read write prompt #23: oil and vinegar

What happens when you pour balsamic vinegar over extra-virgin olive oil? The oil rests on top of the vinegar in the cruet, but if you shake the contents, you create a delicious salad dressing.

Prompt
For your poem this week, try combining two elements that don’t seem to go together at first glance. Here’s the process:
• Think of a happy memory, a moment that brings you joy. Write five to ten lines about that moment and then put the poem away.
• Write about a moment or time of distress, sadness or anger. Once again, write five to ten lines.
• Get out the first poem and combine it with the second by alternating lines.

Collaboration
Try alternating verses with a partner, each of you taking turns writing about opposing or differing emotions. Or one person could write about a joyous occasion, the other about a gloomier time. If you’d like to work with someone this week, you can leave a comment to this post. Remember, the time to link your poem starts Monday.

Other elements to combine
• Warmth and cold
• Fear and courage
• Beauty and ugliness
• Humor and seriousness

Patricia Lee Lewis, poet and workshop leader, introduced me to this type of poem, and she in turn learned about the process in an experimental writing workshop she attended by Carolyn Forché.

~Christine.

1. jan doble - April 17, 2008

I’m not sure this fits what you are describing, but perhaps it ties into the theme in some way…

http://moodsandmetaphors.blogspot.com/2008/04/maybe.html

2. Christine - April 17, 2008

jan,

We love that you want to share your poems! Post for sharing links to poems will be up on Monday. This post is for any comments you have about the prompt.

I’m looking forward to reading your poem.

3. cocoloco - April 18, 2008

Keeping up with the flow. 18 for 18 it’s been fun so far.
Lots to develop afterwards. Working and thinking is hard let alone writing in the midst of grease and dust. (is that a prompt?)
Anyway, check Basket Case.

All the best!
http://rscocoloco.blogspot.com

4. jan doble - April 18, 2008

oh no…i am so sorry

5. Christine - April 18, 2008

Jan, no worries! I’m glad the prompt inspired you to write. I’m looking forward to reading.

6. cocoloco - April 20, 2008

Hi, I used two prompts from the Watermark list.
# 2 Pineapple, salt chrysantemum 4-18
and Wood is sexy, something like that on 4-19
check it out….

7. UL - April 20, 2008

Here’s mine.

http://ul-typingaway.blogspot.com/2008/04/detachment.html

8. Bean - April 22, 2008

Here is my attempt:

http://beansthought.blogspot.com/2008/04/prompt-oil-and-water.html


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