Comments on: get your poem on #16 http://readwritepoem.org/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/ because poem is an action Wed, 20 Aug 2008 13:12:41 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5.1 By: dale http://readwritepoem.org/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/#comment-2438 dale Fri, 07 Mar 2008 14:58:13 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/#comment-2438 This one was the intersection of a totally optional prompt (write in a different voice) and the repetition prompt, here: http://koshtra.blogspot.com/2008_03_01_archive.html#5394002876875880347 This one was the intersection of a totally optional prompt (write in a different voice) and the repetition prompt, here:

http://koshtra.blogspot.com/2008_03_01_archive.html#5394002876875880347

]]> By: Betherann http://readwritepoem.org/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/#comment-2404 Betherann Thu, 06 Mar 2008 22:09:29 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/#comment-2404 A pantoum! http://codyisamazing.blogspot.com/2008/03/persona.html A pantoum!

http://codyisamazing.blogspot.com/2008/03/persona.html

]]> By: Lirone http://readwritepoem.org/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/#comment-2388 Lirone Thu, 06 Mar 2008 15:39:05 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/#comment-2388 Ah - just realised I left my previous comment in the wrong place. Here's my first pantoum... <a href="http://wordsthatsing.wordpress.com/2008/03/06/a-wanderer-returns-pantoum-poem/" rel="nofollow">A wanderer returns</a> though I think I should have read the description a bit more carefully as I’ve done it backwards - lines 1&3 becoming 2&4… oops! Ah - just realised I left my previous comment in the wrong place. Here’s my first pantoum…

A wanderer returns

though I think I should have read the description a bit more carefully as I’ve done it backwards - lines 1&3 becoming 2&4… oops!

]]> By: Blythe http://readwritepoem.org/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/#comment-2368 Blythe Thu, 06 Mar 2008 06:53:50 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/#comment-2368 Tom: Thanks for the great info on pantoums. I was completely unaware. I tried to write one, ended up pulling out my hair... ;) <a href="http://thisisonlytemporary.wordpress.com/2008/03/06/if-at-first-you-dont-succeed-2/" rel="nofollow">Check it out! Check it out!</a> Tom: Thanks for the great info on pantoums. I was completely unaware. I tried to write one, ended up pulling out my hair… ;)
Check it out! Check it out!

]]> By: Rob Kistner http://readwritepoem.org/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/#comment-2328 Rob Kistner Wed, 05 Mar 2008 19:43:09 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/#comment-2328 <a HREF="http://imageverse2.wordpress.com/2008/03/05/hope/" rel="nofollow">Hope</A> Hope

]]> By: ...deb http://readwritepoem.org/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/#comment-2288 ...deb Wed, 05 Mar 2008 03:45:17 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/#comment-2288 I gave a rhyming pantoum a try. Here is my rough draft: <a href="http://stoneymoss.blogspot.com/2008/03/debs-pantoum-for-read-write-poem.html" rel="nofollow"> Pantoum for Laundry Day Dreams</a>. This was fun to do, Tom. Thanks for inspiring me to write to a form I've never tried. I gave a rhyming pantoum a try. Here is my rough draft: Pantoum for Laundry Day Dreams.

This was fun to do, Tom. Thanks for inspiring me to write to a form I’ve never tried.

]]> By: Dave http://readwritepoem.org/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/#comment-2283 Dave Tue, 04 Mar 2008 23:50:37 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/#comment-2283 <a href="http://www.vianegativa.us/2008/03/04/supposition/" rel="nofollow">Supposition</a> Supposition

]]> By: renkat http://readwritepoem.org/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/#comment-2245 renkat Tue, 04 Mar 2008 08:21:39 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/#comment-2245 http://renpowellsmimes.blogspot.com/2008/03/nonce-form.html Not a pantoum, but a nonce form certainly related. I hope y'all will take a look . . . ren http://renpowellsmimes.blogspot.com/2008/03/nonce-form.html

Not a pantoum, but a nonce form certainly related.

I hope y’all will take a look . . .

ren

]]> By: Poetman http://readwritepoem.org/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/#comment-2234 Poetman Tue, 04 Mar 2008 06:29:41 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/#comment-2234 Hello, I often use repetition in my poems - here is my latest one... <a href="http://1poet4man.wordpress.com/2008/03/03/its-a-shame-we-are-not-as-empowered-as-children/" rel="nofollow"> Its a shame we are not as empowered as children</a> Poetman Hello, I often use repetition in my poems - here is my latest one…

Its a shame we are not as empowered as children

Poetman

]]> By: Linda Jacobs http://readwritepoem.org/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/#comment-2204 Linda Jacobs Mon, 03 Mar 2008 20:33:45 +0000 http://readwritepoem.org/2008/03/02/get-your-poem-on-16/#comment-2204 For Journal Writing I gave my students the prompt: behind lace curtains, and I wrote a pantoum for it. Mine's a bit different, though, because I went back to the first stanza and took two lines from it for my last stanza. Also, I wasn't very good about copying the lines exactly; I kind of tweaked them to make them fit the poem better. <a href="http://lindaspoetry.blogspot.com/2008/03/pantoum.html" rel="nofollow">Pantoum</a> For Journal Writing I gave my students the prompt: behind lace curtains, and I wrote a pantoum for it. Mine’s a bit different, though, because I went back to the first stanza and took two lines from it for my last stanza. Also, I wasn’t very good about copying the lines exactly; I kind of tweaked them to make them fit the poem better.

Pantoum

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