsbugs.wordpress.com/2008/06/05/beat-dream-6508/

Hope you like it.

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That poem……oh my, that poem.

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I posted a poem called Free that I wrote & now it’s not here…?

http://tinatrivett.blogspot.com/2008/06/free.html

eatsbugs & Tina,

Be sure to come back on Monday and post your link to the get your poem on #30 post. This is just for the prompt (but folks are clearly excited - woot - about this week’s prompt).

I just wrote a poem about watching (or not watching) my son–then I stopped by to see what the prompt was this week. I love the irony! Coincidence? Or is it…

jill, we’re all getting a similar vibe. We’re in tune with each other! Really, I don’t know, but I’ll call it serendipity. I hope you link your poem about your son.

I love Lucille Clifton–her work and the woman herself! I studied with her at UC Santa Cruz. If you ever get a chance to hear her read, go for it!

Thanks for bringing this moving poem to our attention!

And thanks for the excuse to post the poem I chose to put up!

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Wow, I actually tried the prompt! Just wanted to add that I had the honor of having a poem workshopped with Lucille Clifton once, years ago. It was the prize, along with $50, for a competition through the Poetry Society of London. She is such a talented poet.

Okay, here’s the link to my rough attempt this week:
The Thing’s Gone Wrong

Here’s my take:

http://beansthought.blogspot.com/2008/06/prompt-when-i-watch-you.html

My first “prompt” attempt, not my last:

http://nibblepoems.wordpress.com/poems/

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Here’s my poem…thanks for the prompt (It’s my first reply)
http://lfisher-writewhereiam.typepad.com/write_where_i_am/2008/06/and-more-about-the-garden.html